ArHi FF:9:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Mouktika

@Mouktika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Hi Aquiline I feel so happy to know that you loved my views thank u.i just want to share my feelings which u create in my heart and mind while reading each chapter but if someone considers it to be good its making me feel happy.

I liked the chapter a lot.all they have to do is to talk and share their worries with each other may be it will take some time for them to come that close. trust they have but to show it without their ego is difficult.

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Great narration! Loved it Lin!! Certainly the first lord is a mystery that only the First Lady can solve!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

so general succeeded in driving a wedge

awww do something to bring them closer pls

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Vallon

@Vallon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

amazing update!

Love the fact that even when she is mad at her Lordy she misses him n his appearance around her! Has the Lordy finally realised khushi is innocent not at fault but the fault lies on d general only? Awww he could guess why she lock the door! It's a beautiful sight to realise Lordy ASR can't control his desire and care for his wife. And I love this phrase said by khushi 'I cannot understand you...One moment you hurt me...and another...you try to heal me...' Loveee the part where he kissed her lightly and whispered 'Let me protect you, Kushi...' And his possessiveness for her along with care to protect her just mesmerise one!

Can't wait for another beautiful update <3

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Sheebaaier

@Sheebaaier

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

I am not happy that she remembered the general when arnav was kissing her

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Wonderful one😊...strange ...y did she faint??did he do something??

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Gayathri_ipkknd

@Gayathri_ipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Wow last two chapters were awesome. first of all thanks to general. cos of him we got to know a truth about the curse- how she may die if they made love. but that's really sad. last chapter was too good even though it was perplexing at the end. i couldn't understand how she fainted. but the one thing that made me happy was Arnav's proposal of coming to industry. atleast they would be together the whole day.
ps- did i really read that ch 208 will be updated on 22, which is tomorrow. OMG, Thank you thank you thank you so much.

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dpriyad

@dpriyad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

khushi wants to fulfill her dauterly duties and i have a feeling tommorow in the pretense of taking her to the industry he is going to take hr to the village😃

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

wonderful chapter. loved it. am wondering where lord arnav went all day. poor man is too disturbed by the general. and the general eyeing khushi in front of the family disgusting. hope arnav is able to protect khushi always.

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

I do hope that you are feeling better ...

As for the updates, they've been well-written.

Khushi is bound to feel perhaps alone amongst other things ... what with her sister being away from her and being at their maternal home ... then her husband being absent, even though they've had their issues and a recent one that that took place in the morning ... to top it all off the General and his over kindness which there is no need for really.

That was a little emotional actually. The scene between husband and wife. Her feeling a sense of relief that it was her husband at the door ... his anger on her bolting the door ... her indifference ... his anger ... her laying there hurt and in pain as a result of her husband ...him trying to pacify her ...