Arshi SS :: Hey, Daaddyy!!Last Part up (PAGE 56 ) (20/1) *Complete* - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME !!! I read all the 7 parts in one go !
Such a sweet SS ! All about a relationship between a father n daughter. A relationship about which the father didnt know existed !!

PATERNITY TEST ! ... Suggested by Jennifer ! My god !

Jennifer is just like Khushi... Confident, carefree, independent, doesnt mince words !

How ARNAV turned into ASR and back to being ARNAV !

Jenny asked him questions which he didnt know how to answer or didnt have an answer ! Intelligent child like her mother.. Khushi Gomes.

Khushi Gomes and Arnav Singh Raizada studied in NEW YORK together and became close and were like that for four long years !
They parted ways, though Arnav initiated the topic not knowing Khushi was pregnant with his child !

Now after 8yrs Jenny shows up bringing out the fatherly love in Arnav. Now Arnav wanted Khushi and Jenny to be back together with him and live like a proper family !

Persuation... COFFEE MILEGI !!!??!! ... ( never heard that... Always cheeni milegi, aata milega, etc ) ... Anyways anything chalega persuation ke time !

So in the end after alot of questions and answers and alot of persuation, clearing the cloud of doubts... Arnav and Khushi sealed their relationship and promises with which started as a slow one,turning into a passionate one... A Kiss !

First it was just Khushi - Jennifer, then for few days... Arnav - Jennifer... And in the end happily ever after it became, Arnav - Khushi - Jennifer !!

Loved the SS...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story. Loved Jennifer. Loved d father daughter duo
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Posted: 11 years ago


After reading the first 2 chapters I had bookmarked this story, in fact my email box was full of emails related to this story, I decided to delete it from my watched topic the day you have posted it in the index, my email box it's really grateful to you 😆

I was going to sleep when I remembered that I have yet to finish it, and here I Am 😃 2am in the morning 😆

Okay this is the best and I mean it, story with Arnav and his daughter, the best things about your story are Jennifer is like ASR but her heart is just like her mom, you had given a lot space to Jennifer and Arnav which normally author forgot to do, then it was really simple, I love the way Arnav and Jennifer talked on the simple things and bonded with each other doing simple silly things, and the plus point you hadn't dragged it.

This is just like a bad night story, I will call it like this, something to read before going to sleep, it makes you smile, laugh, a little of dhak dhak and left you with the sensation that outside in this world there are indeed love stories like this one.

But I'm little sad, yeah a little one, when it ended I was left like this "already ended"

But I don't want to ask for an epilogue, if you don't feel like writing it, and plus because this story it's about Jennifer and her mission on finding her Daaddyy and I think her mission was completed, at the end she got her Daddy.

So thank you for this lovely and heartwarming story.

Brilliantly written

P.S. thanks for not making Jennifer a second ASR, which normally people do, they turn the kids in ASR, but a worse version of ASR. Areh kids are innocent and smart not business tycons.

Edited by Preet.Kc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww... cute n sweet

loved it yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow!!...such a beautiful story!!...
loved it so much...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it all in one go!!! Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story!!!! Totally different!!! Where is khushi?? What about Jennifer s grandpa? Where is he?? Y hasn't Arnav thought of contacting khushi after the confirmation of paternity test?? Lots of queries😊
Waiting to c what happens next... Gud work!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written!!! Liked the end!!!! Thanks!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
u know what such a amazi g story i read i read all in one go amazing yar

no wrds to explain of ur wrds...

that feelings wow ... amazing i love ir ff yar

when u r writing any wrk thn pls pm me dear pla it ia a big req ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
iska epilogue abhi tk nahi aaya

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