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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
nyc update...
rey with his parents came to meet smriti...
rey ne bohth bada jhatka diyaa...
m soo happy finally smriti accepted rey...
ye rey ithna shock kyu huva..
update soon..
thnxx fr d pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
amazing update
rey toh apne parents ke sath kriya ka haath magne aa gayi ...rey toh bada fast nikla yr...rey bichari kriya ko toh bta dete...😆 priya ne kriya ko beti kaha ...so swt of her

kriya ki mom maan gayi...thnk god...
rey ko toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki Jhansi ki rani ne usse BETA kaha... i think rey ne kriya ko bathrobe mein dekha hai

KR romance...jaldi nxt part update kar de yr
Edited by glmorous_diva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Oh my my maanuu...
Mein toh fida ho gayi d way rey convinced simrti...
Officially kriya ka haath mang liya...
Waah!! Mere cuite pie.
Kriya kya karrr rahi h room mein i think ro rahi hogi khusi ke ansu...
Ya phir khusii ke mare dance karr rahi hogi...heheh
maanu jaldi update de dena next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Amazing part..
loved it..
smriti finally maan gyi..
waiting for d next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
wow awesome storyline...!
can't wait to the next part...!
amazingly written...!
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awesome

Ahmazig

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved it <3

Update Soon ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
we r waiting fr next part plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: multi26media

we r waiting fr next part plz update soon

sorry Sweety...my 10th exams are started so please cooperate...will update as soon as they finish...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Part-4

He opened the door of kriya's room and was astonished to see his angel standing in front of mirror fidgeting with the dori of her kurti...her backless kurti...showing her beautiful toned back...her yummy yummy skin. His eyes measured each and every corner of her exposed skin while his strong imagination power wandered to unexplainable heights. He has himself tied her dori and seen this wonderful sight before but that was 8 years ago. He is dying to touch her again. Love has some side effects known as lust. He want to explore her skin with his hands and most importantly his lips. He want to live his fantacies. He want to crush her...nibble her...hear her moaning his name. He want his body in the place of that stupid kurti giving her warmth and showing her what pleasure really means. He want her kissable lips under his. He want her lips to be swollen by him.

He didn't even tried once to move his lusty eyes off her. Actually he was so unable to do that. He involantarily closed the door behind him making kriya register his presence and turn around only to see him closing the distance between them.


Kr- aap...yha...?

Her words made him gain his senses back and stop in his tracks. He gulped down his fantacies and desires.

Rey- wo...main...aunty ne tumhe bulane bheja tha.

He said looking anywhere but at her. He just couldn't afford to look at her, loose his senses and make her uncomfortable.

Kriya underdstood his nervousness at making her uncomfortable and smiled inwardly.

Kr- help nhi karoge...

She said and turned around playing hide and seek with her hair falling on her back. She also longed for his touch with the same desire as his. She had a strong fantacy world herself in which rey made love to her on daily basis. Girls never admit but the oh so unacknowledged fact is that they dream of this more than boys. They love this feeling much more than boys do. They want this pleasure much more than boys desire to give.

He was intially surperised by her words and action but soon understood that their feelings were mutual...their wants were mutual...their needs were mutual. He smiled at the thought and moved slowly towards the invinting feminine figure standing with her back in front of him.

He closed the distance to the maximum level and slowly, very slowly moved her hair in front of her shoulder for a clearer view. He held the dori and streached it with his one hand while his other hand traced kriya's waist from front and held it pulling her more into him. He saw her closing her eyes with hitched breath from the reflection in the mirror. Taking it as the sign to proceed he placed his lips on her skin. Calling it delicious would be understatement of the year. His lips traced each and every nook and corner of her exposed back starting from down and moving upwards taking his own time, relishing the taste properly, slowly. He left the dori and tightened his grip on her waist making her breath go more uneven.

Unsatisfied with the pleasure, he kissed her shoulder and moved the kurti down it exposing more area to relish. With this action of his she turned around providing him a new dynesty to conquer. His one hand was still resting on her waist but this time it was on the backside while she placed both her hands on his chest. He kissed her forehead showing his respect for her. He moved down and kissed her cheeks showing his trust. He moved up a bit and kissed her clossed eyes showing his love.

She was waiting for him to taste her trembelling lips. She wanted to see the passion now. She wanted to feel the desire now and finally after measuring all the layout of her face with his lips, she felt him take her lips in his. She felt it slow and syncronized just like waltz without the movement of their limbs, just their lips. She always loved this dance form and today she fell for it more but soon she realised that he has some other plans today.

He initiated it slow but as soon as he felt her reciprocating , the animal within him woke up. He tried keeping it slow but failed miserably ,awaking more passion and need. His free hand accompnied the other on the waist making random designs on both her exposed as well as draped in cloth back. Oh...how he hated the length of this kurti...he cant even get inside it. He kissed her ferociously and she recprocated but he was far more dominating. He bit her lower lip making her moan and giving him entry in her mouth. Their tongues danced, not some slow waltz which their lips were playing, but the passionate and strong tango. He nibbled her, bit her, suck her. He fed on her, like a lion eating his prey. He was no mood to stop but cursing his respiratory machanism, he left her now swollen lips. Replacing her hair on her back, he started planting wet kisses all over her neck.

She fred her head back giving him more space for his task. She felt a hard love bite somewhere between her shoulder and neck. Oh...this was going to definitely leave a mark later. She moaned his name only to make him go more wild. His kisses turned more desiring and love bites increased in number. Moans and uneven breathing had filled the air in the room.

Suddenly they heard someone on the door making them jump apart. They saw a girl standing their with her hands placed on her eyes repeating "maine kuch nhi dekha".


Oh how much he hated himself for this...he cursed himself. Why hadn't he locked the door. Why did just he closed it...ahhh...why...why...why???

Rey- mish ankhe khol...

Rey said with an irritated expression while kriya just stood there embarassed.

Rey- kriya don't worry...she is my sis Misha.

He said understanding her while misha opened her eyes with a naughty grin on her face.

Misha- wrong timing I think.

Rey- you think that...

Rey said stressing the word "think".

Kriya- toh tum ho misha...heard a lot about you...tab tum sirf 10 saal ki thi...kitni badi ho gyi ho...nice to meet you.

Kriya said smiling while diverting the topic.

Misha- nice to meet you too...bhai ne toh kaan kha liye the aapke bare me bta-bta ke. Btw main pehle car me phone dhundh rhi thi and pta nhi kitni der se bahar khadi hu but aap dono toh aa hi nhi rhe the...so I thought main khud bulalu but sorry to disturb you.

Misha said making kriyaansh blush.

Rey- hum aa rhe hai...tu ja.

Misha- ok...but jaldi aana and agar nhi aao toh don't forget to lock the door bhai.

Misha said while going and added a wink in the end making Kriya turn to darker shades of red.

Kriya- abh...kya...umm?

Kriya said while stammering and counting the tiles of the floor after misha departed. Rey closed the distance while kriya's eyes closed involantrily. Her breath hitched when she felt his breath on her face. Soon she felt her dori's streach and tied up. She opened her eyes at this and saw rey going back with a smirk of victory on his face.

Rey- dori rhe gyi thi...

He said making her feel emarassed at her thoughts. She turned around looking at him through the mirror and smiling shyly.

He closed the distance again and whispered "beautiful" in her ear first kissing and then biting it at the end and then left the room with a huge grin leaving a crimson turned kriya behind.

Ohk that's it for now.

I wrote such romance for the first time so please give honest review.

Do comment and tell how it turned out.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Lovely updt
Loved it
Kr romance
Den misha entry
Amazingly written
Cnt sn
Edited by Crazy_Arshi - 11 years ago

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