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Congrats on writing your first ever FF, I'm so glad you decided to post this on the forum.
Love the fact you decided to continue this story from the kidnapping track from the serial, I hated the kidnapping storyline and I'm glad you shortened yours.
Just read all the chapters, each update was a brilliant read.
So Arnav is still misunderstanding Khushi and poor Khushi I'm feeling so sorry for her.
I'm hating Shyam and I can't believe the disgusting man actually kissed Khushi and Arnav did not even punch him.
Can't wait for Arnav to find out the truth and then I expect a full redemption track with Arnav feeling remorseful and guilty please, pretty please.
I'm loving the story and I so enjoy any redemption type off stories and yours fits perfectly,
Thanks for the PM,
Eagerly waiting for the next part xx
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