Smitar's: Marrying Khushi#3 Part 24 Pg 105 (4/12)Link to #4 on Pg 1 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
khushi is hilarious
loved it when she
fainted seeing him undress
amazing do update soon👏👏⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Katate nahi katate haine yeh din ye rat...
kehani the tum se jo dil ke battt...
Loo aja maine kehati huuu...☺️

Smitajiii update dooo... Update dooo... update dooo...🤪🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Arnav playing Khushi for all he is worth and the sensations becoming too much for Khushi are just hilarious! He heard a thud. He whipped his head around to see Khushi lying crumpled on the floor... such an anti-climax! His immediate concern for her wellbeing is heart-warming, though. Must say that, if this is going to be her reaction each time she sees him in his bare-chested glory, an intimate relationship stands no hope of even beginning... just imagine her state if he is completely nude! He had imagined her in his bed often enough. He had dreamed of her in his bed. But she had been conscious then! Arnav should know by now that being in a relationship with Khushi isn't going to be as simple or as normal as any other relationship... OTT and unexpected reactions are a byword in her life! "Nanga ghoom raha hai! Ganda bachha!" She religiously averted her eyes, albeit with great difficulty... a childlike exclamation that reflects her shyness and embarrassment... one that contrasts with her adult desire for him... she can't help but be drawn to the glorious sight of his muscled torso. Khushi considering Arnav shameless and he turning the tables on her by putting the blame on her for finding herself in that embarrassing situation is very amusing. Also love the fact that she does not back down from her claim that he is a coward for having run off' without having spoken to her after the proposal. She fumed as much as a girl trapped by his hot eyes and the eye-catching vision of his male torso... his shirtless male torso... might fume! Heat from his bare chest was singeing her skin... Khushi tried to push him away, but the moment her hands touched the bare skin of his chest, she was lost... Khushi tried to push him away, but her fingers ended up tracing the muscles of his chest lovingly... taking care not to look down at his body. He was bad for her health... ASR folded his arms across his bare chest, hampering her view... Khushi watched his chest vanishing under the cloth with regret... the constant refrain of how fascinating Khushi finds Arnav's hot body adds to the humor! Otherwise Jiji would have had to scrape her melted form off the floor, Khushi thought... good one, but Khushi dear, pray tell why Jiji would be in ASR's room in the first place! Really clever of ASR to ask her if she dislikes a particular part of his body... what a way to draw her attention toward it! No one could find fault with his sinful lips, especially when they curve into a smirk! "I will pull them one day." An innocent admission that she would be in close proximity to him in the future, too! Khushi's fingers tingled to pull the strands out, one at a time, making him howl in pain! What a militant bride! ASR using his tongue to seduce Khushi further leaves the poor girl trembling... her body betrays her while her mind tries to fight against his practiced moves. She avoiding his scorching kiss by somehow finding the physical and mental strength to push him away is adorable... the sensory overload was getting too much for her! Just love how a conversation with Khushi usually leaves Arnav groping in the dark: "You are such a good brother!" she exclaimed. ASR stared at her. When did Akash and NK enter their conversation? "You are marrying me so that Akashji can marry Jiji, aren't you?" Khushi asked, her eyes soft, liquid with emotion and bhaichaara. "Uugh?" ASR was capable of little else at that moment... Now he understood why Buaji frequently hit herself on her head when talking of Khushi! Brilliant! Khushi's convoluted reasoning is a treat, and ASR milks it for all he is worth! ...like an eager bird waiting for a worm... an apt simile, though she seems a more apt worm caught by the cunning bird, ASR! And Jiji and Akashji would have to wait and wait and wait... maybe till their teeth fell off and they grew bald... what an image! Khushi working out things in her mind and resigning herself to be the sacrifice, not only for her Jiji but also for the Rakshas, is a 🤣 moment! Her innocent take on the effect Arnav's proximity has on her body is funny yet heart-warming. Her wistfulness at the thought that she might not have the kind of love-filled relationship that her sister and brother-in-law are to have, and Arnav's silent promise to shower her with all the love in his heart once she is his is a poignant moment in the midst of all the humor. He knows that if he tries to show his love to her now, it might prove to be overwhelming and might just spook her! He can't afford that after all the work he has put in to get her just where he wants her. He took the dupatta and held it up in his hand. Wind blew the flimsy cloth against his bare chest... your tongue-in-cheek take on all the times this happened in the show, Smita? Khushi trying to assert her independence is cute: "But I will walk wherever I want, whenever I want!" she proclaimed. "You are not my husband yet, Shri Arnav Singh Raizada!" A smirking ASR giving Khushi carte-blanche to do with him as she pleases once they are married gives rise to some interesting scenarios in my ever-fertile mind! Totally loved this update... it is such updates that help me to keep sane after a horrible day at work! So, thank you, Smita, for the subtle humor you infuse your stories with.

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Posted: 11 years ago
😳
update ane wala hai kya?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devilindisguise

😳
update ane wala hai kya?



Going to write now.😃

Smita

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smitar



Going to write now.😃

Smita


I love you damm ittt🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
congo on new thread
awesome one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply superb
Hope there r some more questions
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Posted: 11 years ago
The picture of the rakshas walking on unsteady feet and spouting incomprehensible poetry while she danced on the stage before him flashed through her mind.
🤣
Loved Arnav's comment about Khushi being able to see his bare chest whenever he wants.😆
Arnav is so adorable trying to lessen Khushi's worries and fears
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow smita, that was super duper - iam pretty excited for the engagement - lovely update smita
rashmi, 🤗

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