ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED)

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

this story has managed to seduce the one in the painting the one outside it and all others reading this!

stupid sentence but what to do i am totally mesmerized:)

congrats on another new thread and desperately waiting for chap 8

i loved after all the emotional turmoil arnav was facing he came logical and started thinking science brilliant ...

looking forward to read more!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Finally she decided wat she wants. . nd arnav. . .aaawww my baby is fighting for her his love. . . waitng fo nxt parts . .

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koisk

@koisk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Of all the possibilities I have thought of khushi, this was no where near them. I mean curses and para normal activity really? And even after that reading through the two chapters never once have I felt that this is just crazy. The way you wrote and described the events madeitso real and ididbelieve each and every word written by you... I think that just proves what a good writer you are, hats off to you.👏

This just proves that you don't have to have unwanted violence , sex or graphic material to make a story worth reading... Just the basic emotions that can be portrayed beautifully like how you do is enough to make it a hit. Always a fan of you work, and great going. Once again hatsoff.👏

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Wow, just dumbfounded by all of it! The genius, ideas, power of the words, homework you have put into it, great!!

I know it cannot be this simple but I can't help take a guess here, as Payal's hate from all her soul put her inside,can Arnav's soulful of love bring her outside?

Great update :)

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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Loved the story...it's the fighting spirit I like the most ...even when it sound impossible he is ready to fight...

I guess curse has something to do with her innocence ..

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

wow awesome updates.. salute to both arnav and khushi and the love between them... khushi for fighting something like this for more than a century now and arnav a doctor by profession is trying his very best to bring khushi out of a curse of a jealous sister... loved the updates... 😃

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Juhi you are an excellent writer yet scientist too..

You did lot of research on paranormal events and you even find out the parapsychology Institure in UK.. Hats of to your passion on writing 👏

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

fantastic update..arnav is trying so hard to remove khushi's curse..

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supervin76

@supervin76

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Wish there was a 'Love' button next to the Like one. Because I feel so much more than merely 'like' every time I read an update on this story. Simply superb and amazingly we'll written. Your flow of language, the way you tell a profound story in a simplistic way is simply mindblowing. This update somehow made the story more real and believable. Simply awesome or'epic' as my son loves to say. Can't wait for the next update.

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pal_24

@pal_24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

had my semester exams so read the last three chapters in a row and god it blew my mind away completely...Its amazing how you come up with such brilliant concepts and narrate them in such a captivating manner that I keep wanting more of it...the entire time I was reading the last three chapters I felt likeI was transported back to my childhood when i used to love reading fairy tales with princes and princesses and witches and enchantments ...and my favourite part of every story back then was when the prince saved the princess and they lived happily eve after...so now that arnav is with khushi in her fight against the curse can't wait to see how he helps her break the curse and they're on their way to happily ever after!!!