NEW SS: Ardent Desires - Sneak Peak of Pt 9 Pg 142 (31/12) - - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb and brilliant teaser,

Wow Arnav feeling jealous about the date, very interesting.

Eagerly waiting for the update,

Thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
what is that...how will my arnie feel
Edited by ranogill - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story.
Arnav deserves this.
Hope Nk will bring smile in her face.
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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly waiting for next update ...
continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting precap
now only i read part 1 & sneak peak
sry 4 reading it late
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Teasers was just dhak dhak.
Can't wait f update.
Tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, amazing update! Their current situation will force Arnav and Khushi to visit the past and re-evaluation their suppressed feelings! It's going to be awkward and jealousy will surface. It would be fun to see Arnav's jealousy and how will he handle to it all!! I'm expecting a lot of intense scenes.
BTW, the teaser is too good. Looking forward to the update! Thanks for your time and PM!
Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



Part 2

Nandakishore: Nani I was thinking to ask Khushi for a Dinner tonight.

Arnav choked the Orange juice and started coughing badly gaining everyone's attention. Anjali started caressing his back to make him feel better.

Anjali: Chotte? What is wrong?

Arnav: I am fine.

He lied and started having his breakfast silently. Seeing him better, Nani and NK continued their talks.

Nani: Take her to a Chinese restaurant. She loves Chinese food.

Nandakishore: How about Moonlight Chinese Hub?

Anjali: That's a best place for couples. The candle light dinner in the Open lawn, soft romantic music at the background, everything adds to its charm. Take her there.

Nandakisore : Okay then let me make a quick call to her and inform her this.

He left and everyone else happily smiled except one who was still trying to figure out what exactly was wrong with him? Why was his inner side pricking his self control so much today knowing SHE was going on an official date with his brother tonight?

Anjali: Chotte some more Juice?

Arnav: No Thanks Di. I am done.

He got up from his chair while everyone else looked at him.

Anjali: But you even didn't eat anything properly.

Arnav: I am not hungry. I will have something at office. Don't worry. Bye.

He left picking his suit from the Chair and then walking from the Living room to take his Laptop bag which was lying on the Couch. He saw Nandakishore was sitting there and talking over the phone.

Nandakishore: So I will pick you by 08:00 then. See you soon. Bye.

He smiled while cutting the call and Arnav who heard all this just remained silent. She agreed? For a Dinner date? Then what was so wrong with her when he had invited her for the same when they were getting married? Why did she deny him ??

"No Arnavji, Aaj humaari Mehndi hai.Hum kaise aa sakte hai?"

"Okay then postpone the function for tomorrow. Simple"
"Arnavji. Har rasam ka ek mahatva hota hai. Aur aap hi ne toh kahan tha ki aap saari rasmein puri karenge? Aisi ki jaati hai rasmein puri?"

He sighed in frustration for promising her something like this. Arnav Singh Raizada was so annoyed of such extended marriage rituals.

"Fine. The Mehndi function is in the evening and I am asking you for Dinner. I will pick you late if you want"
"But how can I eat when my hands will be full of Mehndi? Its not a good idea Arnavji. Lets plan it some other time? May be after marriage"

"After Marriage we wont waste time in dinning out Khushi. Everything will be confined to the four walls of our bedroom where we will spend our whole day and whole night romancing with each other."

"Chi. Arnavji. You are a Besharam"
"I will show you how much Besharam I am when we get married. So it's a Deal Khushi, we are having a Romantic Candle light dinner soon after our wedding"

Nandakishore had finished his call by now and he came to Arnav with his Laptop Bag.

Nandakishore: Nannav, you seem to be lost somewhere. Anything I should know?

Arnav came out of his memories and nodded a Plain NO. He picked his laptop bag from NK and was left the house.

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Hotel Moonlight Chinese Hub

Khushi and Nandakishore were sitting opposite to each other from past 10 minutes. Khushi was busy engrossed in checking the Menu while Nandakishore was only observing her. Looked like she was Alien to Chinese dishes. Why was she taking such a long time to decide what she wished to eat when Chinese was her favourite. ? Khushi on the other hand was hardly deciding. She was lost in the Menu card as if she had to study the prices of every dish her, memorize it and later tell it to someone.

The waiter came to them and asked them what order they would like to place and Nandakishore snapped his fingers to get her attention.


Khushi: Uhh. One Black Coffee without sugar.

NK: Coffee? Khushi we are here for dinner. Whats wrong?

Khushi then realized what she was doing. She had totally forgotten this that she was with Nandakishore and not anyone else whom she was missing probably.

Khushi: Ohh haan. Sorry. Hongkong Noodles for me.

Nandakishore: That's it? You sure?

Khushi: Yeah. I am not much hungry.

Nandakishore immediately remember his Nannav's dialogue of today morning at the breakfast table when he too said the same and got up to leave. NK placed his order too and the waiter left.

Nanadakishore: Whats wrong Khushi? You seem to be lost? Are you not comfortable with this Dinner? Was it too early for me to ask you out?

Khushi: No. Never think that. I am just .

She tried to speak something that she felt but words never supported her and she gave up.

Nandakishore: Khushi are you happy with this? I know it must be difficult for you to get a new bond with the same family but I think everyone has to move on some day or the other. Are you upset about how complicated things would be if you come in that house becoming my wife? Let me tell you, I am not planning to stay here. I have my business set up in South Africa and we can shift there.

Khushi: I know.

This was the only reply from her and she once again started fiddling with the spoons on the table while Nandakishore just tried analyzing what was wrong with her.

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Sophie: Sir, your Black Coffee without sugar"

Sophie was Arnav's Secretary who placed his Coffee on the table and asked him if he needed anything else.

Arnav: Send NK to my Cabin.

He was engrossed in work and didn't remember that NK was not at office now.


Sophie: Sir, NK sir left in the evening today.

He then checked the time and realized where he must be now. Dinning with HER. His mind couldn't let him concentrate on work after that. He closed his laptop and then asked Sophie to get his Car ready. He would be leaving back for home.

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He came inside the house and saw his Di sitting on the Couch knitting a sweater alone. She saw him and passed a smile.

Anjali: Chotte you are too late. Had more work?

Arnav sat beside her and leaned back closing his eyes.

Anjali: Let me ask HP to serve you Dinner. Today I have made Methi Paratha for you.

He didn't respond and Anjali was worried.

Anjali: What happened Chotte? Arent you well?

She checked his temperature but that seemed fine.

Arnav: Did NK come back?

This was the first question he asked her amusing her a bit.

Anjali: No. Not yet. Seems they planned for a drive after the Dinner. He had called me some time back to inform the same.

Arnav: Drive? At this time? Di, what is wrong with NK? Doesn't he know its not safe to go out with a girl for drive at late hours?

Anjali: Chotte relax. They need time to know each other. I don't think that's a problem. But why are you reacting this way? NK is not a kid anymore and so is Khushi. They know their responsibilities.

Arnav realized he shouldn't have commented on this before his Di. To ensure she doesn't think it wrong , he started giving other excuses.

Arnav: Di, I don't want NK to spend time with her and then later repent knowing how childish she is. She has no idea what she wants from life. I don't want NK to face the same thing which I did years back. She hardly knows what other expect from her. She is totally blinded in her own morals in this generation. If NK keeps on sticking to her so much, she wont like and who knows if she calls him "CHARACTERLESS" someday just like she called me?

"No Nannav. This will never happen" came NK's voice from behind. He came inside the door with his Jacket and Car keys smiling at Arnav and Anjali.

NK: Nannav you are worrying too much for me. But nothing is happening wrong. She is a sensible girl now. I like spending time with her because she is worth it. Just a girl I had ever dreamed of. And every girl is bind by some or the other morals which according to me is good. That helps the relation to grow much stronger.

Arnav: So she didn't mind to have a Drive with you after Dinner? Didn't she tell you that you are crossing your limits too early?

Nannav: I just took her for a Drive Nannav. Nothing else. Why will she think I am crossing my limits?

Anjali: Okay Enough chotte. I don't see anything wrong with NK or her. But you are acting weird. I know you don't like her much but that doesn't mean you keep on pointing at her for no reason. You never even took her name in the past 4 years. Then why now?


Arnav: I didn't took her name before anyone of you in the last 4 years because I didn't remember her at all. She was out of life and I had no reason to miss her by any chance.

NK: Exactly then so be it. Just chill Nannav. I am handling everything. You know tomorrow we have decided for a movie. Luckily she agreed. Isnt that strange?

Anjali was happy.

Anjali: If you both start spending so much of time together NK then I am sure that day aint far when you both will announce us that you are ready for the wedding.

She teased NK who blushed while Arnav fumed in anger and left for his room.

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Purvi: Drive? Wow. What happened there? Did you guys talk anything about future?


Khsuhi removed her earings standing before the mirror while talking to Purvi who was Khushi's neighbour and stayed at her place most of the time. How could she miss this stay tonight to know what happened between Khushi and Nandakishore?

Khushi: He was talking about Rugby all the time.

Purvi: Rugby? Wow. He plays it? Its my favourite too.

Khushi: I told him that and he started asking me If I watch it?

Purvi: Aww. He hardly knows you hate sports.
Khushi: Except Basket Ball.

She was lost once again in the flashbacks which was so common these days with her. Never ever in the past 4 years she wished to think much about him. But since the time the same family had introduced her to their other Son, she couldn't just stop comparing these two brothers.

"I am a Basket Ball Champion."

"So am I Arnavji. That's such a coincidence".
"We are so alike"

"Almost"
"But Arnavji, I can never drink Black Coffee without Sugar like you. It tastes so bitter."

"If you start drinking it once, you will never stop then"
"Dekhenge"


She winked at him while he stood smiling at her innocence.

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She closed her eyes to get sleep while Purvi was already snoring beside her. Everything was happening so quickly. Nandakishore was really fast in trying to know her and spend some time with her. He asked her for the movie and she couldn't deny him. But will she be able to concentrate full 2 hours in the movie beside him? How she wished she could get the opportunity of taking Purvi too. Atleast she could talk to her in between while NK would enjoy the movie because she always liked Salman Khan movies full of Music, dance, Masti, action and romance while NK loved only Hollywood movies which are devoid of these traits at times.

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Edited by tintin_ruble - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Un res

arnie feeling jealous f nk-khushi
spending time 2gethr..
Purvi hvng nk taste...
Nk shld take purvi wth him 4 drive...
Nice updt
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous one
I am waiting for the tym wen arnav n khushi will meet each other

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