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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
wow wonderful character sketch and teaser loved it thank you for pm.
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I LOVED IT~~~BASS !!!! 😃
aRHI HAVE ANGER,ATTITUDE~~
wOW ~~
It's gonna interesting & exciting !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Nice CS...
and interesting precap...
will wait for updates...
Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
hmmm interestesting another deal marraige on cards??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar I hate sister's left over personally I hope they were not physically involved (prachi n arnav) it feels nasty one man doing all that things with the siblings
poor karan khushi is more interested in revenge then love of her life or is their really love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am so happy you have got all this free time to write awesome and amazing Stories,

Wow I'm loving this story the prologue was awesome.

The concept of the storyline is very interesting and intriguing,

I'm loving Khushi she is so confident and a very courageous woman to stand up to Arnav,

So Arnav was ditched by khushi's sister and bought the company for revenge,

Can't wait to read Arnav and khushi's interactions.

Awesome character sketch,

Please PM me when you update next part,

Also do you have an index as I am a new reader to your work I am already hooked, lol.


Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome looking to read ur story
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The prologue is awesome...and chapter 1 sneak peak tells that khushi has a boy friend and why is arnav wanted to ruin gupta industries?...can't wait for the story to start...I would like to read further...can you please PM me the updates...I have added you as buddy...thanks in advance...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PAYBACK


Part 1

She was not allowed to move out of the Gates of AR Fashion House as the two Lady Securities gripped her arm not allowing her to leave.

Khushi: Why the hell am I stopped here? Just leave me right now or else

"Or else what Khushi?" Came a voice from behind her. Guards left her while she turned back to see him again. His red eyes scanning her face as quickly as possible as if he she was the only one he could feast today.

Khushi: I don't have to tell you what I can do. All you have to do is WAIT.

Without a delay and of course before the guards he snaked his arm behind her waist pulling her hard on him. She was dumbfounded with his actions. Her hands forced on his chest stopping him right there from coming any closer to her, her eyes stuck to his to know what he intended to do.

Arnav: I never knew the younger daughter is so feisty or else you would have been my first choice. But better late than never , isn't it?

Khushi: Shut up Arnav.

He pulled her more close towards him leaving only an inch gap between their faces which horrified her of his next actions. She knew he was doing this purposely as she didn't mind showing him the right place in his cabin. So this was just a counter effect of that.

Arnav: Its your turn to shut up now Khushi. I have an offer for you. And I know you wont reject it.

Khushi: Do hell with your offer. I am not interested to even know. Now leave me before I kick you somewhere really hard.

Arnav: The offer is that you will be staying in my House for the next few weeks, till I wish. Let me have the pleasure of honoring this feisty Gupta Daughter for sometime until I show her what it means to insult me before my Clients.

That offer thing was another reason for her to hate this man. What does he think he is.

Khushi: I said do hell with you and your Offer.
Arnav: Then start searching another house for your father. Because by tonight your whole family will be on roads otherwise. All your bank accounts, your properties, your Vehicles. Everything is mine now. Its upto me how I wish to use it and whom I wish to allow staying there.

Her eyes turned red hearing this. So he will play such a nasty act just to teach them a lesson? How sick of him.

Khushi: You know what Arnav? I had expected some decency from you atleast on this matter as you were linked to my sister before. But I can see what her absence has created in you. Good she married the right person because you are worth nothing.

He hardly cared what she had to comment on his relation with Prachi. He left her waist pushing her back a step and continued warning her.

Arnav: I reach home at 07:00 and I want you there before me.Or else you know what the consequences are.

"Throw her out" was his next command to the securities who immediately came and held her hand to make her walk outside the gate. She angrily muttered some ill words for him and then walked off that place in no time.

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Khushi: Marriage? You think I am in India for getting married to you Karan? I cannot think of it till I settle down my score with that Arnav Singh Raizada. My father and our business back in dad's hand is my only motto at the present. Till this mess is cleared, I cannot think of Our marriage.

Karan: You know Khushi, from the time you have started this fight with that ASR I am getting unpleasant dreams. Hope you don't cross the border of our Love to get hold of him.

Karan Singh was Khushi's fiance. Though they were not even engaged yet, it was decided by Shashi Gupta that Khushi would marry Karan in few months once she settles herself in India. It was always Shashi who decided the future of his daughters as he had strictly warned them long back not to make any such decisions about their life where they chose a partner who is not their Father's choice. This was the reason Prachi had to marry NK despite she liked Arnav as Arnav Singh Raizada did not had any clear ideas on getting married to her. He only believed in Living Relationships which was strictly against Shashi's thoughts.

Karan: You don't have to agree his demands. You and your family will shift in my house tonight. We will take things forward slowly okay?

Khushi: Sorry Karan. But that seems impossible. How am I suppose to stay with your family before our marriage? And Dad wont agree to this either.

Karan: So you mean you will stay with him? In his house? What will my parents think Khushi? How will they accept these things? Forget my father, what about yours? You think Shashi Uncle will allow this?

Khushi: I know he wont. But I cannot sit like this and wait for that Arnav Singh Raizada to play his next turn. Before he does something, I have to show him his right place.

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Shantivan

Arnav Singh Raizada reached little early compared to everyday. He was sitting on the Sofa and checking the time. Just 5 more minutes and it would be 07:00. If she didn't turn up by then, he knew what he had to do.

Anjali, his sister served him the Juice and sat beside him with concern.

Anjali: Arnav. I heard from Akash that Khushi Gupta had come to your office today.

Arnav: Di come to the point.

He sipped his juice and checked the clock again, Just 3 more minutes.

Anjali: Nani and I were discussing this matter today and we feel you shouldn't have taken this step. Because of just one girl you cannot destroy her whole family. That's unfair.

Arnav: Time's up.

He passed a evil grin checking the clock which striked 07:00 sharp. He dialed a number and was starting some conversation when he saw her entering the house with a small bag. Anjali was confused seeing her. He cut the call as it was no longer required. She entered inside scanning the house.

Anjali: Khushi??

That voice made Khushi realize she was been watched. She saw them and walked in.

Arnav: Hari Prakash. Keep her luggage in the Guest room.

Khushi passed her bags and then folded her hands looking at Arnav.

Khushi: I expect you stick to your words now.

Arnav: I always did that. It was your family who never cared for their words and promises.

Anjali: What is going on Chotte? Will anyone tell me what is she doing here?

Arnav: She is my new girl Di. And she is staying with me in this house. The same condition which her sister never seemed to follow.

Khushi's eyes popped out hearing it.

Khushi: Living relationship?

Arnav: What else Khsuhi? You think I needed a new Maid here and I called you to stay? Just thank your God I didn't make you stay in my room so early.

Anjali: Chotte you cannot force a girl like that. Not in this house atleast.

Arnav: This is my House. And no one here has a right to challenge my decisions.

Khushi's frustration level had reached its peak but she controlled herself thinking one wrong step from her and her family will have to lose many things.

Arnav: Your family will stay in that same house until you stay with me here. Your father will be working under me now. His role would be clarified by my Manager tomorrow. And you are obviously not allowed to meet them much unless I give you the permission.

Khushi: This is SICK.

Arnav: There are many other things which would make you feel sick here Khushi. So stop commenting on every statement of mine. Hari Prakash will show you the room. Freshen up and come down. I want my whole family to know what we would share henceforth.

He looked shameless at the moment to even utter such things before his sister. But this wasn't his fault. He was always like that. Right from his childhood he was always given some extra privilege and no one in the family ever corrected him for his mistakes. But today what he was doing was just above their heads. To destroy a family he was very much ready to do anything and everything.

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Only she knew how she had convinced her father for letting her stay with him. But what this man was doing here and expecting her to do was out of question. She paced around thinking what was next when he came inside the room without a knock.

Khushi: Couldn't you knock?

Arnav: Karan Singh, is he your Fiancee??

Khushi: Yes he is. And I am marrying him soon.

Arnav once again teased her with his wide smirk while she had no idea what he did with Karan now.

Khushi: I swear Arnav, I will kill you if you hurt him.

Arnav: Ahh!! I am sorry to inform you this Khushi. But Karan Singh will not be your Fiancee any more.


She was very confused on what he meant by this. Taking few steps towards him, she held his collar in anger looking in his eyes.

Khushi: I am warning you Arnav. Don't do anything to him.

Arnav held her wrist tight and got her hands off him still not leaving her though. He knew she was mad at him. But this wasn't his fault. This was a Payback and she was just a part of it.

Arnav: I didn't do anything to him. Do not worry on that. I just messaged his father informing him about your stay and new designation in my house. He seemed to be really irritated by your decision. So he called me up and asked me to convey this to you that you no longer deserve that dignity to be his would be daughter in law. That's it.

She broke down hearing it. How cruel can he get to take his revenge? He broke her relation with Karan's family? Her eyes clouded with tears and a drop rolled down her cheeks supposedly to fall down but he stopped it by his finger, wiping it gently off her face. Just not that, he licked that drop of tears from his finger too looking in her eyes.

Arnav: Damm Salty. Just like you. I will ask my maids to make you eat ample of sweets here. Atleast that would make you behave little sweet with everyone , especially me.

Khushi: You will have to pay for this Arnav.

Arnav: How? By making me marry you? Don't be in any misunderstanding Khushi. I was an evil before but now I am a Full fledged Monster. Who knows to draw the blood out of people without even touching them. My plan was just to make your father suffer. But you poked in your nose for no reason and hence you have to face the consequences now.

She remained quiet for some seconds facing a man like him while he was enjoying her silence.

Arnav: By the way, my family wishes to see you down. Just a little intro from my side. So should we start?

He tried to hold her hand but she moved back.

Khushi: I am not coming

Arnav: I am not giving you this choice.

He picked her in his arms without her consent while she retorted.

Khushi: Put me down.

Arnav: This posture seems perfect. Let the family know how serious I am this time with our relationship. Keep struggling because that's only increasing my obsession to posses you.

The open door made him easy to take her down in his arms. He hardly cared for what the family might think about them. All he wanted is to show her that she had intruded in the life of a wrong person

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Edited by tintin_ruble - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update..arnav was so bad..he and his evil n monsterous plan go to hell..what kushi wud next?waiting eagerly for the next update..

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