An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED)

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Dat really was a heart wrenching update...i teared up reading it...very intense...brilliantly written...anxiously waiting to know about khushi's past.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

When they agreed to reveal their past I assumed that you will disclose the past of Arnav to us and will stop the chapter without revealing Khushi's past and my assumption was right.

I would definitely have only one nomination if there is any award competition in IF for best suspense story teller.

Now what is the mystery of Khushi which makes her reluctant to be with Arnav . Is she Akash's girlfriend? But if she was his girlfriend then how is it possible to fall in love with another man so easily ? If her sister or cousin was Akash's girlfriend then how will it affect her relationship with Arnav ?

Is she suffering from some deadly disease ?I hope no ,cause as a regular reader of your works I know that you will always prefer a happy ending.

I am eagerly waiting for next chapter .

Edited by ramyarn - 11 years ago

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Wow that's some update!..but seriously how can you leave us on cliffhanger like this!...the suspense is pure torture..I hope you take pity on us and reveal it soon...fantastic update btw!..and making Arnav a doctor!..wow!

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Waaahooo

What was that read all chapters n one go juhi and I love u for writing like this

Im in hurry but will say what I wanted

This seduction in all forms, love, agony, grief, despair, happiness , hope

What is her past now that making us take quick breaths

When will u update next juhi

Why they cant be together

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

It was heartbreaking - the tragedies that happened...

But I am glad Arnav was able to talk about it.

Mindblowing update!

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Aah what did she write??? Why the suspense?!!

Great chapter!!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

was she askash's girl friend?

or is she suffering some incurable disease and thats y she cant be with him

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

J, J , J you are an amazing story teller but what is new there? We all know that by now, but there is just something special and extra in the way you engage your readers. No matter what you are writing you have tendency to just grab one and involve one in the story!

Ok now that I have got that out of my chest I must apologize for being late for this chapter and chapter 3, I was out of town on a holiday & totally cut off from the net! I am back but a little pressed for time let's see how we go! Now if chapter 3 created even more intrigue specially with Arhi sharing that magical kiss and Khushi bolting from scene uttering the words that shocked me. Luckily for me I didn't have to hang and fall from the cliff because as I got back from my trip chapter was up and ready for me to read!

Now that I have read chapter four, I have another dilemma!😕 Just how on earth am I going to be able to hang from the cliff this time because this cliff is alot higher and more dangerous than any other I have come across in this SS so far! And what a heart wrenching chapter too, first with Arnav being all restless, helpless, frustrated in the first part and then with him talking about his rather tragic past. First with losing his parents and then losing his brother he neglected. My heart broke for him, then the anticipation to find out more about Khushi started bugging me. Since you build so much mystery around her character even from the prologue itself I wanted to know more about her, I almost expected her to say she doesn't have long to live and that's the reason behind her not wanting to pursue anything with Arnav. Heck the way she spoke about how she wishes it is was that easy or even possible, I started feeling for her. And at the same time kept hoping she doesn't say she has some kind of deadly disease. Alas you ended the chapter before you I could discover more. Just what is her secret or rather what is she all about? My thinking about her suffering from some deadly disease slowly started to vanish when Khushi indicated in the beginning of her letter that it is hard to believe but it is the truth. What is her truth J? I like want to know now? 😭 Sabar ka phal hamesha meetha nahin hota J!

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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hpr123

@hpr123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Khushi is Akash's girlfriend? Or is somehow related to his death. If she is Payal's sister, and it's Payal who is Akash's GF why should she feel constrained from having a relationship with Arnav?