Destiny made love(kriyansh n manveer ff) chapert 2 new update pg12 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Just llloooved it talli many at I wished I could have her in the show but ... Nice bonding between kriya and manyata 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
im so sorry for late update actually i m late latif everyone noe this so here i update destiny made love i hope u like it n plz do comment n like ... thanqu so much for ur previous likes n comment this is really mean to me ...

DESTINY MADE LOVE
chapter 2

uday luked at rey n said
i think some people never want me here ... (wid smrick)
RIGHT BROTHER ?
HUH SOME PEOPLE ? (rey luk at uday wid smrick n said)
i don't noe about that people but i never ever want u here (rey luked at uday wid blood shot eyez)
uday bit laugh n said U NEVER CHANGED HUH !!!
rey luked at uday n said DON'T U THINK U SNATCH MY LINES...
uday said wid smrick
hey dude y r u so angry ... its an year that we r not meet 😉
REY IS FUMING IN ANGER ...N ASKED
WAT R U DOING HERE ? 😡😡
...
i don't belive it OSAMMA BIN LAADEN TUMHARA KYA LAGTA HAI ?

manyta luked at down ... as she was noe her mistake... n her dad is continuesly bla bla bla

kria also luk at down ...

manyta hit kria's hand n kria luk at manyta ...n manyta wink at kria ...n smile ...n kria not control her self n smile n again both luked at down ...

manyta's dad

LUK AT KRIA ... WHEN HER DAD SAID KRIA ... kria come to her sense
n she said YES (like she don't noe wat he was talking about)

manyta's dad luk at manyta n said
luk at her she is so cute n than luk at urself u r SUCH A

manyta wispered SeXy personality ...

manyta's dad luk at manyata wid fuming in anger

now i decided u n kria were shifted !!!

manyta luk at his dad ... SHIFTED ? WHERE ? WID CONFUSE LUK !!

her dad luk at manyta ... n said

MUMBAI ... !!!

that word make kria shivered her past front of her eyez... how she ditch rey wat happened n than flash back

flash back

maa ... (shout)

plz plz help me ... (pleading)

promise me ... u never come back again promise me u just forget ur dance promise me beta promise me

I PROMISE U ...

FLASH BACK ENDS

manyta luk at kria ... kria is in deep thought

manyta wispered

R U KK ?

kria come to her sense n luk at manyta a single drop come out her eyez ... manyta notice this

i m not going she said staight in to his eyez

MANNIE !!

WAT DAD ... ?

manyta its not a joke y r u not understand this ?

y u r not understanding i m not business material i m a human being ... i have heart too i have brain too ...i married that guy who loved me ... not my bank balance ... n this is my house too i don't want to leave this place ...

that was my last decision get it

but ...

no but !!!

tum kal hi jaogi ...
...

manyta luked at outside ...

kria : wat happened manniee meri basanti ko kya ho gaya ?

manyta: did u miss ur mother

kria think about her mother n her eyez in full of tears :YES !! (in low voice)

manyta: i also missed my mother i never see her u r lucky one

n her eyez filled wid tears ...

...
comon brother forget about past c ur future wid bright smile ...uday luked at rey wid smrick

i try this many times but fail ...

swayam intruputed i think i should introduce myself ...

hey swayam ...

uday luked at swayam shack wid his ends ...

BEST FRIEND OF REY ?

how u noe this ?

i noe everything about my brother he luked at rey wid smrick

...

kria luked at her n said

i think we should go there

manyta turn n said

r u srs i mean kria i don't want to hurt u ... no u r not coming

listen i noe u never want to hurt me but srsly mai tujhe akele nhi jaane dungi or iske liye agar mujhe apne past mai be jana pada so tab bhi mai jaungi
...
uuufff i completed i hope u like it plz do like n comment

kritz😳😳😳



Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
don girls thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
love the storyline and the second update...!
simply amazingly written...!
love the combination of the two character from the different shows..!
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
Surish thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Glittering Rose
Beautiful Glitter
fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
love it
but can plz update ur other stories
plzz
but i love the combination of the 2 stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
her dad just ordered them to go back to mumbai and decided it with know what they are
in heart... and rey brother uday he seem to be irriate with rey of changes...
and swayan always support it... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
hey my dear...how are you?? 😃 well i really loved this update, and also the story line 😃
you are doing a very good job, and i enjoyed it. 👏

please do continue so0o0on, i am waiting 4 the 3rd chapter. good luck.
thanks for the p.m...love u 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
hey tis amazing...
totally luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
really loved this part especially how kria is ready to face her past and go with manyata to mumbai and ust love the relationship they share... on the other hand the tiff going on between the two brothers really cant wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Hey Kritika its lovely
dr i read both of part Omg is to gud
nd The plzzz continue
can u plzzz pm me plzzz 😃

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