Destiny made love(kriyansh n manveer ff) chapert 2 new update pg12 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
interestingKritzz tu bhool gayi but Mai nai😡
I love your update so much dear😉
Recently I join kriyansh because kriya back😃
And in this Tory my fav opulent manveer also here😊
I m feeling totally magical dear😃
Loved your updates so so much😳
Your story was very nice😉
But uday love kriya now it's intresting😊
But I want manveer together😉
And kriyansh together😉
With ahem ahem...it'll you😛
Thank you for the pm dear 😳
Do pm me sure😳
And keep writting
Update your Chahu main ya na😉
Love you😳
Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---

interestingKritzz tu bhool gayi but Mai nai😡

AAWW some one is really angry on me ... i m so sorry i m surly comment n bada wala promise ... i m not forget its i m bizy some other thing thats y didn't comment on ur story !!!
I love your update so much dear😉
thanku so much 😳😳 i m glad u like it ...
Recently I join kriyansh because kriya back😃
same pinch i m also join recent when i get this newz that kria back in d3 ...😆😆
And in this Tory my fav opulent manveer also here😊
how can i forget manveer when they both r my fav charectors
I m feeling totally magical dear😃
ooo ... this is my pleasure that u like it in this way
Loved your updates so so much😳
aww thanks alot deary 😳😳

Your story was very nice😉
thankz alot again 😳😳😳 now i m blush blush blush 😆

But uday love kriya now it's intresting😊
uday didn't love her he loved her attitude ... correction 😃😃

But I want manveer together😉
baby this is the story about manveer n kriyansh so surly they both were together but they both confused there feeling as manyta never meet uday n kria rey they both r in relationship but her mother is the main reason n she brokup with him
And kriyansh together😉

With ahem ahem...it'll you😛
lol 😆😆
Thank you for the pm dear 😳
ur welcome 😳😳
Do pm me sure😳
surly i will pm u
And keep writting
i will 😳😳
Update your Chahu main ya na😉
surly i will update ... this is the main ff i never forget to update 😳😳 every one like it but i don't noe why 😕 i m not gud writer but thanks alot guyz u appriciate me like this 😳😳😳
Love you😳
love u tooo three four 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Thanks you for loving me like hell stupid
I love your written so don't said like this gain
Warna marogi kamini understood
Love you
Tu blah karing Hayee
Itn thanks kahing love you
Or Mai apni story ki baat nai karing
I m talking about u didn't scrap me stupid bimbo
Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---

Thanks you for loving me like hell stupid

I love your written so don't said like this gain
Warna marogi kamini understood
Love you
Tu blah karing Hayee
Itn thanks kahing love you
Or Mai apni story ki baat nai karing
I m talking about u didn't scrap me stupid bimbo
Love you

lol scrap ? sorry 😛but i surly scrap u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok dear tu buhot Ziyada natanki Karen lagi Han I must say
Bdw I m updating my story ager karna Han tu first comment kar sakti Han lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---

Ok dear tu buhot Ziyada natanki Karen lagi Han I must say

Bdw I m updating my story ager karna Han tu first comment kar sakti Han lol


lol i m also updating 1 chaprt of this story tho tujhe bhi karna hai tho tu kar sakti hai ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Tu Phir jaldi update kar I m ready to res Maine tu update kar bhi diya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
DESTINY MADE LOVE...

CHAPTER 1

omg omg !!! U NOE WAT I HAVE SOME NEWZ

simmi: say but aram se ...

vicky : esi konsi baat hai ? jo tu ithni khush ho rhi hai

rinni: u noe wat guyz vo aa rha hai

sheron : who ?

bharat: abey dimag ki dhai na kar bol kon aa rha hai ...

rinni: he is charming cute lovely handsome

niel: ohh humne uski defination nhi puchi naam pucha hai

everyone say ha ... as they all were confused who is coming

suddenly all girls going outside

rey: who the hell is coming ... ?

rinni (shout): HE IS HERE !!!

sharon: who ?

rinni: go n see ur self i m sure u like him alot

in outside ...

girl 1 : u noe who is he ... ? he is so handsome !!!

girl 2: i noe ... !!! but why his brother don't announce that he is coming...

girl 1:u don't about this he n his brother never meet each other as they both r strangers but we r so lucky he use to study here i m so happiee

n suddenly rey come every one standing as they were wait for some one but whom ?

rey is thinking like hell

n one car stop front of him its a black marcidies

some one come out

n one girl shout behind (OMG)

he wear a blue jeans n white shirt he luking damn hawt he luk at straight into his eyez

rey is beyond shocked

he said one word

HELLO BROTHER ...

that words enough to him ... he is really shocked couz he never expect that he is coming here ...

sharon is really happiee to see him again

shaeron: uday ... !!!

sharon huged him title
hey howz u ?

i m gud wat about u ? wat r u doing here

swayam : rey u never tell me that u have a brother too

rey: ya i also don't noe that

in other side ...

hey i m manyta n she is my frnd kria

guy: hey

manyta: can we seat here (she pointing a chair) as this is reserved for some one else

kria felt guilty for that man couz her best frnd talking with him like full of attitude but she doesn't do anything ...

guy: no this is reserved for u

manyta n kria together n that guy seat front of them

guy: so (manyta luked at him) where r u from ... !!!

manyta: nice question ... !!! I M FROM INDIA (she said bit louder )

guy: i noe u r from india but ... he try to complete his sentance but manyta is too fast she said

manyta: when u noe that than y u r asking me senseless questions

kria control her laughter but she can't a pin drop silence between guy n manyta

n suddenly waiter come

guy: i have to like orange juice n grill sandwich n wat about u ? *(he luked at manyta)

manyta: i have to like takila (vodka short)

when she say takila ...

kria is totally shocked n asked
VODKA !!!

manyta: ya want ?

kria: NO THANKS !!!

manyta wispered ... just wait n watch

he is beyond shock suddenly he rember his mother words

she is angel ... she is totally sushil khandan ki ladki

he wispered

SUSHIL KHANDAN ?

n suddenly waiter ... he gave her vodaka short

she take one vodka short n she want more

kria is in shock ... !!!

2nd short
3rd short
4th shorth
5th short
n 6th is the last short for her now she is totally talli (drunk)

n she try to talk with him

manyta(drunk) : tum bhoth cute ho tumhe pta hai mere na bhoth sare bf rhe chuke hai

suddenly he rember his mother words

AAJ TAK KISIS LADKE KO DEKHA TAK NHI HAI USNE

manyta: u noe osama bin laden

guy: ha !!! (he is really scared now)

manyta: he is also my bf

kria: r u srs ?

manyta: yes !!!

n u noe wat ab tho mai tumse shadi karungi but ek problem hai

guy: what ?

manyta : i m not a vergin (she wispere in his ears )

kria in totally shock

n this is enough for him he stand up n he just run for his life ... !!!

manyta:oh mere hone wale patti ...

but didn't listen her

manyta luk at kria ... n they both brust out laugh

kritz 😳😳





Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Res
Unres

Wow awsum der
Loved it kriya
Very nice update

Want to read further
Update fast
I m waiting

Uday and Reyansh was brothers
Now story being interesting
Uday had same hog
Reyansh lovely and cool

Update oon I m waitin
Eagerly

Pm me please
Thanks for them
Love you
Bye
Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Unres it tommorow morning surely 🤗Yippe I m first🥳

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