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Posted: 11 years ago

How thoughtful of Arnav to stay wait Khushi and Sarah. He put his differences aside and waited with her to make sure everything was ok. Loved how neither of them spoke up when they were assumed to be Sarah's parents. It's interesting that he feels somewhat of a pull but yet does not know what it is which was evident after the conversation with the siblings. Curious to know how he plans on finding out the mystery of Khushi's divorce and how that has made Khushi who she is today.

What a twist at the end...Neel wanting custody of Sarah. Hope no judge in their right mind allows that after what he has done to Khushi. It's sad but there are cases when that does happen. But hoping your story the right person gets justice. Have a feeling that Arnav will support Khushi, probably more if he knew what happened. Hopefully the 2 power men Aman and Arnav can protect Khushi and Sarah.

Can't wait to see what happens next after the twist.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I liked the pace of the chapter and left me pondering over how is khushi going to deal with this storm.
Both acknowledge the fact that the other is/would be a good parent and it is the scene where arnav gets the child in his arms is very heartening.

They are embarrassed when addressed as couple but none of them objects and the awkwardness ...
Arnav is thinking and trying to analyse the reasons behind what happened with khushi is welcome and hope Anjali wold play the cupid part to the best interests of ones involved.

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazng updt
nw wt wud khushi do

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. Sooo much..
Especially Arnavs thoughts regarding Khushi ... But with Sarah's custody comming up...I guess Khushis tolerance to Neels abuse n her secrecy to her own family...lack of proofs ...all will add up to her disadvantage...but more than that...the emotional truma brought by this battle will be a huge blow to what ever recovery she had with the help of counselling... How will she battle this... I wish Arnav had not judged her harshly in the past regarding the divorce...thus closing all roads for her to ask for any kind of help or support...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a lovely update minus die endung!

Wonderful chapter! It also needs reading in between the lines! If you miss you miss a whole lot of details!


Picture perfect! Sarah in his arms like a father and duo daughter!!and ya why didn't they correct the doc? Why wait for the other unless you don't have an issue with it!


Lovely man! What is exactly bothering him the fact he's alone and miserable or even though she's alone she's got at least a reason to be alive?


He's so hard to peel! He's sweet he's caring he taunts he makes her feel miserable!


God! Anjali I hope you can see through your bro!



Hmm! The last part! I'm sure Arnav will help her now?! To add on this fall! Will it cost her too much?



Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very very intriguing story... Read all 7 chapters in one go... Absolutely loving it...

U have penned the characters specially Arnav and khushi... Their emotions, pain , insecurities, suffering, fears beautifully and in depth... Loved ur writing...

Both Arnav and Khushi had a terrible past... Khushi more than Arnav and now Neel is back to take her daughter away from her... Poor Khushi...

Just hoping Arnav would get over his prejudices and help and support her...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
the beautiful and soulful start of the update with a thought tht sum thing can begin. give happiness wch just fade with the fear.. the email

amzing update
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Posted: 11 years ago
good to see saah getting better...that little walk of arnav carrying sarah was so adorable...the email is scary...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update
Ooh Neel wants Sarah
Can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
great story.really would like to see wat past arnav and khushi shared which made him drift away from khusi.really love mr ellie and sarah.i hope to see arnav sarah nd khushi bonding.

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