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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

I agree wid d first cmnt on d updt...arnav is wid her in her difficult time...knowingly..unknowingly...
He care for her and thats what matters d most...now m very sure*fingers crossed* that arnav liked her when they were growing up 2gether but neel's entry made it all messed up...
Does he blame her for everything that happened btw them?
And her choice of life partner?

And rahim kaka...wahi mai sochu how come ur reveling this biggest secret so soon :D
wonder how arnav wl get to know about khushi...
Loved aman-kinjal scene...they r light in this story...maintains happpy feeling in it..
Hope cutiepie sarah is good:)

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Awe, thanks for the quick update. I loved it to the core as usual❤️

The way Arnav and Khushi bonded even for a little while at her parents death anniversary brought a smile on my face. I loved the fact that Arnav did not try to invade her personal space, but instead gave her time to come out of her own grief smoothly. And the way she finally broke up giving away the tears was very nice. Also, I love this teasing Arnav. Most of the time we get to see an Arnav who always troubles Khsuhi due to their past issuse nah. But this one is really cute in a way. And also they did actually have a talk without a fight. Just like Khushi, I'm also wondering what happened between the two. And I also believe that Khushi happened. Maybe Arnav fell for her, but he couldn't express his feelings because it was too late. Well, I guess we will have to wait to know what exactly happened😊

It's nice to see Kinjal and Aman building a life without lamenting with regrets. They like to think positively, which has made their marriage a successful one. Aman and Kinjal's marriage is a perfect contrast to Arnav and Khushi's past relationships with their respective partners. And I loved the way Kinjal was open to adopt a child, and commit her whole time as a mother without giving priority to her work for at least few months. I love Aman and Kinjal's maturity level

I love the relationship shared between Rahim Kak and Arnav as well. But why didn't Rahim Kaka mention that the woman Arnav helped was Khushi? Maybe there is a very good reason behind this, and I'm sure you will clear it with time. And the way a relieved smile appeared on Arnav' s face hearing the woman was fine shows that Arnav is a proud owner of a big heart😳

OMG, little Sarah makes me fall in love with her with every passing day. But she is one naughty girl, who didn't listen to her mama. But it's natural, right? Also, did she call the "macarena dance", "macaroni dance"? That was hilarious🤣

Awe, I felt sorry for Khushi when she had to deal with an injured Sarah all alone. She must have felt helpless. But the way she immediately took her little girl to the hospital by brushing her fears shows how strong she is. And I was relieved to see Arnav by her side. She needed someone's support at that time, and that someone being Arnav made my day. And I'm sure little Sarah would be fine with her Mama, soon-to-be Papa and Mr.Ellie by her side😳

Thanks for another wonderful update. I totally am in love with your story🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting for another chapter with Naughty Sarah, Mr. Ellie, Arnav & Khushi

Update soon😉

Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago

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Stimmy

@Stimmy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Next chapter pls. .waiting 😊

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Fantastic update...kind of glad that the trth didnt come out yet...hope sarah recovers and their is nothing to serious about the lawyer...continue soon...

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Will we get an update tonight?

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Hira

@hira_arnie

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Waiting for ur update shiz

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

As ever, your characters and their stories draw us deep into their world, they absorb us so completely! Though the background of the story is filled with such violence, the details of which you have not given us, yet the effects and aftermath of that violence are so devastating. Chapter 5 was absolutely amazingly insightful with Khushi opening up, trying to work out where things had gone wrong and what her own role in it was.

It is so difficult to accept that one could love the wrong sort of person- somewhere that is a judgement on our own selves, one's inability to see the other for who they are. At the same time it is also an acknowledgment that one's love has been wasted- one has so much to give and that to someone who will not accept its worth, that somehow makes one feel so so, insignificant and worthless. I feel that is what Khushi is battling with at the bottom of it all- it's not so much the physical violence that is difficult to deal with, it is the psychological violence of love being thrown back as if it is of no worth, and its corollary that the person who has given this love is of no worth, therefore being violent to that person is really of no consequence to the perpetrator - that is the painful thing to deal with.

I am so glad you have decided to pace this story slowly, there are so many levels and details to this story that it needs a slower pace. I love the relationship between Aman and Kinjal and the dignity and selflessness with which they are dealing with such an important aspect of their relationship.

The relationship between nani and Anjali is such a pleasure to watch. Rahim kaka and Arnav seem to have a deep and tender, almost protective relationship - almost that of a paretn and child.

And Sarah is so completely delightful, a bundle of joy, as all the kids in your stories are. Please, please let her be alright.

Thanks so much for the pms.

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago