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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!! war of words between arnav and khushi, arnav as always at his best to hurt somebody.. while its nice he apologized.. loved to see sarah and arnav, it was sweet on part of arnav... something must happened between arnav and khushi.. which is the reason arnav is so harsh with khushi.. kinjal and aman are sweet people who are taking care of arnav and khushi, both of whom are still caught up in their respective pasts.. loved the update...


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story seems so real .
I have known people who have faced similar incidents in real life.
Only if some of them had fought for themselves.
This will be an inspiration for many people like Khushi.
Loving the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. It is building up to an interesting storyline.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful Update..

I really dont know what is Arnav's problem, Kushi alredy suffering alot and Arnav is accusing more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your style of writing is so intriguing that it leaves me craving for more.
Thanks for PM and for extra long update😊
Sarah and Elie are so cute;

Did Arnav has no knowledge about why Khushi is divorced and what all transpired in her life?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Great update!!

So the dynamics of Arnav and Khushi's relationship hasn't changed yet. He's still irked by her. But maybe Kinjal is right? I have a feeling Arnav had a crush on Khushi 😛
He changed after 10th grade. So that's after his parents' death?

Kinjal is such a wonderful person! I'm in love with her character! Perfect support system for Khushi, apart from Arnav (in the future, that is!) 😉

So Samara has a child too?! Why did she elope withe Arnav when in the end she followed what her father told her to do? The nerve of her!

And unknowingly, Khushi is growing on Arnav. I loved the part where Arnav and Sarah were bonding over Mr. Ellie and magic. Khushi has seen his softer side once again.

Thank you for a long update! 🤗 I loved it!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Arnav really was harsh with Khushi pleased he gave her the job. Arnav was real cute with Sarah.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Xcellent story i have always liked ur writing tthanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very fasinating chapter

Arnav probably said those mean words because he thought Khushi left her husband like his girlfriend left him
He doesn't know the real reason
Khushi didn't know about his girlfriend leaving him so reacted in a way to protect herself
Especially after what her ex-husband did to her

Both have been hurt and trying to rebuild their lives
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh, that was one lovely update. I loved it to the core❤️

First of all, do I need to remind you that the mother-daughter duo were amazing as usual. I really love the bond which is shared by Khushi and Sarah. The peek-a-boo sandal scene was such a cute one. And jeez, Sarah is going to be a handful, if she is already having fashion emergencies at the mere age of nearly 3 years old😆 And the way Khushi asked Sarah to stay without moving a single muscle until she was back shows a mother's typical protective nature of their own child. I surely have to say Khushi is a wonderful mom, and she is a good example for all the single moms around the world. You really have shaped up Khushi's character wonderfully. Kudos to you👏

But the most loved part of today's chappie was the encounter between little Sarah and my Mr. Awesome. Wow, you made my dream come true by penning down the Arnav and Sarah's scene according to the way I imagined. I for a second wondered whether he was the same Arnav who talked in a little rude manner to Khushi few minutes back. Awe, I loved the way Sarah easily got along with Arnav. And Arnav was really amazing to treat Sarah like a little princess. I would really love to see the bond growing between the two in the future😳

About Arnav and Khushi's meeting, I would say it was well outlined. Neither was they acting as if they were strangers, nor they acted as if they knew each other. It was in the middle. I loved the way Arnav offered a job which was appropriate accordingly at the moment. Although he stepped the line by bringing Khushi's marriage into a professional interview, may be he had his own reasons for that, which we may not know. But overall, I think their meeting was really good. And I really hope Khushi would take the job

Kinjal seems to be a really nice and understanding sister-in-law. I loved the whole conversation that took place between the two. And I believe in Kinjal's words when she said Arnav must have liked Khushi a little more than what she imagined. So it must have been the reason behind the change of equation between the two all of a sudden. I guess you will reveal the real reason behind the sudden change of Arnav around Khushi with time. Also, I loved the following words spoke out by Kinjal, which is the real reason behind working out or breaking of a relationship😊

'' Khushi, there is no such thing as the right man. What there is are a lot of compromises, trust, faith, and respect for the other. Love itself will flourish under the care of such promises. Marriage is not easy. It can be difficult. It can also be amazing and beautiful. If I have learned something, it is that when something is meant to be it just falls into place and when it's not then no matter how hard you try it won't ever work''

So is Arnav really over his past? Or is he just stating it for the sake of trying to feel better? Whatever he meant, I really want him to forget about the woman who left him without even thinking twice. But what made me surprised was the way Arnav mimicked Khushi's words unconsciously. Now that's something he should think about, don't you think😉

Thanks you very much for sharing such a wonderful chapter with us. I really love the way the story is shaping up🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

I would be over the moon if you could give an early update, but I know that you are sticking to your schedule. So I guess I will eagerly wait for the next update

Update soon😉




Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago

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