Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 27

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Originally posted by: niki795

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Part-8

After half an hour, they had reached to college, while Varun and Gauri were waiting for them in canteen...

As they reached, Shlok spoke looking towards Astha, I will bring something to eat for you, and you must be hungry...

Astha just nodded without saying anything, she didn't want to create any scene now...while Varun and Gauri were doubtful... Astha, something happened? Gauri whispered...

Later. She spoke looking as Shlok was coming back...

After sometime, Astha and Gauri were in rest room... When she told Gauri everything since they left Agnihotri mention except Shlok's past...

Oh demn. Gauri held her head.so much happened in one day... and what happened to Shlok suddenly? Why he became so possessive? Year we know, he is overprotective for you. But why such behavior?

I too don't know Gauri, even now, I didn't want anything but I could not deny because I didn't want to create any scene here...

Astha, is there anything between you and him, we don't know? You know what I mean...

Some days had gone and they all were back to normal life...Shlok and Astha were same smiling and laughing with each other forgetting everything...

Hey, I and Gauri will leave today for home for Diwali... Varun spoke...

Ya, I will leave tomorrow... Astha spoke happily... Going home after so long that too for seven days... she was jumping with joy...

Shlok, what's your plan? Gauri asked...

Nothing, as usual at flat... He replied...

Astha felt bad, she wanted to say him to go to Anjali but could not... Finally she said, Shlok, why don't you come with me? Ayii, baba will be really happy...

No Astha, its not possible... He replied...

But why Shlok? Varun said... ok if you don't want to go with her, come with us to Delhi, but we are friends and how can we leave you here alone?

I told na, I want to live alone for few days guys. Please don't insist me...ok? Saying, he left from there ...

Leave it yaar, we know, he will not agree... Gauri said...and all of them dispersed.

Next day after saying bye to each other, they all left to their homes for Diwali celebration while Shlok was alone there in the flat thinking about his past... he usually didn't like to live alone as it makes him sad remembering about Swati... He still missed her a lot... When he opened his wallet and took an old pic from it...

Swati, why you did it to me? You needed money na? Once you had told me, I could give you much more...but what was the need to cheat me? He moaned...

Swati you know, I still feel for you...sometimes, I really miss you, your touch, your smile...everything about you...

When his phone rang...It was Astha... A smile appeared on his face...

Yes Astha... Reached safely?

Ya, just reached, ayii was asking, you could have come...

No, its really ok Astha, I am habitual...anyways, how is your baba...

After a momentary silence, Astha spoke... He is fine Shlok... Ok Then Take care...

Next day Shlok checked his phone, there was no call from Astha... he talked to Varun and Gauri, they too were at their homes...

Similarly three days had gone... but no one from them could contact Astha... Shlok called at her home too again and again but no response... He was getting restless for Astha...

It was day before Diwali... When he decided to go to Pune...

He reached at her home. But it was locked... He tried to call her again but all in vain...

Where can she go? And that too without phone? He stamped his feet in anger and frustration...when someone tapped his shoulder...

He turned back... It was an old man standing behind him...

Ji?

Beta kise dekh rhe ho?He asked politely...

Ji wo.. Asth... Avdhoot ji...

woh ghar pe nahin hain...

Ap jante hain unhe?

Han hum unke padosi hain...

Oh...kahin bahar gye hain kya who? Infact uncle to bimar the na? Shlok asked controlling his voice...

Oh apko nahi pta? Unhe to second Paralytic attack huya tha char din pehle, jis din unki beti ghar ayi thi, usi raat ko...wo sab to hospital mein hain...

(What? And she didn't tell me even? He was getting angry at Astha)... Which hospital? He asked...

City hospital... someone told woh kafi serious hain... the old man told him...

He reached hospital hurriedly and found Astha standing at reception... When Astha saw him, she broke down...but he was in so much anger... He immediately reached holding her arm tightly...

Astha, so much happened and you didn't bother to tell me? He shaken her badly...

I am sorry Shlok, baba was quite serious, and I dropped my phone somewhere even... She broke down...

Shlok just took her into embrace making her relax...while Kalindi came there looking at them... Shlok wished him and asked for Avdhoot, she too broke down when Doctor came there...

So Miss Kirloskar, what did you decide? We don't have enough time...

Astha looked towards Kalindi, she nodded in no crying...

Doctor, please give us time till tomorrow, I am sure we will manage by tomorrow... Astha pleaded.

But tomorrow is Diwali, most of the doctors will be on rest for next two days... I fear, we may lose situation out of hand...

We understand doctor... but please wait till tomorrow... Other will be our luck...Kalindi spoke...

Anyways, at this time, patient's complete responsibility will be yours... Saying doctor left, when Shlok followed him.

Half an hour had passed, When nurse came there...

Mrs. Kirloskar... she called Kalindi.

Yes sister...

Mam, you need to sign all these documents, we are going to start surgery in next hour...nurse spoke handling papers to Kalindi.

Both Astha and Kalindi were shocked... But sister, I think you are mistaken, we didn't deposit amount yet...

Complete amount has been deposited already mam. Please hurry up. Its already night and operation will take six to seven hours... Nurse cleared... While they both were shocked...

When Shlok came there... Astha understood everything...

Auntie please sign papers and don't delay surgery further...saying he handed papers to kalindi making her sign...and gave to nurse... Thanks sister...and please hurry up...

Without speaking anything Kalindi left for Avdhoot's room...

Why Shlok? Astha asked him with tears...

Please Astha...I am not in the mood to fight again for your ego, so called self-respect... So better keep quiet... he spoke...

But I could arrange...

Could you in last four days... Fifteen lacks is not a small amount Astha...

Ayii had decided to sale our house...

And where would they go after surgery...

Astha kept quiet on listening...tears rolled from her eyes...

Shlok held her shoulders... Astha...I know, if I would have asked you, you would not agree. But believe me, take it as loan, I will definitely take back from you, when you will have...ok? He spoke politely taking her into a hug...

But he is my father Shlok, and I could not do anything for him... She was crying badly...why did you do it you didn't have any relation with him...

I had a relation with him Astha... Shlok spoke caressing her back...

Astha picked her face from his chest...

He caressed his face with one hand wiping her tears... ya, I have...if not direct but indirect... if anything happens to him, you would have lost your smile, your happiness... and that I can't afford to lose ever... I paid for just to maintain your smile forever...

Saying he took again into a hug while Astha was still sobbing...

Had eaten anything? He asked...

No... She nodded.

He broke the hug. Go to ayii, she needs you...I am coming there...Ok...

Astha nodded looking towards his face... with a faint smile he placed a peck on her forehead and moved towards canteen...

Astha was standing there surprised at his action...she slowly touched her forehead where he had touched his lips and went towards her ayii...

While Astha was sitting with her ayii holding her hands... When Shlok came with a trey of food for them...

Auntie... Food for you. After surgery, you will need strength to take care of uncle...Shlok spoke with a smile...

Kalindi had tears in her eyes. She folded her hands in front of Shlok for thanks...

Rishtaa ye kaisa hai naata ye kaisa hai, Pehchaan jisse nahin thee kabhi
Apna bana hain wahi ajnabi, Rishtaa ye kaisa hai naata ye kaisa hai

Tumhe dekhte hee rahoon main hamesha, Mere saamne yoon hee baithe raho tum
Karoon dil ki baaten main khaamoshiyon se,Aur apne labon se na kuch bhee kaho tum

Ye rishta hai kaisa, ye naata hai kaisa, Tere tan ki khushboo bhee lagti hai apni
Ye kaisi lagan hai ye kaisa milan hai ,Tere dil ki dhadkan bhee lagti hai apni

Tumhe paake mehsoos hota hai aise, Ke jaise kabhi hum judaa hee nahin the
Ye maana ke jismon ke ghar to naye hain,Magar hai puraane ye bandhan dilon ke

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

awsum update...
shlok has feeling for swati😭
astha is falling for shlok...
i think astha will bring swati.. and shlok will accept her..
but after sometime shlok will feel something is changed..
hope for the best..

Originally posted by: LECHU123

a big sorry for coming late...

oh god i missed an update!

so ...love sparks in astha😳

and shlok still have feelings for swati😲

its getting complicated...

i think as i have suggested in the pm,there are chances to turn the story that way...if you feel so

both part 8 and part 7 were superb👏👍🏼

best friendship..aptly portrayed...

part 8 was so emotional...

i love shlok in this story...a truly loving man

i hope he get rid of his loneliness through astha's family...

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
shlok very protective for astha
but when will they realise their feelings
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊