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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yup start wid it
It will be fun to read another lovely story
Continue wid it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

neki aur pooch pooch...
just get started with it..
np with the slow updates..
but wen exams end then u can give us quick and long updates...
ritee... sooo just begin... no need to ask...!! 😊


yes uh r ryt...i ll surely strt it soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khadupam

Yup start wid it
It will be fun to read another lovely story
Continue wid it


aww thnku so mch😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohk😊
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Hiii guys. How are uh ol? Thnku for ur lovely and inspiring comments. So here i am starting my new FF and sorry but till the end of december i dont think i ll be able to give long updates but still if i ll get time i ll definately update long parts. Coming back to the story, story starts after the whole fiacso in SM asad and zoya are going home
Part-1
In the car
The car drive was silent until asad's phone rang
Asad-ji ammi
Dilshaad-hello asad tum kaha ho? Tum jante ho na aaj diwali hai vaise hi ghar mein meri roshani nahi hai aur tum bhi gayab ho?
Asad putting the phone on speeker-ammi ap kehna kya chahti hai ghar mein lyt nahi hai kya?[Our emotionally challenge asad😃]
Dilshaad-zoya sahi kehti hai sahi mein emotionally challenged ho. Mera kehne ka matlab tha aaj diwali ke din sabke gharo mein roshni hai par meri roshni kisi aur ke ghar hai kash meri zoya bhi mere paas hoti[Zoya was about to speak but asad signalled her to keep quiet]. Tum plz ghar jaldi aa jao na.
Asad-hanji ammi bas aa raha hoon.
Dilshaad-ok beta allah hafiz
Asad-khuda hafiz ammi and hung up the call.
Zoya-mr.khan apne mujhe kuch bolne ku nahi dia phoophie kitni sad thi.
Asad- tabhi toh hum sidha ghar jake unhe surprise denge na
Zoya-oh lyk that
Asad-hm
Soon they reached home. Dilshaad was sitting on the floor and was decorating it with rangoli and diyas and flowers
Asad-ammi ap yeh kya kar rahi hai aur ku kar rahi hai?
Dilshaad-rangoli bana rahi hu aur ghar decorate kar rahi hu. And yeh sab agar main nahi karungi toh aur kon krega tum?
Asad-ammi main kar toh deta par main yeh sab kam karne ke liye kisi ko lekar aya hoon taki apko prblm na ho.
Dilshaad-kisko?
Asad-pehle ap uthiye toh sahi aur vaha dekhiye signalling towards the door where zoya was standing. Dilshaad was pleasantly surprised to see zoya in KM. Zoya just ran towards her and hugged her tightly, dilshaad also hugged her back tightly.
Dilshaad-zoya tum aa gayi vapis and kissed her forehead
Zoya-mujhe toh ana hi tha phoophie apne ghar ko andhere mein nahi rakh sakti thi main
Dilshaad-aww meri pyaari si bachi.
Asad-ammi vo pyari aur mujhe hug bhi nahi kia aftrol lekar toh main hi aya hun inhe. With that zoya was about to hug her but
Zoya-ek minute aap mujhe yaha kaam karvane ke liye laye hai
Asad with innocence-aisa kisne kaha apse?
Zoya-dont try to be smart maine khud suna
Asad-are vo toh main mazak kar raha tha and vaise bhi ap hum dono ki seva nahi karengi? Kya kismat hai meri ammi ki bahu aane ke bad bhi unhe ghar ka kam khud karna padega
Zoya-haww phoophie maine aisa kuch nahi kaha, nd mr.khan dont worry main apni phoophie ki puri seva karungi par apki nahi
Asad-mujhe pata tha
Dilshaad cutting him in between-bas bas chup karo tum dono, asad thnku so mch bete diwali ke din mere ghar ki khusiyon ko vapis lane ke liye with that she hugged him
Zoya with a pout-main reh gayi
Asad signalled her to join the hug the trio hugged eachother. After sometime everone retired to their room. Asad was passing by and heard voices from zoya's room. Zoya's room was in a great mess because she was unpacking the stuff, while keeping her jeans and top back she took them and sat on her bed.
Zoya to her clothes-i am so sorry main tumhe pehen nahi paa rahi but main kya karu us ghar mein koi mujhe aise kapde nahi pehenne deta tha, aur yaha mujhe koi mana nahi karta par main nahi chahti ki main ab aur mr.khan aur phoophie ko tang karu, thinking about the days spent in that house she had tears in her eyes. Asad was listening everything standing near the door and he thought'pagal ladki kuch nahi ho sakta inka par i promise ki main un sari buri yaado ko mita dunga aur uski jagah nayi yaadein bhar dunga.
In the Evening
Zoya came to her room after freshning up and saw two gifts with a note. She first opened the gifts in one box a very pretty black coloured saree and watching jewellery was there, and in other box a black evening gown was there(More description i ll give when she ll wear it)
Note:-
I know zoya ki us ghar mein ap bht ghut ghut kar jee hai par i promise ki yaha aisa kuch nahi hoga isliye main apko yeh do dresses de raha hoon aj diwali ke liye jo apka man kare app pehen lena. Zoya was touched by this gesture of hi jahapanah and had tears in her eyes.
Precap-think think what zoya will wear?
That's ol for now so plz guys do tell me how was it through ur lykes and comments bye tada.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i think zoya will wer a saree
she must want to wear asad choice
nice part
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a wonderful start dear... 🤗 I loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsomeee yaarrr really the best one ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww.. great start..
thanxx for the pm...
i think zoya will wear the saree... cox she knows asad loves to see her in saaree...!! so i think its saree..
anyway.. continue soon...!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start dear...!!

loved the trio hug❤️

and i think zoya vil wear the saree..😛

update nxt prt soon..!!

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