Virmaan : Ek Jid Ek Junoon : Thread-4 : Part-119/ Thread-5 posted-150 - Page 80

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Loved part 115...
Love how Virat was angry on himself...
And how Manvi make him understand was really sweet...
Interisting precap..
Update soon...

ohh.. Thank u so much..
Glad u like it...
Will try...

Originally posted by: pink1

part 115 is nice she make him clam
precap is interesting want what is in
box update soon

thanks
will reveal soon

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Fantastic updates dear...
Again speechless. ...Can't understand how n where to start??
Amazing updates...
Every thing just perfect. ..
The way u expressed virat's changed expression. ..just fabulous. .
His anger,,, guilt,, love,,,care,,,regret,,,each n every emotions of virat u portrayed in excellence way...
N virat is right ..there is no perfect wife or life partner like as manvi for virat. ..
She understood him wdout him saying anything. ..
And the way she try to calm him n soothe his pain n guilt was outstanding. ..

he leave she hugged him from back tightly..both r closed eyes..-apni maanvi ko ase akele chhod ke jaa rahe hou..?..tumne kaha tha tum kahi nahi jaa rahe..mere saath rahoge..plz..mat jao..plz...SPECIALLY LOVE THIS SCENC N THE WAY MANVI TRY TO CALM HIM...SOOO SWEET


M-janti hoon tumhare under jitna mere pyaar hai utna hi gussa hai..lekin mere undertumhare liye sirf pyaar hai..jaise virat maanvi ki taklif nahi dekh sakta..ye maanvi bhi apne virat ko taklif me dekh sakti...LOVE THIS SCENC OF PART 115...

U R AMAZING WRITER DEAR...
U CAN URSELF ESTIMATE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY...WHENEVER I GOT TIME I READ THIS STORY FROM START ...AGAIN AND AGAIN. ..
KEEP ROCKING DEAR. .
CONTINUE SOON. .
EGRLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER...

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To gve their time on it..
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KHUSHI CANT 4 NEXT PART BECOZ U KNOW NA THAT IT IS MY FAV. STORY. SO PLZ UPDATE SOON. TAKE CARE.😊

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

awww
thanks
i didnt find my last update that much good..
Bt thank u dear

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

hey no need to thank
i already make u all wait for long
will updated soon..
Nd
btw
i like ur edit on tweeter nd fb too
hope thats u only..with same name...

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

KHUSHI CANT 4 NEXT PART BECOZ U KNOW NA THAT IT IS MY FAV. STORY. SO PLZ UPDATE SOON. TAKE CARE.😊

today main apni ek friend ki engagment me gai thi nd now m hell tired
will try to soon

Originally posted by: Angelic-Catty

Good???????😲😲😲IT WAS EXCELLENT.. MIND BLOWING... FANTABULOUS... SUPER DUPER... SPEEHLESS.. FABULOUS... AMAZING.. OWSUM... N WHT NOT SERIOUSLY...👏

ok ok
chilll

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PART----116...
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JUst holding her close in his arms..he walk towards bed without blinking his eyes off from her..he..the virat vadgera who never gve share to god..today thanking god mentally to gve this angle in his life..no matter she left him or hurt him..bt she had reasons..nd may be its his lack of love didnt make her believe on him that time..she was not ready to trust him 4 years back..nd she left also only for him..
Otherside maanvi also just looking in his eyes..moving her fingers in his hairs above his neck..nd hone hand on his rouch cheek..his fingers trying to shoot his pain..carassing his skin..their forheads r jointed..
He reached near bed nd make her sit gentally on bed..she didnt know what running in his mind bt she can she urge nd desire in his eyes for her..bt its not lust or some bad feelings...its only his love..madness for her..nd of course with that his guilt..his pain..his regrating urge..she know its not easy for him to hold his control on himself..
She make him sit on bed nd push herself closer to him..nd sit in his lap..he is not shock or surprised..nor confuse..after this long journey..he atlest know her that much..that she can do anything for him..to shoot his pain..to decrease his anger..nd for now..he also want her to make him forget all things..he want to push all things aside now..he only wants to be with her..he pull her more closer to him nd wrap his arms around her slim waist..bt not hurting her back..she just smileing at him with lots of love nd concern..nd he can see this..there is no complain..no fear..no forcing..nothing..only love nd concern for him..
She moved her hand from his bare sholder to his face..she cupped his rough cheeks in her small palms..her thumb carassing his skin..lovingly..making him groaned softly..
ONLY FOR 18+...READ ON UR CONCERN...
He close his eyes as she pull herself little up nd make him bent his face little..her rosy..wet lips..touch his forhead..nd than his eyes..his cheeks..nose..chin..her lips roaming all over lips..bt ont at lips..he already turned on..he hold her more tightly close to her from her waist..
Her one hand roaming in his hair now nd now teasing him by trasing his face nd jawline..making him horney..he want to slamm her lips bt like she is not in hurry..bt god..he is in hurry..he felt tourching by him..she already make him warm by her act..forgeted everything..she has to stop now..
V-horney..soflty--maanviii...stop..
Bt she didnt...she scared..if she stop..he may be again slip in guilt nd regrate..which she didnt want..may be he go for drink nd get restless whole night..
She know bcz of that box..he already angry nd desparte..she didnt want him to stressed out..not for tonight atlest..she is only him..nd she want him to gve rest to his mind nd body nd thoughts..nd only this way can make him go aeay from all this..nd relaxed..
She didnt gve attention on her words..nd move down towards his jaw line..
He turned his face otherside..ache back..
V--maanvi please s..stopp...
He said with panterin heavily...
Maanvi smrked..the virat vadhera..pleading for stop her..how diffrent..
M-pull herself little back nd look at him..breathing little heavily--kyu..???..tum mana kar rahe hou..??
Virat open his eyes nd look at her..
M-teasing him by moving her fingers on his neck line nd jaw--jou 24 hours bhi wait nahi kar sakta tha..humm??..winked..
V--smirked..
Maanvi bit her lips nd look down with blush..which killed him..
V-how can he stop now..he move his one hand behind her neck nd slammed his lips with her..she gasped little with it bt in next moment she also starts resonding..its not at all gentle..its passiont nd deep kiss..he nibbles her lowerlips passiontly..he bit her lips slightly which make her open her mouth..he exploring her mouth passionatly..her fingers roaming in his hairs..pulling him more close to her..they r kissing like no tommorow..after some..
V-stop kissing her..as his finger reached at her wound..at back..she is still lost in kiss..while crassing her back..his finger touch at bandaged which make him realise abt her injury..without opening his eyes he push her back..making her confuse..surprised..
M--virattt...
V--move...
M--kya?
V-open his eyes nd look at her..

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V-try to push her on bed gentally with care--move..
M--kya??
V-look at her who looking at him with confusion..nd also he can see love in her eyes..for him..concern for him..he can die for her..that much he love her..nd he always wann see this in her eyes..nd she every time prooving that she also love him more than her own life..he smile little with cupping her face with one hand..placing one hand around her waist..carassing her cheek with thumb..lovingly..greatfully..softly--maine kaha move..ase serialo vale melo drama face banane ko nahi kaha..
M-opened her mouth in O shape hearing this..
V-smirked..
M-pouted like cute angry kid..move away from him nd sit little away with folding her legs with crossing her hands against her chest..
V-chulked as he saw her like this..he think little than raised his eyebrow as idea click in his mind..he go on his side of bed nd lay down..on his back..nd acted like he is going sleep..with placing his hand on his eyes..making her stunt..she looking at him from corner of her eyes..
She waited for little bt he didnt move..
M-gasped in anger..cutly..turned her face towards him to check bt no..again look away with tighted his cross against her chest..murmured cutly in anger--soa gaya?..ase hi??..ye ab pahele vala virat nahi hai..nahi hai..haa..shaadi ke kuch saal baad pati badte hai..lekin ye tou..ye tou month me hi badal gaya..no..month me bhi abhi ek din baki hai..
She pouted sadly..
Just than she felt some movment from his side she smile widly nd turned towards him with ecxitly..bt again she get shock as she saw him just stire in sleep..
M-angrily..turned towards him throw her hand in her lap--ab manaoge bhi nahi kya..??
She asked innocently..cute angery..
V-smirked..bt still not moving..
M-as she saw him smirkin..open her mouth again O shape--virattt...tum..tum..tum badal gaye hou...pahele tou bade bade diloge marte the..aur ab..ab..ab yu..urghhh...tum ne mujhe serial ka taana mara naa..bt u know what..waha sab sach bata te hai..bilkul reality..ki..ki sab pati ek jaise hote hai..khadoos..main hi pagal hoon jou tumhare diloges pe marti hoon..
She didnt know what she speaking nd blusing..making him turned on..+ romentic too..its his real maanvi..some time mature nd some time innocent..bt beautiful as always..
M-continuing--waise mujhe ab kya karna hai..mat manao mujhe..ab tou main manungi bhi nahi..koi jarurat nahi hai mujhe manane ki..neend tou mujhe bhi bahot aa rahi hai..good night..mr..not hot sot vadhera..huhhh..
She said angrily nd turned to her side..
She abt to pull duvet for sleep bt stoped nd pull back by sudden force..nd like always..who can push her close passionately..her virat of course..
V-as she abt to hold duvet he hold her forarms nd pull her towards him with force which make her fall on top of him..
M-surprisly..-ahh..
She surprisly hissed as her body fall on him nd her plams rested on his bare chest..she imigeatly look at him..with cute anger..try to get up from him bt cannt as he holding her too tightly from her waist..with taking care abt her injury..not to hurt her back..
M-try to pull herself up--chhodo..haath hatao apna..
V-passionatly..move his had towards her hair nd place them behind her ear..as his druged finger touched her skin she closed her eyes..gasperd..making him smirked..he move his hand behind her neck nd pull her closer..whisper lovingly nd passioatly near her lips--thank u meri life me ane k liye..
Hearing this she open her eyes nd look at him..in his eyes..the love..madness..craziness..possasiveness..care..concern..dominating love..over protective love.. Always made her weak nd numb..to forget everything..she smile with getting emotional nd shook her head negativly..
M--nahi virat...
Cupped his face
M--thank u tou mujhe hona chahiye..mere itne bure past ke bavjud tumhara pyar mere liye kum nhi hua..tum ne mujhe..sameer ko..sab ko sambhala..meri galtiyan maaf ki..mujhe is samaj me woh respect nd pyar diya..jo shayad mujh jaisa background rakhne vali ko kabhi nahi milta..ek happily married life meri bhi hou sakti hai maine kabhi nhi socha tha..aur ye sab sirf tumne kiya hai..sirf tum ye kar sakte hou..maanvi apne virat k bina sirf ek naam hai..
V-passionatly..looking in her eyes--aur maanvi k bina tou virat ka naamo nishan tak nahi dhundha ja sakta..virat ki life sirf uski maanvi se bani hai..
M--i love u
v--i love u more..
She smiled nd hug him..he too hug her tightly without hurting her back..
After some time..
V-crassing her hairs with his fingers lovingly--maanvi..?
M-still resting her head on his bare chest near his heart--hmmm..
V--ek correction hai..
M-raised her head little nd frowned--correctionc..kis chiz ka?
V-smirked--woh..tum serialo ka tou pata nhi bt puri fimly hou..
M--virattt...
She pouted..
V-laughed little..
M--pura mood firse khrab kar diya hato..
She abt to push his hand away nd get up bt again he pull her back top of him nd capture her lips with him with holding her close by her neck..one hand on waist..