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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

amazing start
plz plz
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update soon


Aww jaldi update karungi dear ... n luv yr comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Akshita..

Nice ... update soon =)


Goin 2 update 2 night ๐Ÿ˜‰ !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum cncpt .. ! ๐Ÿ‘
excytd 2 c d person .. ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

update soon ..
n pm me plz .. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Hey guys ... im back sory 2 wait so much ... well thoda late tho chalta haina ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ ... Well first i want thank all of u alot alot ... just acontable 4 giving so much response n appreciation 2 my story which i never thought ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ... n a bigwali huggie 2 all ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— ... so issi khushi mein i hav 2 surpise 4 u !!!... 1.This story wil be having more than 2- 3 parts so u wil goin 2 njoy little longer period ( i hope so) ๐Ÿ˜• so this story has trun 2 TS to SS ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ... 2. Dusura surpise ye hai ki as i m realy hapy 2day so aaj ka update bada honewala hai so njoy ...!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


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Recap- Vp sir appointed new director 4 d3 team ... 4 ramleela ... n Gang is excited n worried 2 know who wil be the new director ... their became a new entry in collage !!!

Scene near rh enterance
Girl- Excuse me ...kya aap log wahi ho jo ramleela ke act ko present karne wale ho ???

All gang member trun towards the enterance of the rh ... they all were little surpise n even shocked 2 having unknown still a beautiful girl be4 them ...well all d3 boys n girls were just kept staring at her !!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ BOys were just mesmerised by her beauty but again when they luk at rey that reminded about their plan 'Mission rey set up wit director ' !!!
Vicky - guys focus focus ... kya kar rahe ho ???
Nil- (still staring the girl) aare yaar wohi tho kar rahi hu full focus ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ !!!
Vicky- abbe nil ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก waha nahi yaha par focus kar apna mission par !!!
Nil- aare yaar try tho kar raha hu ... par ye director ko dekh kar control hi nahi hota !!!
Bharat - baat tho teri sahi hai boss !!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Vicky- abbe bharat tune hi ye plann bataya abhi tubhi ... saalo apne mission par focus karo apne dost ke liye itana bhi nahi kar sakte !!!
Nil, bharat - ( lukin at rey face making cry face ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ) thik thik hai dosti ke liye control karna padega !!!
SUddenly rey broke the silence
Rey - ya hum hi hai jo ramleela act karne wale hai ... but who's u??
Girl- well nice 2 see u guys ... i m ...
Nil- ( cutting in middle )app director hona jo humein direct karnewala hai??
Vicky- ya we know it!!!
Rey- ohk so u r our new director !!!
Girl trying 2 talk again n again but interuppted in middle anyhow
Simmi - well aap ko pata hai ramleela ke bhare mein???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Rinni- kya app humein punish karengi ... agar humein achse nahi kiya ??
Aashi- pls humein punish mat karna hum bahut practise karenge pakka !!!!
ALL GIRLS PLEAD ( except sharon) not 2 punish them in front of the girl!!!
Suddenly girl get fully frustated ... she shouted shut up !!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Girl - o god kaha fasha diya mujhe ??
Swayam - Excuse me ??
Girl - pls ab mujhe koi bolne dega ... pls koi bhi ab beech mein nahi bolega ... ( all boys n girls were scared by girl behaviour except shareyam so allkept quiet)...thamk u very much !!! finaly
Rinni - Thank u kis liye humein tho apko koi gift bhi nahi diya ??/๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• ( girl give her a angry glare at her within her spects n simmi tell her 2 keep queit )
Girl- ohk mein ye bol rahi thi ki ... mein director nahi hu !!!
All boys n girls - WHAT???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Girl- let me complete !!!... mein asst. director hu ... actualy apke jo director hai wo abhi out of station hai ek imp reason ke wajahse ... but yr director goin 2 join u soon ... kal wo aa rahe hai app sabse milne!!!! so 4 2day i m goin 2 work wit u guys!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
( finaly se felt relief once she complete her words whic she wanted say so long )

Sharon - means 4 2day u wil direct us ??
Girl- ya !!!
Rey- if u don't mind can we know yr name??
Girl- Omg ... iss chakkar main i 4get u guys 2 introduce myself well I m ... MS. Naina Talwar ... asst . director of yr guys 4 present ramleela act !!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Intro - This naina talwar ... realy simple ... but beautiful girl ... having golden heart but still carry attitude ... fully prefect professional human ... even little emotional ... but know how 2 control it ... n know at which time 2 become serious ... even a fun loving girl of age 24 ...even their wil be many thing related 2 her in the upcoming story ... it wil be revealed according situation, time n place !!!! N the ASST. director of D3 team !!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ( called chasmish 4 close 1)

Naina - so guys whats about u???
all D3 member gave their intro 2 her ... boys were just statue when she talk them
Naina - so whats about u???
Nil- ( staring her dreamily) i don't know ...!!!
Naina- sory??
Nil- aare app kyun sory bol rahe ... sory tho mujhe bolna chaiye hai!!!
Naina still can't understand what is talking about as theymet 1st time !!
Naina- but aap ne kiya kya hai iske liye app sory bol rahe ho
Nil- sory iss liye kyunki aap jaise khubsurat ladki ko hamare liye itana sab kuch karna padh raha hai !!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Vicky , Bharat n amar were just got tensed by nil actions ...n even angry ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก !!!
Naina - isse mein sory ki kya baat hai ye mera kaam hai ... jo mujhe karna acha lagta hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ!!!
Nil - issi liye tho ... (interupted by vicky in middle)
Vicky - issi liye tho aap yaha par hai R8 (staring at nil ) haina nil ???
Nil - haan haan haan !!
Vicky take back nil bwt bharat n amar n all glare ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
AT another side
Rey - waise aaj tho director nahi aaya!!!
Swayam - haan so aaj ke din koi tension nahi !!!
Rey- matlb???
Swayam- yaar aaj sharon koi panga nahi legi ... as ye asst . director hai ... n ye clam n bahut matured lagti hai ... so ki tension nahi hai !!
REy - haan bilkul teri tarah ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ( pulling his leg) kya bolta hai ek baar try marna hai ???
Swayam (stared at him in shock)- wht ye kya bol raha hai tu pagal ho gaya hai kya ??
Rey- haan bura kya hai ismein abhi tho tu full single hai ... so try kar sakta hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† !!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Swayam- stup up haan... waise tu mere bhare mein kya baat kar raha hai khud bhi tho wohi status leke ghum raha hai tho tu marna try ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ !!!
Rey- wht mein ??? r u crazy!!๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
swayam - mein nahi u r crazy ๐Ÿฅฑ๐Ÿฅฑ !!
Rey - listen mein tho ek hi insaanke liye crazy hu ... aur meri taani hai no1 else samjha!!!!
Swayam luk at him feel realy hapy n proud that his sister is having sum1 who love her so much even she has left her !!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Swayam covering himself 4m his thought ... full in typical indian bhai mode !!!
Swayam - ye meri taani kya laga rakha hai ?? haan wo meri behen bhi hai samjha !!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Rey- haan haan pata hai ... but i realy miss her ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ!!!!
SWayam - me too yaar ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ... chal ab chalte hai late ho raha rehersal ke liye !!
Rey- ya chal...!!
Naina- ohk guys mein almost sab kuch set kar liya hai par aap logo ki casting tho humare director hi karenge so ... so kal app sab yahi milana same time par ... neo i hav 2 go . So kal se hum apna kaam resume karenge ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ !!!! so bye guys meet u 2morow !!
All - BYe mam !!
Naina- hey guysmein koi citizen member nahi hu jo mjhe mem bula rahe ho... mein bhi ek yongster hu ... so u guys can call me naina ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰!!!!!!
All- Okh BYe naina !!
Naina_- bye guys !!! have a gud day !!

Precap - Entry of the director in the collage n meeting with the d3 team !! soon reveal in next part ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

so guys i know u al r waiting 4 tr scene but u know it taani ntry so men isse thoda grand n spcl banana chati hu hope so u understand ... n do like n comment if u like this part ... n whoever want pm s by me pls add me in yr buddylist !!!! ... hope so u njoy it !!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ n ya jitan jada comment n like utana bada update ... ek tarike ke bribe hi samjh lo !!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†




Edited by SuMaN_TR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Res

Unres

akshita ๐Ÿ˜ก but its ok yaar

me 2nd toh aayi yipeee ๐Ÿฅณ

amazing update dear

just loved it ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

mujhe toh laga tha k director

taani hogi but no ๐Ÿ˜ฒ woh toh asst.director nikli

and boys part was soo good and funny ๐Ÿ˜†

but itna chotu sa update kyun diya ๐Ÿ˜ญ

and i think director taani hi hogi and ya

taani ki entry grand hogi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ mujhse toh

ab wait hi nhi ho raha hai yaar

eagerly waiting for ur next part sooo

plzzz update sooon yaar

and plz pm me when u update ๐Ÿ˜ณ



thanks for pm โค๏ธ


Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
The second part was great! Hmm, so director hasn't come yet ... Waiting for the director and Taani ke entry !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Wonderful update
Naina is awesome
I like how all the boys except Reyam is going crazy over her lol
Aww Rey only love his Taani and no one else
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
lolzzz.. nil n vicky r always too funnyy...
awwie rey still misses taani ...

reyam scene was so cute ;)

still w8n 4 taani's grand entry :))

thnx 4 pm n buddy request too : P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice update...director taani hi hogi...and nil was damn funny...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Wow now tht was nice turn
I like it lol d3 boy thr r cute
Hmm so dic... Is u know wht I mean
Aww my rey still luv taani luv him
Swayam is cute luvly thanks for pm

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