***IsHq ViShK***(updated pg.36)

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Good Job....this fanfic is sooo.....good!! 😃

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wow...this is such a good fan-fic....nice storyline....very funnay and different 😃

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Bubbly

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Ishq Vishk mein aab tak aapne dekha.....

B: ok im ready...and (looks at her watch) on time too...

(She goes downstairs...and sees everyone waiting for her)

*~*Part 7*~*

Bubbly comes downstaris and sees Kripa and Sandeep just standing there...

B:y u guys juss standin there??

K: uhhh...

B: its ur party ur suppose to walk around nd tlk to ppll

K: oh wut do u kno??

S:is pooja here yet??

sandeep luks at the door...he sees mansukh pooja daya and rahul.

pooja and rahul walk up to kripa and sandeep and bubbly..

sandeep sees pooja wearin the dress tht he gifted her..

S: ommgg pooja u luk soo..(blushes)

P: so wut??

S: soo khoobsurat!!(blushes alotttttttt)

P: aww thnxxx

B: eww rahul u luk so uglii

R: thnx so do u....

B: shut up u crapbag!!

R: tu tehrr!! teri aisi ki tesii!!

B: kasma nu kane marjanea!!!

P: oh mi lord krishna!! stop it u 2!!!

K: yeh u imbosiles(looks at the door)

Angad is cumin in wearing a white suit with black undershirt and white tie. as he is walkin he trips over sukhman..they both fall!!

Su: ahhhh!!maaa!!!

A: hailaa mi suitt!!!

Su: angadd!!

K: r u two okkkk???/

S: yeh beta !!

they both laugh!!

A: yeh were totally okay beta

K: eww dun call me beta u nasty

A: ok i wont beta

K: yeh beti!!

A: ok dadi

K: shut up uncle ji

Su: haha ok enuff!! lets go party sharty!!

Angad and kripa go party sharty by dancing!!!

sagar cums in wearin a navy blue suit wit white undershirt and blue tie...he walks over to bubbly and the rest..

B: heyyy sagarr!!

Sa: heyy im not late am i??

B: no juss on time...lets go chak de phate!!

they go dance aswell...

rahul sees a gurl...

R: ohh shes beautiful!! im gunna go ask her to dance...

rahul goes...pooja and sandeep r standing there bi themselves..

S: pooja..

P:yeh??

s: wanna dan-

P:omgg lukkk ronitt!!!

Ronit cums in wearin a black suit and whits shirt nd black tie..he waves to sum1 and continues walkin to pooja nd sandeep...

P: hey ronitttt!!

R: heyy poojaa!!! ( he attempts to hug her)

P: no ronit dontt!! mi dads heree!!

R: so..

P: if he sees u im deadd!!

R: sooo....

P: soo...i dun wanna diee

R: okay well can we atleast dance

(Sandeep makes a sad face)

P: umm...well yaa...(looks at sandeep)...sandeep wanna cum dance

S: i dun kno...u two goo...

P: ok c'mon it will be funnnnnn

S: ummm

P: plzz sandeep...for meee

S: (hesitates at first but then agrees)..ok i'll goo

They all go dance...then mansukh does these very very scary dance moves...all the kids see and get scared...and the decide its time to go and eat

Just then Ronit gets a msg on his phone

R: ohh pooja im really sorry...i have an urgent meeting to go to...

P: WHTT!!!...

R: im sorry...u kno how important it is to me

P: more important then meee

R: Pooja stop ur making a scene..and its kinda embarrassing me

P: ohh so now ur embarrssed to be around mee..thts it(she gets up and leaves)

R: pooja...waittt...

*OUTSIDE*

Pooja is crying...just then ronit comes

R: look pooja im really sry...

P: go away ronit...i dun wanna talk to u

R: Pooja...im really sorry...

P: the only way i'll forgive u is if u stay

R: wht is this pooja...u kno i have to go..

P: u can postpone it...

R: u kno i cant...i dun like postponing my meetings

P: yaa...ok...u dun like postponing it...but u can leave ur girlfriend alone and goo...

R: yess...i mean-

P: thts it ronitt...i dun think we can see each other nemore...u dun even have time for me...i mean there are times where we dont even talk for a week...thts not a real relationship

R: but-

P: just leave ronitt..

R: but poojaa..-

P: LEAVE!!!

Ronit just leaves...Sandeep who saw everything was happy and sad at the same time...happy cuz now he has a chance with pooja...but sad cuz he knew she was very heartbroken...he decides to go over to her

P: (sees him) ohh...sandeep (wipes her tears) wht are u doing here...

S: well i came to check on u..and i saw u and ronittt fightt

P: ohh...yaa well...i knew it wouldnt work out..good thing i didnt get to attached to him...(giggles to herself)

S: (who knew she was lying just nodded) yaa(smiles)..ok lets go bak inside...mansukh uncle will probably be wondering where u are

P: oh yaa...lets gooo

They go bak inside to enjoy the party sharty 😆

When they go inside they were shocked...they saw both mansukh and sukhman dancing to "ITS THE TIME TO DISCO"
they were doing tht old disco move 😆 ...all the younger ppl get scared and quickly run in the backyard laughing their heads off

K: omgggg...tht was sooooo-

B: ewwwww...im never gonna be able to show my face in public again

R: neither am i

B: well its not like ppl wanna see ur face 😆

R: ohh just shut up...

Sa: when will u two stop fighting

K: i dun think they'll ever stop

A: yaa....dadiji's rite

K: who u calling dadiji??

A: do u see any other dadiji around other then u

K: Kutha kamine mein tera khoon pee jaongee

A: ahaha...yaa rightttt...

S: ok guys stopp...

K:(laughs)ok...(looks at pooja) hey pooja y r u soo quiet??

P: no reason...just like tht

B: is it cuz ronit left??

P: yaa and cuz hes never cumin bak!!!

Everyone: WHTT!!!

P: yaa we kinda broke uppp

K: awww poor u...

P: oh well...lets not ruin the party sharty..hehe...

S: thts the spirit...(smiles...and blushes looking at poojaa)

P: aww sandeep ur soo sweet...ur always soo nice to me 😃

S: (blushing even more)..hehe wht are friends for!!

(Just then mansukh comes...)

M: arre bacho...tum logg yahan kya kar rahe hou...come join the partyyy

(hes walkin over to them...just then he falls on his tummy)

P: oh mi lord krishnaa..

M: haiii...meri maaaaa...

(everyone is just looking at him shocked)

**Preview: sandeep tells pooja...he luvs her 😳 **

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 19 years ago