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Posted: 18 years ago

Ishq Vishk mein aab tak aapne dekha ...

(All The Girls leave)

A: girlss...their soo hard to understand!!

S: i kno...

R: neways lets go watch it AGAINN

(They Continue watching their favorite show)


***TODAY***

so the girls walk back to Kripas room.......while the guys watch there fav...Breaking News....with Naseerudin Shah!

K :sooo.....are we having a girls nite thing?

P :Noo...that was just a way to get ur butt over here....

B :ya...ur so stupid kripss.....

K :DONT CALL ME KRIPSSSSSSSS!

P :wait dont chase her.....

K :Y??

P :cuz i wanna do it!!

B :what y,what did i do to u???

P :hid ur love for Rahul!

K :haha...lets double up on her!

B :NOOOOOO!

they continue...for a while....!meanwhile...back in Sandeeps room....


NS :so thats it for breaking news...tune in tomorrow....when we'll find out y jonny lever went on boogie woogie,danced and scared the fans of boogie woogie...and because of that mistake bg....is not gunna be aired anymore..bye for now..

A :I cant wait till tommorrow nite...

S :same here.....

R :i wonder what hes gunna wear......

Angad and Sandeep give Rahul that weird look....

R :what...i like his outfits...there sooo.....

A :sooo...what....

R :im going to sleep......good nite...arent u gunna go
to sleep Angad...

A :nooo...im gunna watch cid and see....what acp praduman is wearing ill give u a update....

R :ok...im mean good nite

S :good nite sleep tite dont let the bed bugs bite!

just as he gets up to open the door...the door wont open...its jammed....


R :OMG!the doors jammed!

S :WHAT!how did it get jammed i cleaned it soooo...much today!

A :YELL SCREAM DO SOMETHING IM SCARED!!!

S :help....(trying to scream but it just sounded like hes talking normaly....)

A :i sed scream not TALK!!

R :here ill do it...HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!

S :AHHH...mera kaan!

Bubbly...heard Rahul scream while she was being chased.....she stopped....and Pooja and Kripa came behind her and pulled her hair...

B :AHHHHH!!

P & K :hahaha...

B :u guys i heard some thing......

K :what....

B :Rahul was screaming for help.....

P :what y......maybe Naseerudin Shah....i dont like.....

B :wore a bathing suit?

the girls burst out lauffing....

R :HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!

B :ok this seems serious...

K :yaa...

they go over to Sandeeps room....the convo through the door:


P :what happened?

R :diii....the doors jammed helpppp...

B :ok wait lets try to open it....

K :k...

they try and try but its jammed.....pretty soon the lites strat to flicker...the lites turn off.....

Girls :AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

Guys :OMG.....ahhhh....

A :man....i wanted to watch cid....omg...im so upset....

K :OMG...guys im sooo...scared....

knock knock knock....the front door went.....

P :ahhhhhh...oh my lord krishna help us please!

B :oh calm down.....

just then it starts thundering!!

all of em scream....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

K: angaddddd....im scareddd

A: kripaaaaa...so am iiii!!!!!!

K: angad ur of nooo use!!

A: shut uppp kripaaa

THUD THUD THUD...sum1z banging on the door

P: AHHHHH....oh lord krishna plzzz help us...

B: pooja ur soo lame ...lol

R: shut up bubbly..dun say nething to my sister

B: no u shut up..and shes my friend

R: do u think i care

B: well ur gonna have to

R: but--

S: guys stop fightingg...were gonna have to think of sum way to get out of here

A: ok i have an idea us guys will push and u girl pull...k

Girls: ok we'll do tht

( so thts wht they did..and BOOM...the door opened )

S: finally were put of here

THUD THUD THUD...the door bangs againn

Person : OPEN THE DOOR

girls: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

B: oh mi godddd....whos tht

R: ahahaha...Bubblys scared...(bubbly hits his arm)oww tht hurt...ur as strong as a man

B: RAHULLLLL!!!!!!!!....well then ur as weaker than a women

P: SHUT UP...

S: ok y is every1 screaming soo much today...

K: cuz they are..now sum1 go open the door..angad soo

A: WHT...me...no way..wht if tht man has a gun

K: wht if he doesnt

A: well then thts my luck..but i think he has a gun

K: angad u dun even kno who it is

A: well he sounded pretty mean

K: angaddd...ur such a baby

A: kripaaa( but before he cud finish his sentence again the door started banging)

THUD THUD THUD

person: OPEN THE DOOR!!!!!!!

P: sandeep u go...ur really sweet maybe he'll melt seeing ur sweetness

S: wht if he doesnt

P: well im sure he will

S: pooja plzz dun make me goo(says it soo sweetly)

P :awwwwwww...ok...but somebody has to go.....

all eyes role on....Rahul....

R :wat y is everyone looking at me?

K :cuz we want u too go to open the door

R :y me??

everyones silent 4 a sec.....THUD THUD THUD

Person :darwaza kholo!!

Every1 :AHHHHHHHHH!!

A :whoz gunna go...sumbody has 2.....

K :Bubbly u go.....

B :me....no...y?how cum not u....

K :cuz ur strong as a man memeber? 😆

Rahul and Kripa exchange high fives

R: good one kripss...

A: well kripa shes ur sister...and if shes as strong as a man then... 😆

(Both Bubbly and Angad start laughing...and also give each other high fives)

B: ahahahaha...angad ur too good

K: shut up angadd!!!

R: yaa ur suppose to--

P: SHUT UPPPPP....godd u guys are gonna stand here and argue forever...lets ALL go and open the door

S: good idea pooja..thts my smart girl...

P: well ok every1 follow...umm Sandeep

S: wht!!...ok fine ill go first!!

So sandeep lead all of them to the door....

P: (whispering)...i hope its not wht we think it is...

A: (whispering too) kripa just hold on to me...ok...

K: (whispers) ok...if i get scared ur gonna have nails jabbed into ur skin

R: (whispers) Bubbly theres no reason for u to hold onto me 😆

B: some boyfriend u r 😛

They all walk to the door

THUD THUD THUD...there are not one but two ppl...

P1: plzzz open the door

P2: yeahh..its raining out here..and were cold

S: they sound like nice ppl...and theres a lady there too

Sandeep opens the door and......


Thts it for 2day...hope u guys liked it 😛




Edited by ***HumTum*** - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 the "strong as a man" n angads line 2 insult kripa was funny lmao i laffed forever lolz! awesome part continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: muneeza

😆 the "strong as a man" n angads line 2 insult kripa was funny lmao i laffed forever lolz! awesome part continue soon!

😆...thx...😆...well continue as soon as possible

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆

crazy update!!! i lauged forever readng this!!!

continue sooooooooon and tell me who it is..

also wat happend to bubbly's boyfriend.. before rahul...
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 hahhahahahah i loved thtt!!!!!! first rahul sayin he likes NS clothes 😆 😆 😆 then angad sayin im gunna watch cid ill let uno what theyre wearing n rahul says ok 😆 hahaha and the whole open the door scene 😆 awesome!!!!!! continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks soo much😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubbles_Rox

cute part continue soon! 😊

thankss...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

awesome part plz cont soon. 👏

ahahah...thx...😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

😆

crazy update!!! i lauged forever readng this!!!

continue sooooooooon and tell me who it is..

also wat happend to bubbly's boyfriend.. before rahul...

LOL...thx...glad u liked it...yeahh we try to make it as funny as possible..we hate too much drama..LOL...hehe youll fin out soon who it is..till then keep guessing..lol

ohh...well he had to go to canada and he wrote a letter saying tht he will never be able to come bak..and she shud forget him...LOL...hope tht help😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rachandeep

😆 hahhahahahah i loved thtt!!!!!! first rahul sayin he likes NS clothes 😆 😆 😆 then angad sayin im gunna watch cid ill let uno what theyre wearing n rahul says ok 😆 hahaha and the whole open the door scene 😆 awesome!!!!!! continue sooon 👏

lol...omg....thank u soo much...lol..we love getting longg comments..it encourages us to wite...lol...every1 comments just made our day...lol...hehe...NS is a important part in our storyy...lol...just kidding..lol😆

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