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Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Hey thank you soo much for liking the Os dear..🤗.
Haha I'll try writing cz I'm on a little tight schedule as of now but will definitely try to write one..😊 😳.

thanks a lot yaar😃😃😃

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -spongy-
okay di sacchi main
this was ek dum jhakkas
each and every part was so so cute
i was smiling through out the OS

really sweet and romantic
please PM this to me

& i agree with chandrika di (hello_vrushaan)
please write an OS on the current track !!!😳😳

beautiful
fabulous👏👏

Hahaha jhakaas??😆. Thank you tere jhakaas comment ke liye ishu dil garden garden ho gaya..😛 🤗

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -spongy-
okay di sacchi main
this was ek dum jhakkas
each and every part was so so cute
i was smiling through out the OS

really sweet and romantic
please PM this to me

& i agree with chandrika di (hello_vrushaan)
please write an OS on the current track !!!😳😳

beautiful
fabulous👏👏

Hahaha jhakaas tha??😆. Thank you for the jhakaas comment ishu dil garden garden ho gaya..😛 🤗. I'll surely try to write another Os on the current track pakka agar thoda time mile toh..😃

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Beautiful write up Kashmi...

Loved the flow..it was flawless...

You showed Swayam and Sharon's POV in such a manner it kept readers engaged...

Loved the hope u have given to love through this...

Swayam sleeping on her lap and fingers intertwined symbolizes their future together...

Beautifully written...keep writing dear

Hey deep thank you so much for you comment I look forward to it.. Its always precise and crisp but you manage to convey your feelings in those few words.. I'm glad you liked my write up..🤗.
I'm glad I gave a ray of hope through my write up and swaron are eternally meant for each other..😃

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: pooja123456
super cute os!!!!

Thank you so much..😊

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Hello_Vrushaan

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Vadhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow :O amazing OS :D really uber cute tha ye :D loved how Sharon took care of Swayam...the fingers entwined, with his head in her lap, first aid, breakfast + dinner <3 loved it...it was really like a flow of one main emotion Love <3 how do I put this ^_^... Ok imagine a river or a fountain...the river is love...the pebbles are the feelings of guilt and repentance and the moss and other stuff that mixes with it is the other feelings of affection, adoration, concern and care. It was like watching a river flow...Love mixed with all these emotions which made it even more lovely :D <3Agar bore kiya tho sorry :P I really felt like I was reading a flow of emotions which was beautifully put together :)keep writing! :)Ps: title: Surprise Mr. Shekhawat! ?

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sunvad278

Wow :O amazing OS :D really uber cute tha ye :D
</div>loved how Sharon took care of Swayam...the fingers entwined, with his head in her lap, first aid, breakfast + dinner <3 loved it...it was really like a flow of one main emotion Love <3 how do I put this ^_^... Ok imagine ariver or a fountain...theriver is love...the pebbles are the feelings of guilt and repentance and the moss and other stuff that mixes with it is the other feelings of affection, adoration, concern and care. It was like watching a river flow...Love mixed with all these emotions which made it even more lovely :D <3Agar bore kiya tho sorry :P I really felt like I was reading a flow of emotions which was beautifully put together :)keep writing! :)<div>
Ps: title: Surprise Mr. Shekhawat! ?

Hey vadhana thank you so much for such a beautiful analysis of my work I'm glad you liked it really..😃.
Umm hey thank you for suggesting the title its nice any other options??

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Haayee
That was such an adorable OS
I loved the concern Sharon showed
Then Swayam's reactions 😆
It was cute at the same time the intensity for what Swaron are known was maintained
The POV's of both Sharon and Swayam were written flawlessly and it just kept me engaged
A commendable job Kashmi 👏
Great Going!!!

P.S if this was a torture then I would love to have many more in the future 😉

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K
Haayee
That was such an adorable OS
I loved the concern Sharon showed
Then Swayam's reactions 😆
It was cute at the same time the intensity for what Swaron are known was maintained
The POV's of both Sharon and Swayam were written flawlessly and it just kept me engaged
A commendable job Kashmi 👏
Great Going!!!

P.S if this was a torture then I would love to have many more in the future 😉

Hahaha haan bilkul torture karne waali hoon with my future write ups's don't worry gal..😆 😛.
Yeaaa I wanted to keep the intensity and the cuteness balanced that was what I had in my mind.. So I'm glad I could put a smile on your face with my work and thank you for the lovely comment tannu..🤗.

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