FF: Predictably Unpredictable. Th 3 [Note Pg 48; 6/9][Note Pg. 52; 25/ - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heckwidif

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do i smell lazines around??...o yes!! fatti my frnd is being too lazy to give a long cmnt or is it just tht am too eager to icrease my number of posts???...haye! ishq ne kardiya hum ko nikamma warna haddi bhi thi aurat kaam ki...p.s: keep the guttery thoughts to ur self..:P



my ammi is always behind me unlike yu am nt home alone wen m absent
till 5 u have no disturbances
bt i can't comment long wen my family n specially wen jahan panah is around
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shyam's message was really hilarious. I mean there are morons who sent like this. Did his message spree end there or not?

But I have a criticism here , not harsh, but the humour element in your stories that we used to enjoy is missing here. The funny scenes are not actually funny.

I felt so blank in the reptilian scene! That was a poor scene in my opinion. Maybe all may not feel it. But I felt sad by that scene because somehow I have a feeling that the free and hilarious sense o humour of yours which we enjoyed through the stories are missing!

This was a strained comic scenes and I wasn't amused, rather disappointed. I am sorry if my frankness is hurting, but trust me this is meant as constructive criticism, because I know your capability with 'comedy' and hence I know this is just not your high! I want you to reach there!!!!! And make us happy :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing love it plz try to update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you so much for this fantastic update... i really missed reading your storries..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Welcome back Sabi ji...why do you take such long breaks.

So the two are not talking to each other. But I have a qostin. Khushi said that she is okay with lizards and cockroaches and flying insects are a complete no-no then why was she so much frightened of it.

Shyam's message was as usual hilarious...

great update but please do update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely love the humor in the update. Forced to comment even though I am usually a silent reader. Take a bow, my dear. Loved the reptile scene, etc.
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Posted: 11 years ago
update !!! yipeee !!
lol...these two...wonder wat forced khushi to try cooking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
khushi is the limit of craziness in this story
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hilarious updt
khushi u r damn funny
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it... u r freaking awesome writer... i hav no words to describe how i feel when i read ur stories..

u make me smile..

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