Originally posted by: the_breeze
When I saw that you had updated, I threw my hands in the air and did an impromptu Khushi Kumari Gupta dance! Yes that is how happy I was/am! Aww *hugs* Thanks sis.
Again well said on the note. I admire what you said and the distinction you made between love-making scenes and explicit ones was 👏 Thanks for understanding me😳
So coming to the chapter, I confess, this is now my favorite chapter of the tale. Simply because of the sheer romance and pain of separation that oozes from it. I know people are gonna think am mad but I am actually liking this phase of separation. If breaking up means that you are gonna give us such wonderfully subtle romance, I for one am all for them being apart just a little bit more. 😳 It's true. I too like it when a painful seperation happens in stories as you see the hearts desire for them to be together. The next few chapters you will love.😉
Anywho, so never had I imagined that you would end up giving us a description of so many different days all in one update. And I loved each of them. Each day made me sigh and day dream. And I have already read this chapter thrice! 😉 Yeah after finishing typing the update i was like lol I have to look for a lot of clothes for my girls for each day😆😆
As I said in my earlier comment, I understand that both are right in their own ways and I am heavily conflicted. This remains my state throughout this chapter as well. Though I know that Khushi will eventually give in, but how she comes to terms with the prospect of Arnav going to war is gonna be interesting to say the least. wait and seee😉
so I begin my analysis/chatter : dundundahhh*biting nails*😆
DAY 1 - Both A & K dressed to kill. Now I know the answer but I can't help but ask, Arnav is never gonna wear any other color than black, brown, grey, white and their various shades, is he??? Is Khushi always gonna be the technicolor to his monochrome? Or are we gonna see our handsome wolf in some other basic colors like say red/green?
LOL green maybe for arnav. but in my mind when I play the scenes through I just don't see it😆 I write what I see when I go through the scene in my head so you never know one day Arnav might be wearing a bright colour. 😉
Yesss, 😎 I was right about the stalking! Bit creepy but way too hot! Zara you are mean, sending our NK away to attend a conference. I want Arnav to see NK and Khushi together damnit. Ooohhh, Nani enjoying it all. Sigh
NK is seriously like this. You'll see as the ff progresses how even though NK and Khushi call their relationship friendship, the line between love and friendship is very very slim for these two. And arnav may have a problem with that 😆😆
DAY 2 - The friends asking cautiously in separate groups line brought a small smile on my face. Ah friends, what would one do without them. Eeeppp, more stalking! Haeee, this is NOT GOOD for my heart and my imagination ☢️ . Oh I love Khushi's outfit, something different and very chic. Arnav wore maroon and blue! Hae mai mar java, reminded me of the Honeymoon in Bali thing that happened on the show! Awww poor Khushi, it's difficult for the others to understand her reasons. The whole stumbling scene and its aftermath made my heart ache. It is heart rending to see her behave distantly with him. His anger and frustration and helplessness get to you after a while and you can't help but wish for it all to be sorted out soon(ish 😛 )
The friends are certainly doing their job.😆 Pain on both sides for Khushi and arnav.
Day 3 - Yaaay romance in the library, though the scene I had described to you earlier is yet to come I am happy with this! This is my favorite outfit of Khushi in this update (Had trouble imagining Arnav in cream jeans and a white shirt 😕). Like what he wore when Khushi was going to commit suicide in show!😆 I LOVE this lovesick puppydog behavior of Arnav's. Awww the guy just picked any damn book he could lay his hands on and sat down just so that he could be around her. I just melted. ☺️Arnav is very expressive in actions...haven't you noticed😆😆😉
Hold your horses, there is gonna be a glam party at a CASTLE!
IN THE WOODS!!
ON VALENTINE'S DAY!!!
I AM IN PARADISE !
*WHOOP WHOOP! *Yep! Big things are going to happen in the next update. 😉
Please please please let her wear red! pretty please... 😳 umm sorry sis the outfits already picked and it's not red...maybe another time.😆
Buzz off La. See Arnav agrees with me. Khushi battling with herself and trying to her focus is good characterization. ⭐️All in all day 3 is my FAVORITE part! Yay!
DAY 4 - LOVED Anjali's dress the most, then Payal and last our flutter petal's. So she is buying a cat eh? hmmm, am a dog person so can't really relate to that. Oh dear I am digressing. Awww that poor puppy. Stalking still going on :) OH MY DEAR SWEET LORD, he missed TRAINING for her????? UNEXPECTED! The guys lying for him was a classic "friends got your back" moment. I find it so funny that Shyam is dead scared of the General! Happy Birthday Aman! (Could you give us the birth dates of both Arnav and Khushi please! 😃 Actually I would have asked for the dates of the entire gang but I don't wanna burden you). Arnav's temper is reaching breaking point. But what I admire is that he is respecting her wishes and staying away. Though he always makes it a point to stay within her eyesight he ain't forcing her to talk to him or listen to him. True gentleman.
It's in my note book when arnav and khushi's bday and the gangs. I'll get back to you on that😉 Shyam and the general have a special relationship🤣 Arnav is a gentleman indeed.
Whoopie NK is back! Ah bestie... So he has been called for emergency counselling eh... Well I know for sure that NK can make Khushi see the other side of the story as well and I am very excited to see what happens next. Damnit Adhira, don't get ideas in your head woman. 😡 lol. hedgehog woman!!!
So I guess that by the sheer length of my comment you know how just much I loved the chapter. Zara at this rate, I get more and more impatient for the next chapter and you are gonna end up having very demanding readers missy! 🤣 Thank you sosososo much sis. I can tell how much you loved the chapter from how much you've written yes. So so glad.😳 Lol yeah I find it so hard to say no when someone randomly asks can we have a sneek peek, or can we have the update a little early.😆
AWESOME writing.
Thanks for the PM *MUAH*
Continue sooon 😳
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