Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ]

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

awesome updt
finaly they confess each other about their love
i love this story
i love how arnav is worried for khushi
now i want to know what happen with payal and shyam
thnx for pm
updt soon

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

That was an awesome update. Arnav scared to lose khushi. The confessipn was just awesome. One doesn't need all the Grandeurs to confess their love and there is no right time for it. It's always about the Emotions of the moment. I loved it how Arnav took care of khushi. Great Chapter.

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

i liked this lovy dovey arnav..

they confessed offcourse it was right time who needs perfect setting,roses,music to confess love...jab mauka mil bol dena chahiye...der kyu karna..

oh its really feels like hell to hear some thing drastic about your loved ones..arnav is no diffrent.aww feeling bad for dhanno...she has live in garage...so so bad..

precap looks intersting ...will got to know more about payal...

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933191

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

OMG!!! They finally confessed. I am so happy. I feel bad for Akash though😔, I really hope he moves on. Finally will we get to read the reason behind Payal's attitude towards Sumer. So Khushi's Dhanno is in Arnav's custody now😆 Now that Arshi have confessed their feelings for each other I am waiting to see how the story is going to progress.

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Lovely update and they confessed. Hoping next will be payal-Sumer.
Akash-Anjali has long way to go

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

How the hell did I miss this update?
now I get it my parents anniversary so might have missed the pm check!

Anyways coming to the update, firstly a huge jappi to you!

For not giving us a scene like memory loss etc, usually its bound to happen when they are going to propose! I'm so glad!

Nd I couldn't have asked for more! What a lovely setting! The true love confession! What more required than the fact your love should know you love him/her nd its the same from there! Period!

Everything was so well written, the pain, the agony, the myriad emotions!

Nd finally I'm glad akash is fine too!

Precap hmm interesting!

Cheers

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Phew done !! Mints, 🤗

Res !!

Unres

This is so different a story in so many aspects. One thing I have always wanted to, but never been able to, is to write a story which is way different from the show.

A very happy and cheerful Arnav

A Shahrukh loving Khushi

A jealous and possessive Akash

Akash-Anjali ?!

A totally refreshing Sumer (I know Sumer is a superstar, I mean the real life one 😉), who is Payal's love interest?

The love triangle (should I even call it that? or a pentagon) is very difficult to weave. And you have done it with such ease. 👏

Call me partial or hormonal. I love Arnav more than anyone else in this story. He is so endearing !! Oh he is !!

I love this story on the whole. There are so many small small things that I love about this story. Like Payal going all mother hen on Khushi. Sumer looking after Arnav in his own subtle ways, Arnav's mother and grandmother liking Khushi, Arnav concerned about getting into the good books of the girl at Ashadaan and so on.

Overall, a very breezy love story. Looking forward to further updates Minty !!🤗

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Viji di scrd me

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

just read the last 2 updates in one go and they were just phenomenal. truly u have completely aced it with the right dose of romance and drama.

im sure arnav plan's for a big and super proposal must have been dampened but i personally think it really doesnt matter how he says it or wat or where he says it because only wat matters is that his feelings are sincere and coming from his heart and one can never trust tomorrow kya pata kal ho na ho! so for me the hospital wala love proposal was just perfect.

i liked when u mentioned anjie and how well she could read the pain being mirrored in akash's eyes! maybe she will be the one who will be able to help him really move and see that love is one beautiful feeling when it happens with someone who feels the same. n he did gain my respect today when he says he is happy seeing khushi happy with the one she loves. for me this is unconditioned love seeing the one you love happy even if his happiness lies with someone else

Arnav is such a sweetheart, its so cute to see them behaving like a true couple even if they have been together for me hours. n him really taking care of her and her well being was so sweet. they are truly made for each other!

i think sumer does affect payal to some extent and thats y she is always on the defensive side and i cant wait for the mystery about this not welcomed shyam to be resolved

but the precap surprised me a little. i mean is there some kind of past connection between shyam and khushi!!! i really hope that the new update is on its way:))