The 2 Special Persons: KR & SS FF |Part 5 :Pg 80| - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ausum.👏👏...ishaaa...
kriya will be back in st louis...😃
wanna know gang's reaction!😳
loved it ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice. I am kinda enjoying this suspense and mysterious touch to K's character.

And the fact that Kria is gonna come down to Mumbai,, St louis. I so wanted it.

I am very much excited to know how the gang would react.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update...
love this kriya alot...
finally kriya is back to india...
waiting for swaron romance 😃
upsate soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written priyanka & nice concept isha. Waiting for Kriya to come back, k to perform & most desired Swaron romance.
cont soon..thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pari aapi ishu 🤗
It was awsum
Amazing
I luved it alooot se bhi bohat zyada
Really cant w8 for kriya to come back and precap my GOD
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
simply wow...

thank god finally kriya will come back to st.louis...

liked the swaron part...

in all loved it...

thnks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
really liked it
as usual superbly written
hai kon yr yeh k?????
i am really eager to know who she is and how is she related to this story...i want a cs of her or something like that
liked kriya's frnds alot
i have a question...y is there no pic of kriya in the banner???????
update sooon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
Swaron scene was chotu sa but acha tha.
kriya wapis mumbai mein...gr8

yr confusion badhi hai
yeh K koun hai ????


update soon



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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

Changing Some Characters:

Kriya's friends in the previous chapter: Tia & Anvesha are replaced by:

Sarah Martin: Best Friend of Kriya

Sarah's boyfriend: Ryan D'ewan

Sarah's Brother: Rehaan Martin

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Other Characters:

K's Personal Assistant: Amber smith (Amy)

Dean: Mr. Peterson

K's Manager: Merliah (Liah)

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CHAPTER: 2

Kriya reaches her university's canteen where Rehaan and Sarah were waiting for her:

Kriya: What's up guys!

R & S: Hey!

Kriya: So kya haal chal?

R: Kuch nahi, as usual meri stupid sis is dreaming about India and her pagal Boyfriend.

S: Hey! Don't you dare call me Boyfriend mad!

And Sarah starts hitting Rehaan with her books while Rehaan continuously apologized to her.

Kriya: Come on Sarah! Like seriously. When are you gonna get over your stupid dream. After all it's only India.

S: It's not just India yaar. It's my dream place. Jab se meri Grand Mom ne mereko India ke bare main bataya hain i so want to visit that place.

Kriya: Okay whatever. I really don't care. By the way when is Ryan coming back ?

R: In a week. I think.

S: Ryan

Saying so Sarah starts dreaming about her boyfriend which was irritating Rehaan to the core.

R: I can't believe my sister and my best friend are in a relationship. I mean dude it's gross!

Kriya: You can hate it but cannot ignore it.

Kriya winked at Rehaan and Sarah gave a HI-5 to Kriya.

Rebecca (random girl): Kriya dean sir is calling you.

Kriya: ME!! Okay thank you.

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Kriya leaves for the dean's office

Kriya: Sir may i come in ?

D: yes please

Kriya: Sir you called?

D: Yes I did. What will be your reaction to the fact that i am sending you and your team for an exchange program.

Kriya: Seriously! We would love to sir.

D: The authorities have decided to gather up a few students from different countries, conduct a workshop and then launch a number of dance videos. A few videos will be done by the students of our university itself but we also need new faces and different dance forms.

Kriya: That's great sir. But what do you want me to do?

D: I have already sent a few teams to conduct the workshops but I personally want you and your team to go to India.

Kriya: Definitely sir. When will we be leaving and where do we have to report sir?

D: You all have to leave by day after tomorrow. Well we have this college in Mumbai who have sent us their dance videos and these guys are too good. They need a bit of polishing and I think you guys can manage that. ST. LOUIS COLLEGE!!

The name itself was enough to send goose bumps down her spine. She was shivering. All the past memories came rushing to her mind making her dizzy.

Kriya: No way sir! I can't. I just can't. Please assign someone else sir I cannot go to India.

D: But why Kriya? Right now you were so excited. What happened?

Kriya: Sir personal reasons. I have always agreed to each and every decision of yours, but I hope I really hope that you agree to mine. I am extremely sorry sir I can't go to India. Excuse me!

Kriya left the cabin as soon as she could and bumped into Rehaan and Sarah while proceeding towards her class.

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S: WHAT! Kriya why the hell did you say NO.

Kriya: Simple. Because I don't want to go to India.

S: But I want to. How could you do this to me? You could have at least thought of me.

With Sarah by her side continuously blabbering about her so called dream Kriya got highly irritated and just couldn't take it anymore.

Kriya: LISTEN SARAH. I REALLY DON'T CARE ABOUT YOU OR YOU STUPID DREAM. ALL I KNOW IS THAT I DON'T WANT TO GO TO INDIA. TOPIC CLOSED.

Kriya leaves in frustration.

Rehaan: You know na that she HATES India. Then why are you even asking her questions to which you know the answers.

S: I just thought...

R: You know her and her past so well Sarah. I think that my sister is smart enough to handle this situation.

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In the hallway:

Sarah trying to talk to Kriya

S: Hey Kriya wait up.

Kriya: WHAT!

S: Hey I am sorry. I think I was behaving unreasonably, I should have thought before I spoke.

Kriya: I am sorry as well. I should not have snapped at you like that.

S: Okay leave this. Let's go to the class or Miss kelsi will kill us. Vaise bhi aaj ballet hain. Too excited.

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The same day in the evening:

A black Porsche entered the drive way. The watchman came and opened the door. A lady in a black outfit with red stilettos came out of the car. She handed the keys to the guard.


Guard: Good Evening ma'am.

Girl: Good Evening. Park the car.

Each and every person greeted the girl as soon as she entered the office.

Amber: Good evening ma'am

G: MA'AM! How many times have I told you Amber call me K not ma'am. You're not only my PA but a close friend as well.

A: Fine K. Well the updates for this evening are:


1) Your award has been kept in your room and I would love to take this opportunity to congratulate you.

2) The recent concert in Melbourne was a huge hit.

3) The costumes and dancing shoes that you ordered are ready. You need to meet your designer to check them.

4) You have to meet Merliah to discuss about the details of your upcoming concert.

5) The prime minister of UK and the President were very impressed with your performance last night and they wish to see another very soon.

K: Thank you so much Amy. I will really get lost without you. Will meet Liah straight away.

Soon K left for her meeting with Liah.

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K: Hey Liah. You seem happy today.

Liah smilingly and took K into a tight embrace.

L: I am and I think you know the reason very well. CONGRATULATIONS K for the award. You deserve it.

K: Thank you so much. Okay coming to the point Amy told me you wanted to discuss about the new concert.

L: Yeah. Please sit. So initially I was thinking of doing a concert in Sydney or London but Riya (a worker in K's office) just mailed me a petition asking for you to perform in India. Have a look at it.

Liah showed K the petition on her laptop

L: I must say I am impressed. I never expected this kind of response from India.

Anyway we have already done concerts in Sydney and London a long time back. Doing a concert in India might be a new experience.

K: But are you sure. I mean signing a petition and actually attending the concerts are 2 different things. It can be a risk.

L: I am putting this offer in front of you after verifying all the stuff dear. Trust me.

K: Fine then. I always trusted you. When are we leaving?

L: You have exactly 3 hours to pack your bags. We are leaving tonight. I have already got your jet ready.

K: You seem quite excited. No problem will meet you at the airport itself. Send the car.

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After a journey of 15 long hours K had finally landed in New Delhi after which everyone had settled in a mansion.

While K was busy choreographing her dance routine for the concert, others were organizing the important stuff. Like the security, transport, venue, tickets etc.

The door bell rings. Liah gets up and receives the door.

L: Thanks a lot

A: What's that?

L: (With a smirk) Tomorrow's newspaper and it's headlines. Have a look.

Liah handed the newspaper to amber

Next day in Mumbai the gang was chilling in Bharat's garage doing masti and all sort of stuff while the love birds were busy in their own world at Swayam's farmhouse. No one in the gang except Simmi knew where they were.

R: Guys yeh swayam and Sharon kahan hai? Kisko pata hai kya ? Dono mein se koi bhi mera phone pick nahin kar rahe

N: Rey woh jahan kahin bhi hai ek saath hai so it's obvious that they will not pick up our calls. So let it be and chill.

Si: Haan Rey Nilesh is right. Sharon and Swayam kisika bhi call nahi uthane wale hain so jaane do. Accha yeh toh batao wh did you call us here.

R: Haan right guys aaj ke paper mein add aaya hai that K is gonna perform live in New Delhi tonight.

Ri: What! K is in india? How cool is that.

N: Neha thinks that hum sab ko wahan jaana chaiye

T: Not possible Neha. Maine online check kiya. It's all sold out humhe phirse tv pe hi dekhna parega.

Bh: Saala humhari toh kismat hi kharab hai.

Si: Rey hum concert tumhare ghar pe dekhenge na??

R: Yes simmi.

Si: Cool main sharon ko message karke inform kardeti hu

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Somewhere else. Kriya's phone continuously ringing.

Kriya: Hey Ryan what's up? Tu London se wapas kab aa raha hain we all are missing you.

R: Very soon yaar. I think day after tomorrow Vaise I wanted to talk to you about something serious.

Kriya: Tune Sarah aur Rehaan se baat ki?

R: Yes!

Kriya: Please yaar. I really don't wanna talk about that stuff right now. Mera mood abhi abhi thanda hua hain.

R: But problem kya hain Kriya?

Kriya: The problem is that I don't want to go to ST. Louis.

R: Just because your friends are there?

Kriya went silent. She didn't had an answer to Ryan's question

R: I knew it. Kriya tum unn logo ko bhul kyun nahi jati ho. Un logo ke wajah se you are destroying your life. This workshop is a very big opportunity, for you as well as for us. Yeh baat tum bhi janti ho aur hum bhi that your friends don't care about you. They don't deserve you. Aaj tak unhone yeh tak dhundne ki koshish nahi ki, ki tum kaha chali gayi and that bloody Rey. Bohot dawa karta tha na that he loves you. Kya kiya usne. Move on ho gaya woh bhi uss taani ke saath, itni easily. Ek baar mil jaye na woh mujhe main usko zinda gad dunga.


Kriya: Rey ki ismein koi galti nahi hain. I am happy that he moved on, isliye toh maine usse jhoot bola tha

R: Please Kriya jhoot mat bol. I know ki tu kitni affect hoti hain in sab baato se.

Kriya was now getting frustrated

Kriya: NO I AM NOT. I DON'T CARE ABOUT THEM.

R: Fine then. Agar tu prove karna chahti hain that you are not affected then chal hamare saath ST. Louis College.

Kriya: Fine. Kab tak bhagungi un sab se. Main chalungi.

R: Really!

Kriya: Haan. We all will go. Only for Sarah.

R: Okay main ek baar London se wapas aa jau. Then we'll decide ki ST. Louis main workshops kaise conduct karni hain.

Kriya: Done. Accha chal bye and please Sarah and Rehaan ko bata dena. I have some work.

R: Okay bye.

Kriya ended the call and went into her thinking mode.


Kriya: Gusse gusse main keh toh diya ki ST. Louis jungi. But the fact is that i still care for them. But I have to move on. If they have moved on then why can't I. Main jaungi St. Louis , work shop conduct karungi and wapas aa jaungi. Simple but pehle mom ko inform karna hoga.

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Smriti: What! Really! I mean tum aur ST. Louis finally tere universe jee ne meri sun li. I am so happy. Finally tujhe tera dil aur dosi wapas mil jayega.

Kriya: Mom stop over reacting. Main waha sirf dean sir ke kehne pain ja rahi hun.Workshop conduct karke wapas aa jaungi. Un logo se koi baat nahi karungi.

S: But Kriya ek baar soch le..

Kriya: Nahi mom please. Mujhe force mat karo. Maine kaha na main unse koi relation nahi rakhna chahti.

S: Theek hain. Tujhne force nahi karungi but ek baat kahungi. Kriya apna kyaal rakhna and have fun.

Kriya: Pakka mom. Love you.

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Meanwhile at Swayam's farmhouse the sunlight made its way through the curtains towards Swaron who had slept in each other arms in front of the fireplace. The sun rays disturbed Swayam's sleep and he woke up, to see the most beautiful sight right in front of his eyes, His Sharon, who was sleeping peacefully hiding her face in his chest hugging him by his waist while his own hand were around her waist.

Swayam remembered there last night conversation and to cheer up Sharon he thought of something and carefully freed himself from her tight embrace and got on work to execute his plan.


Precap: Swaron Romance


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