ARAKSHI SS : DO DIL EK JAAN........EPILOGUE(PT2)pg 98 - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago
Like maar dia...laaga kya?? ;)

Update was so cute... thank god today I forgot to add sugar in my coffee.
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Nice work but I am with Arjun
Wedding again with lovely wedding night
Sakshi deserve this
Piyar tu ab hua hay na
Think about it

thank you so much dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Everything is going HAPPY...isliye I m also HAPPY...
Loved Suhaani-Arjun bond...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinam3

Yeyy... gr8 update... loved father daughter bonding... also like to read about naughty arjun... keep rocking with updates... :) btw thank you for PM

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

superbly written...

cute update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom

wonderful update

now suhani know that arjun is his father
happy family !!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kirthiii

that was a lovely update... kids accept happiness without asking any questions like adults do... what you did was perfect... please continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priyu03

Awesome update

so finally all are happy
cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Rehana25...i had not planned to write the marriage but thank you so much for your brilliant idea

PART 12 B

MUMBAI

" yeh kya hai aisha ?" saakshi asked looking confused at the red lehenga

" kaha na , ek function hai aur hum usike liye tayyar ho rahe hain , ab tu zyada sawaal mat kar , change karke aa " aisha said

" hey bhagwaan , sab ke sab pagal hai " saakshi said and took the lehenga and went into her room

She wore the red lehenga and came out but aisha took her in and made her wear jewels

" bohut pyaari lag rahi ho " aisha said

" scene kya hai aisha ?" saakshi asked

" kuch der mein pata chal jayega " aisha replied

They left together

*********************

They reached a temple

" mummaaa " suhaani came running to saakshi

" baby , yeh dress ?" saakshi asked

" maine pehenaya " lisa said

" par..." Saakshi started

" chodo yeh sab ... Isse milo , yeh hai sunaina , meri friend

" chotu said

Saakshi smiled at his friend and shook her hands

" bohut khoobsurat lag rahi hai aap " sunaina said

" thank you " saakshi replied

" areey waah saakshi , bohut khoobsurat lag rahi ho tum " sameer said coming to saakshi and side hugged her and kissed her forehead

" sameer , chal kya raha hai ?" saakshi asked

" bohut jald pata chal jayega tumhe, chalein upar " sameer said

***********************

" pata nai , itna darr kyun lag raha hai ?" shree muttered

" kya hua ?" arjun asked

" kuch nai bhai ...mera matlab sir " shree muttered

" bhai kaho mujhe , waise bhi tum suhaani ke chachu ho " arjun said and hugged shree

" waise , don't worry , reject nai karegi who " arjun said breaking the hug

" aapko kaise pata chala ?" shree asked

" mujhe pata hai " arjun answered and smiled at shree

" bhai aapki dulhan aa gayi " shree said and both arjun and shree were seeing saakshi

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" arjun yeh sab kya hai ?" saakshi asked

Arjun was wearing an off white colour sherwaani

" maine kaha than a ki hum shaadi karenge ?" arjun said

" haan...lekin..." Saakshi started

" I love you saakshi , pichli baar humne majboori ke wajeh se shaadi di iss baar pyaar ke wajeh se , mein who saare wachan dobaara lena chahta hoon " arjun said

Tears came out of saakshi's eyes

" tum roh kyun rahi ho ?" arjun asked

" yeh kushi ke aansoo , maine tho kushiyon ki umeed hi chod di thi , I love you arjun " saakshi said and hugged arjun

" subh muharat nikhla jaa raha hai " the panditji interrupted them

Saakshi and arjun got married again

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" ek min " arjun said and went in leaving saakshi at the door

Arjun brought a glass filled with rice

" arjun glass ?" saakshi asked

" haan who , lota nai mill raha " arjun said and saakshi laughed

Arjun came and stood next to saakshi

" andhar chalein ?" he asked and saakshi nodded and kicked the glass of rice and entered the house

Arjun lifted saakshi and took her to their bed room

" arjun ek baar suhaani se baat kar lein ?" saakshi asked and arjun called sameer and talked to him

" suhaani so chuki hai , don't worry " arjun said and kissed saakshi

He lifted her and laid her on their bed and went to her

" I love you Mrs Saakshi Arjun Rawte " arjun said and kissed her passionately

***********************

" specky hum kahaan jaa rahe hain , yeh kya patti bandh rakha hai meri aankhon mein ? aur yeh kiska ghar hai ? " lisa asked

" surprise hai jaaneman , sabar ka fal meeta hota hai " shree whispered

He removed the cloth from her eyes

The room was beautiful , it had their pictures all over except a wall , it had no photos

" I love you jaaneman " shree whispered into lisa's ears

" its beautiful shree , par yeh hai kiska ghar ?" lisa asked

" humara " shree said and lisa turned towars him and was shocked

Shree was on his knees and held out a ring for her

" will you marry me lisa D'Cruz ?" he asked

" yes but on one condition " lisa said

" kya ?" shree asked immediately

" tumne iss wall mein koi photos kyun nai dala ?" lisa asked

Shree stood up and back hugged her

" kyunki iss wall mein hum humare future ke photos dalenge , shaddi ke baad ke , humaare honeymoon ke , in shimla as well as in venice , humaare pyaare pyaare bachon ke , aur fir jab hum budde hojaenge , tho this wall will look like a colarge " shree said

" I love you shree " lisa said and hugged him

Shree slid the ring into her finger which looked perfect just like them

***********************

Chotu and sunaina were walking

" chotu , tumse ek baat kehni thi " sunaina said

" kaho " chotu said

" I love you " sunaina said and shocked chotu

" mein samaj gayi hoon ki tum mujhe kabhi propose nai kar paoge issliye maine hi apna dil ki baat pehele keh diya " sunaina laughed at chotu's expressions

" mein bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon sunaina " chotu said and hugged her

And then they both walked hand in hand

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( after one month )

Aisha had gone to her mother's house for her delivery and sameer was missing aisha

" oye devdas , chodkar nai gayi hai who , bohut jaldh champ ke saath aa jayegi " arjun said

" aur upar se , kuch der pehle hi tho tum usse chodkar aaye ho , aise behave kar rahe ho jaise 3 mahine ho gaye " saakshi said serving him hot puris

Arjun and saakshi had invited sam for dinner after dropping aisha at her mom's place

Arjun feeded suhaani and she slept on his lap itself

" woh usko kuch zaroorat pad gaya tho ?" sameer asked

" apne maa ke saath hai , uski saari zarooratein auntyji poori kardengi , chill " saakshi said

" woh kya hai na saakshi , aisha na aaj kal bohut moody hai , usse kabhi chat khane ka man karta hai , tho kabhi ice cream , mein rahoonga tho..." sameer was saying but arjun interrupted him

" usse mann karega tho tumhe call kardegi aur tum chale jaana , ab mera dimaag kharaab mat kar warna mein aisha ko phone karke complain kar doonga " arjun threatened

After that they ate the dinner quietly and sameer left

" arjun mujhe tumse..." Saakshi started but he stopped her by kissing her

" kya ?" he asked after breaking the kiss

" kuch nai " she said and he claimed her lips again

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NEXT MORNING

" arjun uto na , ETF nai jaana kya " saakshi said trying to wake up arjun for the 4th time

Arjun caught her hand and pulled her onto him and started kissing her

" arjun stop it , mujhe suhaani ko bhi uta na hai " saakshi said trying to free her self

He started kissing her neck

" arjun darwaaza khula hai " saakshi said

" arjun chodo na " she said pushing him away

He turned and tried to sleep

" yeh kya arjun ? ya tho tum romance karte ho , ya tho sote ho , ETF office nai jaana kya ACP Arjun ?" saakshi asked back hugging his sleeping form

" aaj nai jaana , chalo na aaj din bar romance karte hain " arjun suggested and pulled her hand to his chest

" arjun mujhe hazaar kaam hai , uto " saakshi said

" arjun tum late ho jaoge office ke liye " saakshi said again

" chodo na sabko , aaj sirf tum aur mein " arjun said kissing her hands

" arjun tum do bachon ke papa ho , fir bhi bachon waali harqatein karte rehte ho , meine tumhaare liye garam paani rakha hai , naah lo , mujhe breakfast banana hai " saying saakshi freed her hand and left for the kitchen

Arjun remained like that for 2 mins and rushed behind her immediately

" kya kaha tumne ?" arjun asked

" kya ?" saakshi asked

" bed mein , tumne kuch kaha na ?" arjun asked

" yehi ki tum bachon jaise harqatein kar rahe ho " saakshi said

" iske pehle " arjun said

" tumhe ETF office nai jaana kya ?" saakshi said

" iske baad " arjun said

" tum office ke liye late ho jaoge " saakshi said

" iske baad " arjun was frustrated , he was confused , he didn't know whether she said that or he imagined and she was not answering him properly

" isske baad kya arjun ?" she asked and turned towards the tawa she was smiling and he noticed it

He hugged her from back and asked " sacchi ?"

" sacchi kya ?" saakshi asked trying to control her blush

He turned her towards him and she didn't look at him , she was smiling

" oh my god , saakshi " he said and lifted her

" arjun gas chalu hai " sakshi said immediately

he turned around and she offed the gas and he took her to their bedroom and placed her on the bed and kissed her passionately

" arjun tum late ho jaoge " saakshi said

" pagal ho gayi ho tum , mein tumhe chodkar kahin nai jaa raha hoon , maine suhaani ke waqt jo kuch bhi miss kiya who sab mein iss bacche ke waqt jeena chahta hoon " arjun said and kissed her again

" yay...mein firse papa banne wala hoon " he said loudly and kissed her stomach

" mumma ...papa ... aap chilla kyun rahe ho ? " suhaani said coming into their room rubbing her eyes

" awww...meri baby ka neend kharaab ho gaya ?" saakshi lifted her and made her sit on her lap

" aapko pata hai baby , aapke mumma ke pet mein na ek chotu sa baby hai , aapko na ab mumma ka khayal rakhna hai " arjun told suhaani

" par papa aisha mami ka pet tho bada tha na?" suhaani asked and saakshi smiled at her baby's innocence

" aapke mumma ka pet bhi kuch mahino baad bada ho jayega " arjun told her

Suhaani hugged saakshi and saakshi hugged back

Arjun hugged his family

" thank you so much mrs rawte , tumhaare bina mein kya karta ? " arjun said and she smiled

" ab tho hum dono ek dusre ke bina reh hi nai sakte na ?" saakshi asked and arjun nodded

" kyunki hum dono do dil ... ek jaan ho gaye hain na " arjun said and this time saakshi nodded happily

The end

So friends I end my this story on a very happy note with all the lovers together

I hope aap logon ko acha laga hoga

Like maro and comment karo

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved your happywala happy ending.
It was so cute.
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