ARAKSHI SS : DO DIL EK JAAN........EPILOGUE(PT2)pg 98 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ketakee

Amazing concept...Loved it...
Please continue...😊

thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: PavithraKrish

hi magati

awesome start 👏
loved the cs 😃
all the best for ur exams 👍🏼
thanks for pm & cont soon if u can 😊
ps:i luv the title 😃

hi
how are you???
thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: eshasrk

Lovely concept...very different and very interesting

Plsss continue...
Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

PART 1

" arjun tum aise kaise jaa sakte ho , aur who bhi bina mujhe bataye , jab sameer ne kaha ki tum London gaye ho kisi undercover mission ke liye tho mein kitna darr gayi thi ? bilkul fikar nai hai na tumhe meri ? aise bhi kya gussa ? arjun mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon , jawaab do " saakshi asked as soon as he came home

" pehli baat : typical wife banne ki koshish mat karo , kyunki tum bhi jaanti ho aur mein bhi ki hum dono ne yeh shaadi kyun ki " arjun said

" mujhe yaad hai arjun , mere papa ne hi jaate waqt tumse kaha ki tum mujse shaadi karo " saakshi answered

" good , tumhe papa ki baatein yaad hai par meri baatein yaad nahi ?" he asked her

" mein kuch samji nai arjun " saakshi said

" meine tumse kaha than a ki mujhse iss shaadi mein koi umeed nai rakhna , kaha tha na maine ?" arjun roared

" haan , par kya mein yeh umeed bhi nai rakh sakti ki agar tum iss desh chodkar kisi kaam se bahar jaa rahe ho tho tum mujhe batake jaoge ? pichle ek mahine mein tumne har roz sameer se baat ki par ek baar bhi mujhe call karna zaroori nai samjha ?" she said , she had tears in her eyes

" maine tumse woh baat issliye nai kaha kyun ki mein tumse gussa hoon " he roared again

" arjun agar tum..." she stopped midway

" arjun..." She started again

She took a deep breathe and said " arjun agar tum mujhse uss raat ke wajeh se naaraz ho..."

" uss raat humaare beech jo kuch bhi hua who sirf ek galati hai saakshi , mere liye tho who ek gunah hai , ek aisa gunah jiski koi maafi nai , samji tum ?" he screamed at her

Subconsciously she touched her stomach and started crying

" saakshi , uss raat mein apne hosh mein nai tha par tum tho thi , tumne mujhe roka kyun nai ? " he asked grabbing her

" arjun..." she started

" mein batata hoon tumne mujhe roka kyun nai , kyunki tum hamesha se hi yehi chaahti thi " he said shocking her

" tum hamesha se hi roshni ka jagah lena chahti thi na ?" he asked and went into his room

She was shocked beyond words , each and every word he said pricked her

She followed him inside their bedroom and saw that he was packing his bag

" ab kahaan jaa rahe ho ?" she asked him

" aaj se mein guest room mein hi sounga , tumhe koi problem nai hona chahiye " he replied and went out

" bahar kahaan jaa rahe ho ? " she asked again

He turned and just glared at her and went outside banging the door behind him

He actually felt bad thinking what he told to her , he was angry at himself for doubting her true love

He was ashamed when he remembered her trust when no one else trusted him while killing sikander

He felt like a monster thinking of the promise he made to her father

He decided that he will apologise to her but immediately remembered roshni and all his anger came back and thought

" maine kuch bhi galat nai kiya "

Saakshi's condition was worse , she kept crying

" tum sahi ho arjun, uss raat tum hosh mein nai the par mein khudko control nai kar paayi , mein tumse bohut pyaar karti hoon arjun par mein tumhe phir paschatap ke aag mein dobara jalte hue nai dekh sakti , baat mere akele ki nai hai , ab mere andhar ek nanhi si jaan bhi hai jisse tum galati keh rahe ho , par mere liye meri baby meri saccha pyaar ki nishaani hai , mein kabhi bhi roshniji ka jagah nai lena chahti thi , par yeh baat tum kabhi nai samjoge , issiliye mera tumhaare zindagi se chale jaana hi mere liye , tumhaare liye aur humaare hone wale iss bacche ke liye sahi hai , I am sorry ki main tumse yeh baat chupa rahi hoon , but trust me I don't have any option " she thought to herself , wiped her tears and gathered up all her courage and opened her laptop and typed her resignation letter and mailed it to sameer

She knew sameer's laptop was not working so he wouldn't see the mail before morning

She called a meru cab and gave him the address of her old house

She started packing her stuffs

She was almost done when he came back

" arjun , tumhe kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai , mein tumhe humaare iss rishtey se aazaad kar rahi hoon , mein tumhe uss wachan se aazaad kar rahi hoon jo tumne mere papa ko diya , mujhe yaad hai tumne papa se kaha ki tum mujhe kabhi nai chodoge , arjun tum thodi mujhe chod rahe ho , mein tumhe chod rahi hoon , meri fikar mat karo mein apna aur... mera matlab hai ki apna khayal rakhoongi " she smiled

He was shocked , he didn't know what to say , how to say , he was out of words , just then he saw roshni's photo on an adjacent table and said " apna saara samaan le lena , kuch bhi peeche mat chodna , yahaan wapas aane ki jaroorat nahi padna chahiye " and turned around and wiped a lone tear that touched his eyes

" hmmm " she said and also turned away and wiped the tears

" apne purane ghar chod doon ? " he asked

" haan " she replied

" saare samaan le liya ?" he asked again

" haan " she replied without meeting his eyes

He loaded all her bags into the SUV just then he had a second thought " mein usse rok leta hoon "

" nai , chodke jaane ka faisla uska hai "

" waise bhi thodi na iss sheher chodke jaa rahi hai , apne purane ghar hi tho jaa rahi hai , aur roj ETF bhi tho aayegi " his mind was convincing himself when he saw her come , he saw her mangalsutra which he had tied , he felt to stop her but something held back

" chalein arjun ?" she asked and he nodded and got behind the wheel

She glanced at him " kya tum mujhe ek baar bhi nai rokoge arjun ?" she thought

" mein tumhe rokna chahta hoon saakshi , par kaise " he thought

She was continuously looking at him and he knew it , he felt as if something terrible is going to happen

He immediately looked at her and she smiled faintly

He looked back to concentrate on the road

" mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho ?" he asked

" kuch nai " she answered

" aaj ke baad mein tumhe dobara apne zindagi mein dekh nai sakti na , iss liye mein tumhe apne aankhon mein sameet lena chahti hoon " she answered in her mind

He dropped her and kept her bags in her hall and turned to leave

" arjun , thanks , bye " she said with a heavy heart

He left without answering

Her phone rang , it was the cab wala

She took the main and essential bags with her , locked her house and went down

" kidhar jaana hai mam ? " the driver asked

" railway station " she answered and got into the cab

She was continuously lost in arjun's thoughts

She touched her stomach " I am sorry baby , mein aapko yun apne papa se door leke jaa rahi hoon "

" kahaan ki ticket chahiye madam ?" the man at the ticket asked

" abhi yahaan se konsi train nikal rahi hai ?" she asked

" aapko kahaan jaana hai ?" he asked again

" iss sheher se door , kahin bhi chalega " she answered

" chanigarh ki train yahaan se 40 min mein niklegi , 3rd AC ka ticket hai , chalega ?" he asked

" jee " she answered and bought the ticket

She bought 2 water bottle and something to eat and boarded the train

" bhaisaab train ko nikalne mein kitna time hai ?" she asked a passenger

" 30 min " he answered

She got down the train and climbed a Chennai train and conference called aisha , chotu , shree , lisa and sameer

They all understood that she was sad but decided to ask her tomorrow in the office

" bye guys , goodnight , ab bohut neend aa rahi hai , take care " she said and cut the phone and switched it off , she wiped her tears and got down the Chennai train and went and boarded her own train

She had bought a map of Chandigarh with her

She was just looking at the map when she saw shimla

She got excited and decided that she was going to shimla

" baby ab aap aur mein humaari choti si duniya shimla mein basayenge " she thought to herself

Her train honked and started moving " bye arjun , I love you "

" bye guys , sorry aap sab ko cheat karne keliye , par kal jab aap logon ko sach pata chalega aap log mujhe dhoondenge issiliye aap logon ko bhatkaane keliye meine Chennai waale train se call kiya " she thought

So guys ???

I hope aap logon ko mera naya story pasand aaye

Please comment and let me know

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Ahhwe!! Poor Sakshi, having to leave because akdu doesn't understand her love...
do continue soon! I really really want to know where you are taking this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
What an emotional start...
Nice beginning.
Do continue.


Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
This is such a lovely piece of work... Please continue soon and me to ur pm list please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Wow I love ur story...
My gosh I really hate Arjun here, he's a complete jerk..but I am happy that Saakshi decided to leave him and start life afresh with her child
How long would she live with such a jerk who's accusing her of wanting to take his death wife's place.
Proud of Saakshi and plsss don't make it too easy for Arjun, he deserves every bit of pain he's given Saakshi for no fault of hers !!!
Very different concept and it's great
Plsss update soon... And as long as Arjun does not repent his mistake, she should not go back to him
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Aww my poor baby Sakhshi ... She is going from Arjun's life and he doesn't have any clue about that ... Lekin next morning when he will get to know Kya hoga ... What will his reaction about that... And baaki sab woh log Kya kareinge... Hmm very nice concept and interesting one also... Sakhshi ETF mein reh ke smart ho gayi hai koi Bhi loop hole chhodna ni chahti ... Plz-2 update it soon dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awww poor Sakshi has to leave the house coz Arjun didnt understand her love.
he blame her for everything 😡
cont soon

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