EHMMBH FF: U Hve 2 Come Bck-Idnm : season~2 : Part-16 on 57 - Page 3

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

OMG this is sooo damn exciting ...thanx alott for getting it back i loved u have to comeback and here yu are with its second season😃😃
and the first update its quite a surprise ...viren and manvi are college frends and also he knew that virman are in relation but here manvi commiteed sucide and what she was saying in her dream ...lots to know the story has just begun am sure this is gonna be awesome😃

thank u so much kulsum... Really...
Bt u fargot to wish lekha di plz wish her here also...
I posted her story on her b'day...
Nd
also thanks for special mention for me in ur thread... Bt really i dont think i m not that deserving...
Bt thanks...

second season wow waiting how story
getting unfold and how there destiny become
one update soon and waiting u r other 2 story
update soon

Originally posted by: pink1

second season wow waiting how story
getting unfold and how there destiny become
one update soon and waiting u r other 2 story
update soon

thank u so much
i try to soon...

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

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~~~ INTRODUCTION ~~~
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ITS NIGHT...
ITs raining out side in shimla...all atmospher seems romantic nd rithamatic...every drops of rain like playing music..romantic one haa...after long time shimla saws poor rain...no snow...every love birds enjoing this romantic weathe...
Nd
one of them couple also come out from their shelter..means house for long romentic drive in rain..husband driving car with one hand nd with ond hand he playing with his wife's finget lovingly..nd whispering lovingly..
On otherside wife resting her head on his sholder nd hugging his one hand lovingly nd engadged his finger with her with playing...she is blushing nd answering to her husbandd with smiling...
After long time they got time for eachother...
Car just drovng towards desert forest roads nd passed from vallies nd hills..its not seems like horror or fearfull bt still atmosphear is romantic...
Husband open car window as his wife demanded to enjoy rain drops..how can he said no..he lovingly down the glasses of window..nd smile at his wife nd shook his head...
He look at her nd turned towards road once bt stopped as he hear her screaming...
Wife-virennn...stoppp...
Vn-he press break with jerk...nd wth this car stoped with jerk...look at her wife surprisly nd worriedly-jeevika..kya hua?..tum thik ho?..jeevika
J-she cut him nd point out her finger towards one top of hill-viren..viren woh woh dekho..koi..koi ladki waha pahad pe khadi hai...
Vn-imigeatly look at that direction...nd saw one girl wearing read nd white saari stood in edge of hill-woh kar kya rahi hai..marne ka irada hai kya...??
J-kahi..kahi su..suicide to..
She look at him worriedly...
Vn-hume rokna hoga use...
J-haa chalo..
Nd with this both come out from car nd rush towards her..
Vn-hey..excusme..litsion..
J-suno...plz...ruk jao..
Nd both run towards her..her back only facing towards them nd she looking down in lake..she is too lost cannt hear their voice or callings..
Vn who running fast just reach at to at hill bt before he catch her she jumped down from hill..
Vn-shit...shouted...
As they both live in shimla viren nd jeevika know this place nd lake..this is not to deep bt if someone didnt know how to swim then they surly die in it..bt viren know swiming nd also he use to visit near this lake for picnic with jeevika..
Vn-without wasting time he also jumped behind that girl in lake nd jumped at same place..
J-viren sambhal ke..nd as she know the place very well..she rush towards edge of lake..
After few minutes viren got that girl nd bring her towards the edge of lake..
Jeevika come near to lake nd waited for viren..as she saw viren swim out from lake she rush towards him nd help him to come out that girl from lake..
Viren come out from water with that girl in his arms he place her on ground..
Vn-jeevika check her..
As jeevika is doctor he ask her to check her..
As viren gave her space she first remove her hairs from her face nd make all water come out from her stomach..nd gave her primary treatment bt she is still unconcious..
Vn-who still didnt looking at her..his back facing them-jeevika woh thik hai..
J-haa viren..thik hai bas behosh hai..hume ise hospital le jana hoga..plz help kar dijiye..
Vn-ok..nd then turned towards her..he just walk towards her nd abt to pick her up in his arm bt stop as he saw her..
Vn-MAANVI...
He whisper loudly in shock nd surprise..and confuse also..
J-confuse-maanvi?..tumhari college friend?
Vn-haa..lekin ye yaha kaise?..aur..vi..VIRAT..virat kaha hai?..he said all worriedly..
J-viren woh sab hum baad me daikhenge pahele ise ab ghar le chalte hai..chalo..
Vn-haa..nd he nodded in yes nd picked her carefully..
With help of jeevika he take maanvi at home nd jeevika change her in dry clothes.. As its late night both desided to make her rest.. They will talk to her in morning... Nd with this they left her room bt still viren is worried for her...
AFTER few minutes...
In maanvi's room...she is still unconsious bt safe...
M-clutch bedshit in tight fist...whispering in low voice-vi..vi..virat...virat...plz...plz...plz..asa..asa mat..mat bolo...mistake...mistake nahi...nahi..hai...

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done with introduction...
Tell how's this?
I posted character sketch soon...
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY LEKHA DI

Originally posted by: pink1

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thank u...for this...

Awsm intro dear ...
luved it !!!!!!!!
hey dear really happy to see 2nd season of UHCBTM...IDNM @@
I m also big fan of 1st season ...
why manvi try to commit sucide ????????
egrly waiting for 1 chapter ...
keep rocking and update soon dear...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LEKHA *****
May GOD bless u dear and fullfill all ur wishes *****************

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm intro dear ...
luved it !!!!!!!!
hey dear really happy to see 2nd season of UHCBTM...IDNM @@
I m also big fan of 1st season ...
why manvi try to commit sucide ????????
egrly waiting for 1 chapter ...
keep rocking and update soon dear...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LEKHA *****
May GOD bless u dear and fullfill all ur wishes *****************

thank u so much dear...
I will gve precap soon as di gave me next hint...

thank u starting 2 season