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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb promo!!
Will be waiting for the update! :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
SUPERB PROMO. HAPPY THAT U R GOING 2 CONTINUE UR STORIES. ALL THE BEST 4 EXAMS
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Posted: 11 years ago
part-6,7 and 8 were awesome.virat was totally head over heels for manvi.but what happen in persent that make him hate her.waiting for next part and pm me plz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plzzz dear do continue. ..
Egrly waiting for next chapter. .
Missing it alot dear...
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Great... will be waiting fr the update... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-9
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its two days passed from that incident...
Viren nd jeevika taking care of maanvi..she is still in silent state..she just living without soul..her body has no life left..she is like live deadbody..she just use to sit on floor on edge of bed..nd staring at one place continuesly..jeevika nd viren try to make her talk nd smile bt no use..she just rpl in nod..
How can viren see her like this..he cannt take it more..
He talk with jeevika to take care of her properly nd also he arranged some gurds for them too..in next flight he fly off to mumbai..to get his answers..
As viren told to jeevika she try her best to make maanvi talk..nd some how she make her involve in her talk..bt not fully..she takes maanvi with her in hospital..nd there in child ward..maanvi get involve with kids..she just forget everything nd starts helping nurse to handleing kids..jeevika smile to see her smiling little...atlest..
On other side...
Viren reached at mumbai..without wasting a min he drive towards his office..
He entered in vadhera amporium..he walk near reception nd ask abt virat...
Girl-yes sir..how can i help u?
Vn-actually mujhe virat vadhera se milna hai..
G-oh..m sorry sir lekin sir tou kisi meeting k liye bahar gaye hai..
Vn-kya aap bata sakti hai woh office kab ayenge vapis?
G-actually sir woh
before she say they heard one voice from other side..
Sam-hey viren..
Viren turned nd saw sam walking towards him..of course they r not friend bt he know he is one of group friend's..virat walk towards him..
S-come near him-hello viren..tum yaha?..tumhara buisness tou america me set hai naa?..yaha kaise?..he asked normally..
Vn-mujhe virat se milna hai..
S-suddenly his face colour faded-virat..
Vn-haa..tumhara boss...
S-woh..
Vn-kya bata sakte hou uski meeting kaha chal rahi hai?..mera pas waste karne ke liye waqt nhi hai...
S-kya yaar..aram se mil lena..flight se aya hoga..
Vn-main thik hoon..fikar tumhe meri nahi apne dost karna shuru karna padegi..
S-viren..?..tum ase kyu?..plz relax..
Vn-he cannt hold his anger..he come closer to him nd tighted his teeths-maine pucha virat kaha milega?
S-woh...woh humare new hotel..me meeting chal rahi hai..
Vn-address..
Seeing him angry sam gve him address..virat imigeatly went to hotel..
In shimla..
Maanvi telling story to kids..when they ask to watch cartoon..maanvi agreed bt asked them to first take lunch nd all agreed too...so maanvi ask nurse to bring food for everyone..
6 months back..viren opened this hospital for poor pepole nd jeevika handling whole managment of this hospital from america..
In mumbai...
Viren reached at virat's hotel already 10 min before..he ask abt virat..nd threten to gve him msg abt his arivle..nd without fussing more agree to meet him..he ask him to wait at poolside restorant nd he will be there after bid up this meeting..
Viren waiting for him..he checked for maanvi on phone in every hour with jeevika..he already decided to help maanvi to come out of this condition..first let him know..whats all mater..that make all this mess up..
His thought intrepted when he heard virats voice..
V-haii..
As viren hear his voice he look up towards his direction..he try not to mess up more in anger..he try to handle calmly..he stood up from his chair..
Vn-hello..
V-smirked-plz sit...
Viren nodded nd sit on his chair again..virat also sit opposite him..
V-so..The great Mr.viren kapoor..top buiesness men of america..aaj indian me..aur mujhse milne kaise?
Vn-how can u so normal nd smiling virat??..he thought..
V-viren?
Vn-huh?
V-kya main jaan sakta hoon tumhe achanak apne is dost ki yaad kaise aa gai?..smile..
Vn-maanvi..
Hearing her name virat's smile faded...
Vn-maanvi ne hi hume dost banaya tha..ya ye kahu ki use pane ke liye tumne mujhse dosti ki..
V-smile again-yaha kyu aye hou?..hope tumhara buisness safe chal raha hai?
Vn-smile weakly-maanvi k liye yaha aya hoon..
V-tou?
Vn-virattt...
V-m sorry..mujhe laga koi imp baat karne aye hou..bt lagta hai tum apni kisi friend ko dhundh rahe hou..main ek buiesness men hoon..detactive nhi..bt haa chahou tou comisner se baat karva sakta hoon..aur
vn-cut him off-meri friend tumhari bhi kuch lagti hai mr.virat..
V-i dont thik so..
Vn-frowned angrily..
V-main is naam ki kisi ladki ko nahi janta..
Vn-angrily-kaise?..kaise tumn kahe diya ye?..ki tum maanvi ko nahi jante..woh maanvi jis k liye mujhse talk dosti apnai..jiske liye ek responseble buiesness men bane..juske liye 1 saal wait kiya..jise apna banaya..jise shaadi karne pe majboor kiya..shadi k 6 months me use apne pyaar ka ahesaas karvaya..use nhi jante tum?..jiska pyaar pane ke liye tum pagal the?..tum
V-hearing all this he become out of controle..stand up from chait nd shouted-haa..haa nahi janta main maanvi ko..jis maanvi ki tum baat kar rahe hou usi ne maar diya us virat ko jou pagalon ki taraf usse pyar karta tha..mar gaya woh aur woh maanvi uske liye..
Vn-viratt..
He also stoop up..
V-dost banke aye hou fir dushmani mat jodo..koi maanvi nhi meri life main..koi pyaar nhi...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Part-10
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virat abt to left bt stoped as he hear viren..
Vn-asi kon si galti hou gai maanvi se?
V-galti?..hahahaha..galti nhi..usne tou game khela..pahele uski bahen ne..fir usne..aditi..jisne mere pa se unka sapna chhin liya tha..mujhse meri feelings..stoneehearted bana diya tha mujhe..
Vn-think-aditi???...maanvi ki sister?...kaise??...
V-continue-aur manvi..shayad kuch baki rahe rahe gaya tha..jo todne aai thi..nd dont worry usne ye kardiya..virat vadhera jo pahele feelings nhi jodta tha..ab apni feelings maar chuka hai..maar chuka hai us dil ko jisne us bit** se pyar kiya..
Vn-virattt...he shouted angrily...
Smile widly nd laughed..
V-ups...m sorry..bhool gaya tha tum bhi usike kayal hou..poor ur wife..
Vn-virat..apni limit me raho..
Viren try not to loose his temper..he understand that he is misunderstand something..very big..
Vn-maanvi kabhi woh nahi karegi jou aditi nee kiya..kyuki
v-oh plzzz..bandh karo uski vakalat..agar uske alava kuch aur baat karni hai tou ruk sakte hou.. Aur haa ur welcome agar ana chaho..raat me hotel me ek party rakhi hai maine..nyc to meet u..
Without waiting for any rpl he left the place...
Vn-tum bahot pachhtaoge mr.virat vadhera...
Nd with that he left from there...
In other way..virat get again fustraited nd over controlled..he need to calm himself..nd after that night..he always use to drink like hell nd he become out of controll..he ask for arrange another new girl for him nd send her in his hotel room...
In shimla...
Maanvi spend some peaceful time with kids..
At night..when she make every kid to sleep jeevika ask her to go home with her nd maanvi agreed..
Next day in shimla..
Maanvi nd jeevika sitting in hall nd having their morning tea with watching tv..
J-with fliping chennles-aur pata hai..america me main hume bilkul time spend karne ko nhi milta tha..is liye main viren ko yaha le aai..mini vacation k liye..aur saath hi me hospital ki visit bhi hou gai..
M-just smile..
J-warna viren uff..bahot unromentice hai..
M-i know..
J-laughed...
Just than they heared someone's voice..
-really?
Both turned towards that direction nd found viren entering in hall with placing his bag nd coat on side table..;
j-happily..jumped out from couch nd put remote on side nd rush towards him-virennn...
Maanvi also got up..bt stood there only to gve them some space..
Virika hugged to eachother..
J-i missed u..
Vn-me too..
J-come..
Nd they walk towards maanvi..
Vn-come near her nd hug her from side-how r u now?
M-smile little-main thik hoon
vn-m sorry main ase chala gaya woh actually kuch important kaam tha..
M-its ok..
J-achcha tum baitho main tumhare liye chai bana ke lati hoon..
Vn-haa..
Nd with that jeevika left for tea nd viren sit with maanvi..
Vn-umm..maanvi..
M-haa
vn-mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi..
M-janti hoon..main yaha kaise?..virat kaha hai?..humare bich kya hua hai?..yahi naa?
Vn-hmm..
M-virat aur main yaha humare honeymoon k liye aye the..
Vn-kya?
M-hmm..janti hoon shocking hai..shaadi k 6 months baad..
Smile little..
M-tum jante hou humari shaadi kaise hui thi..ek shart pe..nd as mujhe challenges pasand hai maine us 1 saal ka challenge liya..lekin waha virat jeet gaya..aur mujhe usse shaadi karni padi..kahi na kahi..mere dil me use liye kuch tou tha..bas main use apnaa nahi chahti thi..
Tears slip from her eyes..she look down..viren come near her nd hug her from side..
M-continue-virat ne shaadi k baad bhi kabhi mujh pe ek pati hone ka koi force nhi dala..ek dost ban k raha..nd uski comforte kab main uske pyar me pagal hou gai pata hi nhi chala..main janti thi ki sirf apne pyar ka confession kafi nhi tha humare relation me..ek husban nd wife ka rishta humne kabhi nhi share kiya..aur kahi na kahi virat ki ankhon me kai baar..kai baar maine woh feelings dekhi..lekin mere liye usne apni feeling ko daba k rakhkha..main..jise apna sab kuch maan chuki thi..ab usse kya fasla rakhna..bas ye soch kar ye trip plan ki..lekin yaha...
She stopped as they hear ''..virat vadhera the number one buiessness men...
Viren nd maanvi both look at that direction nd saw him in tv..
Reporter-aaj unke hotel party main bina apni wife aye hai..nd jab unse pucha gaya ki unki wife party se nadarad kyu hai?..tou uniye unka reaction..
They saw his clip..
As reports starts asking abt maanvi..
V-excusme?...m sorry bt main kisi maanvi ko nahi janta...woh jinda hai mar gai i dont care...
Again reporta starts quetioning..
Viren imigeatly switch off the tv nd turned towards maanvi..he felt too bad to see her like this..
She still looking at tv without blink..
Vn-maanvi..he place his hand on her sholder..
Vn-sab thik hou jayega..plz..
M-wipe her tears nd again look at tv-kya main job kar sakti hoon?
Vn-haa?
M-yaha nahi..
Vn-just staring at her..
M-plz mujhe yaha se dur le chalo..
Vn-pull her in hug..
M-hug him back nd cried badly..
Vn-main le jaunga tumhe yaha se dur..usse dur..is dard se dur..main hoon saath tumhare..tumhara dost..he thought..
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sorry for long wait
thanks for all 20 likes in last updates..
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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precap-
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next parts starts from past..
That valentine pary nd revale that hidden reason in end of past...
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good night...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
but i cant't handle anu more suspence
please tell wat happened between them
awesome update
nd update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ek se mann nhi barta...
Update part 20 soon khushi...
Part 9 was nice...
Virat n viren convo... it stole the show...
Waiting fr more...

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