Khatta Meetha Pyaar ~ KR OS

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Khatta Meetha Pyaar

Kriya: jiju aap aapne iss baatmez bhai ko kuch samjhao na..

Rey: tune mujhe baatmezz bola.??

Kriya: haan..!! kyu sunahi nhi diya kya..?? baatmezz kahi ke

Rey: haan..!! aur tum toh MISS COMPLAINT BOX

Kriya: tumne mujhe complaint box bola..??

Rey: haan..!! kyu sunahi nhi diya kya..?? complaint box kahi ki

Kriya: tum toh copycat ho

Swayam: ohho guyzz stop it yaar..!! kbhi toh laadna band karo

Kriya: jiju dekho na aapka bhai hi humesha ladne ko start karta hai

Rey: mein start karta ho aur tum toh...

But rey was cuted by swayam

Swayam: reyaansh chup kar aab..kyu humesha kriya ko tang karta reheat hai tu..?

Sharon: haye kyu mere itne pyaare dewar ko data rahe ho tum swayam..??

Rey: bhabhi..!! dekho na bhai humesha kriya ki side lete hai *making puppy dog face*

Swayam: Sharon ye jhoot bol raha hai iss baar bhi m sure isne hi kuch kiya hoga meri pyaari si saali ko tang karne ke liye

Sharon: aache kis baat pe se tum ye kehe sakte ho ki wo rey hi hai..kriya bhi toh hosakti hai na..??

Swayam: kyu ki me rey ko bachpanse janta hoo...wo esa hi hai..

Sharon: aur me kriya ko bachpan se jaanti ho aur mujhe pata hai ki kriya ne hi kuch toh kiya hoga..??

Swayam: nhi rey ne..

Sharon: kriya

Swayam: rey

Sharon: kriya

And swaron started fighting on kriyaansh nd kriyaansh where looking at each other with helpless epression

Rey: baatcutter ye toh hume fight nhi karne ko bol rahe the and khudh hi shuru hogye

Kriya: haan..!! rey hume kuch toh karna chaiye..magar kya kare hum..??

Kriyaansh: chup betho tum dono...

In an instant swaron stopped fighting

Kriyaansh: kya guyzz aaj ke din toh maat fight karo plzz

Swaron where looking at them with a face like *wht the hell ye hume bolna chaiye aur ye hume bol rahi hai*

Sharon: aacha magar guyzz tumdono laad kyu rahe the..??

Rey: bhabhi aapki iss pagal behen ne mujhe baatmezz kaha..bhabhi me aapko baatmezz dekhta ho kya..??

Sharon: nhi rey..tum toh bohot aache ho...aur kriya tumne isko baatmez kyu kaha..??

Swayam: haan kriya batao..me tumhare saat ho...

Kriya: jiju aapke iss pagal bhai ne mere baal kharab kar diye...dekho

Rey: kharab nhi kiye ulta aache kiye dekho

And he again messed kriya's hair

Kriya: dekha jiju wapis kharab kiye issne mere baal

Swayam: rey tum kya animal ho kya..??

Kriya: haan haan batao rey tum jaanvar ho kya..??

Rey: yes sweety me jaanvar ho tumhara

Kriya:*confused* kya..??

Rey: sweetheart tum meri JAAN ho nd me tumhara VAR(husband) so band gaya na me JaanVar...

Listening to this all four started laughing kriya blushed and hugged rey

Sharon: god..!! tum dono bilkul bhi baache ho...kab sudhroge tum dono..??

Swayam: saach me Sharon inn dono ko dekhke lagta hi nhi hai ye dono shaadhi shudha hai..nd aaj innlog ki 2nd anniversary hai..

Nd then swaron hugged kriyaansh nd wish them happy anniversary.

Swayam: so tum dono ka idhar hi khade rehene ka irrada hai ya cake bhi kaatne ka hai..??

Kriyaansh: haan hai na..

Sharon: toh chale cake kaatne ko..??

They all four reached the main hall where party was going on a huge triple level chocolate cake was keep in middle of the hall all kriyaansh friends where present in the party.

Kriyaansh along with swaron went to the centre where the cake was keep all others all gather over there. Kriyaaansh were going to cut the cake but at that time kriya faint and on correct time rey cought her.

Rey tried to bring back kriya to her sense but it all went into vain. Rey became hyper as kriya was not reacting. He caaled doctor nd made kriya lie down on the bed.
Doctor came and checked kriya. Rey was still in hyper mood nd swaron were trying to cool him down. Doctor came out of the room.

Rey: doctor is everything all right..?? why did she faint..??

Doctor: Mr. Singhania clam down..kriya is allright nd there is a good news for u..

Rey looked at doctor in confusion

Doctor: congratulation Mr. Singhania kriya is pregnant.

There was no end for rey's happiness after hearing it. He went inside the room and huggeg kriya tightly.

Rey: kriya can u believe m going to become dad nd u mom..

Kriya just smiled at rey's behavior

Rey: kriya thnk u every much this was the best gift I ever got thnk u..

Kriya: mee too rey.

And then they both kissed each other passionately showing how much happy they are with the news.

THE END

~*~*~*
heya peps..!!
here is ma 3 OS..
hope u guyzz like it..
do hit like tab nd leave ur reviews back😊
P.S madhu..le post kardiya aab bada wala comment de..😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
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res!!!!
yes!!!! yes yes
me first!!!!!🥳
wel cuming to the update accha tha!!!!!
fab tha!!!!
sacchi mereko aga ki kriyaansh are not married and swaron ki anniversary par aaye hain...
and wahan par rey kria ko propose karega!!!!!!
par ulta hua!!!!!!😆
kriyaansh ki anniversary thi!!!!!
hayyyeee unkiii fight sooo cute!!!!!
and rey JaanVar!!!!!!!
sooo sweeettt@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and den kria faint...
rey hyper!!!!
ahhahahhahaaa
and rey so childish jab usse malum chala kria is pregnant!!!!!
hayeee love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
abhi i luv u !!!!!!!
tune ek update de hi dia...
and wo bhi itna sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sooo nice!!!!!!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is for me 😃
res
unres

it was amazing...
the story was so cute.. KR anniversary
their cute fights...
god i missed these fights so much ❤️
and when kriya fainted baap rey... rey ki toh hawaiya udd gayi 😆😆

love kriyaansh a lot
super cute OS
loved it
thanks for the PM
do write more and do PM me
love reading your works


Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweetypie jhakas os tha 👍🏼
amazing
mindblowing
superb
cute
lovely
splendid
marvelous
awsum
KR fyt scene to mast tha
nd meri wish puri karne ke liye thank u 100 much
ise padhke maza hi ata
i read it twice
KR ka khata-meetha pyar hi to hume deewana bana deta h
nd is os me bhi yahi h KR ki nok-jhok
loved it very much 😃
Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Job Maine update read krna start kra mjhe idea bhi nhi that that kriyansh were married...
Nnd their cute fights ...ohh god missed them alottt...
And at the end rey's hhapinesss ...ahh loved loved them alottt...
Amazing work dear...
Thnx for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it abhi 🤗

:)

Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome cute os.. i thought KR r not married n its a spl day for swaron from d way they were fighting n complaining to sharon n swayam .. loved d cuteness in d os... loved d way rey said he s jaanvar by a different meaning... loved it.. wow kria s pregnant n rey got a best gift from kria on their anniversary... awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a superb and fabulous os... loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww it was damn cuteee
i totally loveddd ittt☺️
well-written abhi🤗
keep writing moreee👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing update
superb
cute
mind blowing
loved it

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