Sasoo ki zarurat hai tu..KR os check pg5

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Pooja di. .
Yeh cheating hai. .
Jaldi nxt part update karo. .plz jaldi. . .
And yup. .di change it frm ONE SHOT TO TWO SHOT.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

amazing !!!

that is all can say right now

it was mind blowing

but please update the next part soon

PS. do PM me it to me...

i'm waiting 😳

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payal sood

@love_arsha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing update...
Loved lovved loved it allottt...
I reading update m litteraly crrying 😭
U made me cry...
Poor kriyaansh suffered alottt...
Even. Sw...he hurt aalott
Thanx dear for pm me
And update soon next part

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

res
will comment after reading d whole update

update soon

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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow nice one...waiting for next part...update it soon...😊

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Supab update
love it
it was so painful
all emotion touches my heart
n hope kria will be fine

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautiful updt
Emorional kar dita yaar
Bt beautifully written
Rey's feeling on losing his love swayam's feeling on loaing his bff were amazingly deacribed
N after knowing kria is in hospital rey condition n upar se smriti is blaming him
Feeling sad for rey
Want to read nxt pt
Jaldi updt nxt pt

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Neha

@Neha_KR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

mindblowing update
loved d title
beautifully penned down
u r an amazing writer
u made me cry
waitin for next part nd pls update chahat ya ibadat
loved it very much

Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago

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jasmeet kaur

@dilkriyarey

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Omg omg...u mad me cry literally...
Freaking awesome...
Loved it...
Aur sm faltu me rey ko blaming...
Omg poor rey kitna toot gaya...
Kriya ko kya hua jo icu me hai...
N sw apni bff ko iss halat me dekh fha hai...
Hope sab jaldi se theek hojaye...
Aur voh kutta kamina harami shivam saala usine kr ko esi halat me dala hoga...
Auf last me voh dialogue...kaun hai voh...
Itna suspence omg...!!!!
Getthing totally confused...
Uff itna bada comment...
Plz jaldi naya os post kardo...
N do pm me plZzz...
Awesome beautifully written...