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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Awesome update!!!! Loved it😊

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

These two are really tom and jerry and thier EGO is like argg...

Wonderful update.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Amazing update...loved it... 😃

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

thanks for the pm rashmi

OMG i could not stop myself from laughing aloud when i read about nani's dialogues

""Arnav!!!! Are you GAY??? Why didn't you tell me??? Why didn't I know??!!!!!!!!""

Arnav ...GAY...How on earth can someone think like this?

and the roar of the ferocious lion bubling with desire.omg cant wait much to c this side of arnav

i loved the way u portrayed the intense emotions which became a backbone for this update as well as FF

Loved the following sentence very much

"I will THROW you down the terrace if you utter another nonsense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he gritted threateningly!

Edited by madhusquare - 12 years ago

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Amazing Update!!
Small incidents between Arshi made them Understand that they like each other...
But for their BIG FAT EGO didn't let them to admit it..
Waiting for next..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

What to do with these two

They shall be the death of one another

Really nani any you think he is gay

Man that was funny

Boy what was that what ever it was sure was funny

Hmmm so what is in her past

When he said about parents she went dull

She has no one

Which is why she's living as PG

But what happened

Waise they are attracted to one another

But wont accept it either

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Thank you so much for the very long update, it was totally worth it as this story is amazing.

I so prefer ASR to Arnav and you have portrayed his character perfectly in this story,

The update was absolutely brilliant and amazing,

Love the way Khushi was in disguise wearing Arnav's shirt and he recognised her.

Khushi's speech about how can he recognise her was brilliant and so funny,

Can't believe Nani thought Arnav was gay, PMSL.

So I'm guessing Khushi has had a painful relationship with her parents as Arnav's statement bought tears in her eyes.

The terrace part was amazing, Arnav is so attracted too Khushi as he wants to stay away from her but also wants to be close to her.

Loved the part where they were standing in very close proximity, I honestly thought Arnav was going to kiss her.

I can just imagine there first kiss to be very strong, powerful and very passionate.

Awww loved the caring and concerned Arnav as he made Khushi coffee and even carried her down to the kitchen, but it's a shame Khushi spilt the coffee by mistake and Arnav was left very angry.

I hope Khushi will tend to his burns, can't wait for the next update.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

after reading the update, only one word came to my mind--- lovely. u write so well, u know that right??
i loved the update.
the nok-jhok of Arnav -Khushi are so funny and the way u have presented them are something applaudable. i liked the entire disguise scene and Gay part was so funny...😆! and terrace scene was superb. 😛
what is khushi's past. plz reveal something about that. am really curious to know.
till then waiting for the next update.

Edited by celinawalter - 12 years ago