tr---two shot os----by Zoha - Page 2

Originally posted by: PRASSI

That was amazing, emotional and heart touching dear!!!

Truely an amazing concept...!!!

Hope Rey will be fine soon...!!!!

Hope feelings between Taani and Rey will grow soon...!!!

So plzzz update soon dear..!!!

Originally posted by: raddhi

Aww it's emotional n
Damm good stry luvly thanks
For pm

Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

Superb starting
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon

Originally posted by: nidaTaarey

Suprbbb :) update the nxt pt soon.
Plzzz update the nxt pt of rusted tale

👏Hayye Taani is a doctor!!!!😃 You know how I love doctor stories!!!😃(I am in Dill Mill Gayye Land Now!😳)...And it has Dr.Atul, Dr. Sapna and most importantly ...My ARMAAN!!!(Need I say more? You know that I faint at the mention of this particular name!😳)

She always used to get a creep feeling at his messages---not that he wasn't sweet...he really was and had been a very good support to her after the untimely death of her father...but his messages just made her shrivel up---for no reasons---rather reasons she didn't want to accept.

Oh So your dearest Shantanu Maheshwari is a baddie here! Interesting!😲

I just loved the part when Tani recalls the Horrific' incident...God that was gross!🤢

And you have a way of keeping suspense..👍🏼.

The moment Rey entered the story, it took a ver interesting turn.😃...

And ooh the cute little flashback..😊

The first day he had come to our building I had worked late at the hospital and came home at about 1 at night. And at 1:30 he had rang my bell to say hello and how he just realized that I came home. that was not just the annoying part...I slammed the door on his face...yes the very first day he came home. Now don't laugh at that Kirti

But the sad part is that Rey commited suicide...for that shakti girl...well that's bad!

And My favourite lines-

the carefree smile with which he had rung my bell...shit that had been swept away...and so badly smeared by blood all around that no one could say that he was the reckless brat I was referring to.

But he was and I was aware.👏

And one more thing-

Walking into the hospital with his hand wrapped around mine I think I had never been more desperate to help a person.

The above lines amazingly explain Taani's complex feelings...awesome..👏..

...the feeling I get when I hold him...it is out of the world...I ma not a despo and you know that...but holding Rey feels right...it feels perfect...it feels just FAST and SLOW" ...

Aah this was sheer bliss...great lines.👍🏼..

And did I mention the music was fab!! Beyond perfection!

Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static❤️

So proto this was my 'dissection' of your story😆...loved it to bits and you know that I don't even watch D3 but still Romance is romance! Lovely concept and a great title😊...automatically holds your attention...

Continue this SUPER SOON and yeah Do Pm me!😃

PS. Thanks ki iss time tune apni Bestie ko apne hidden talents ke bare main bata diya!😆

(My comments in blue)

Awesome start chapter dear
Loving it , its different rey as patient
Taani as doc, per taani toh rey se love
Karti hai , per rey ko yeh kab feel hoga
Kya vo theek ho kar taani se utna hi pyar karega
I want taani love to be complete
Plz post next part soon

Wow well done yaar
Amazing job
i loved d first part
n i m so glad to read such a different concept
i totally loved it
plz updt nxt part soon

super awesome
its really diff frm al othr stories
loved reading it

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

👏Hayye Taani is a doctor!!!!😃 You know how I love doctor stories!!!😃(I am in Dill Mill Gayye Land Now!😳)...And it has Dr.Atul, Dr. Sapna and most importantly ...My ARMAAN!!!(Need I say more? You know that I faint at the mention of this particular name!😳)

She always used to get a creep feeling at his messages---not that he wasn't sweet...he really was and had been a very good support to her after the untimely death of her father...but his messages just made her shrivel up---for no reasons---rather reasons she didn't want to accept.

Oh So your dearest Shantanu Maheshwari is a baddie here! Interesting!😲

I just loved the part when Tani recalls the Horrific' incident...God that was gross!🤢

And you have a way of keeping suspense..👍🏼.

The moment Rey entered the story, it took a ver interesting turn.😃...

And ooh the cute little flashback..😊

The first day he had come to our building I had worked late at the hospital and came home at about 1 at night. And at 1:30 he had rang my bell to say hello and how he just realized that I came home. that was not just the annoying part...I slammed the door on his face...yes the very first day he came home. Now don't laugh at that Kirti

But the sad part is that Rey commited suicide...for that shakti girl...well that's bad!

And My favourite lines-

the carefree smile with which he had rung my bell...shit that had been swept away...and so badly smeared by blood all around that no one could say that he was the reckless brat I was referring to.

But he was and I was aware.👏

And one more thing-

Walking into the hospital with his hand wrapped around mine I think I had never been more desperate to help a person.

The above lines amazingly explain Taani's complex feelings...awesome..👏..

...the feeling I get when I hold him...it is out of the world...I ma not a despo and you know that...but holding Rey feels right...it feels perfect...it feels just FAST and SLOW" ...

Aah this was sheer bliss...great lines.👍🏼..

And did I mention the music was fab!! Beyond perfection!

Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static❤️

So proto this was my 'dissection' of your story😆...loved it to bits and you know that I don't even watch D3 but still Romance is romance! Lovely concept and a great title😊...automatically holds your attention...

Continue this SUPER SOON and yeah Do Pm me!😃

PS. Thanks ki iss time tune apni Bestie ko apne hidden talents ke bare main bata diya!😆

(My comments in blue)

Zoha awesome story😃..