Arshi FF~~'Mine' #4 [Part 24-27] Thread#5:Link-Pg1 - Page 5

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Hi shruti

Found your story and read it in one go...amazing story

Beyond our ideas of right-doing and wrong-doing,
there is a field. I'll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.
Ideas, language, even the phrase each other'
doesn't make sense any more.

The aforementioned quote by Rumi is very apt for your story according to me.

As Khushi said she chose between the lesser of the two evils.

Coming to the story the chemistry between both the pairs Arnav-Khushi and Mathur-Jerry is awesome...

Arnav is slowly falling for his mistress and it is bringing in a change in him. and Mathur is a brother that every girl desires. When you mentioned jerry for the first time I thought it has to do something with tom and jerry . it was quitea shock that it was taken from jaleby and cherry

Khushi though being treated as mistress will always be in debt towards Arnav because he gave him the second life which she was in much need. She finally got education which prepares her for a future happy life.

Arnav's lust let him take Khushi under his wings, but it is gradually changing into love.

Mathur's story was heart touching he lost every loved one and now just have two support- Arnav and Khushi. Hope you do not write about any situation in which he have to choose one.

Now this Dev character is shady. Khushi would be alone . No Aman no Arnav. I hope nothing bad happens.

Great story, update soon

congrats and waiting for part 14

congratulatios on the neww thread

Congratulations on the new thread 😃

Big wala congo for d new thread :D

Congrats for a new thread!

Waiting for the next chapter.

u r online...are you going to update?? 😃

Read all all your chapters in one go and it's brilliant. Such a talented writer. Loved it.. Please do write soon waiting