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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Aimmy ur first piece and so beautifully written...
Loved every bit of it...

Their love was soo selfless and true...

"Shhh I know u love blabbering but mere kam ki bat main sun chuka hu...now I don't want to hear anything else." Just loved this line...

The way they understood each other was just amazing...
Khushi came to the concert for him... 😃

Every emotion, every moment was perfectly described... 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

This OS has touched my heart...
The song was beautiful...Loved it...

Aimmy I think you should write more...
And thanks to CC n Pooja for pushing you to write and post it...

Love you sweetie... ❤️

Edited by avni_barun - 12 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

mee too

Aiimmyyy u rocked girl

Damn it was so perfect

Cheeni ka piyadkr singer hai isliye tu asr ko v singer bna di

Khushi and her nonstop blabbering

She really said arnav to breakup bcz he didnt cnfess his love to d world and moreon dey r much diff 😲😲

Dis sanka devi i tell u

Bt i liked d way arnav porpsed khushi hayyeee

Aimmy main boli thi tjhe

Its nt bkwas

and nw its proved 😳😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

not talking to any1

Edited:)

Mere hi birthday mein I am third:(

Coming to the story, it was perfect. I loved reading it.

I knew you would do great Dhanno, confidence you see..!!

After reading this, I instantly came to the conclusion that you made ASR rockstar just because of your Jiju😳

ARK is also a rockstar..!!

I am so proud of you Dhanno.

You won't believe the day you posted it, since than I keep visiting my posts and from there I go to your OS and feel so happy reading all the comments:) You made my day. This is the best birthday gift anyone could get.😃

Okay so Khushi was a bit insecure because she thought she wasn't good enough for Arnav but at the end Arnav made her realize that how important she is to him and that too in a grand way..!!

I loved both of them specially the lines where is asks Khushi to stop because he had already heard what he wanted to. An amazing line by Arnav.

Loved the song you used, apt for the situation.

At the and Love won the battle.

I would love if you write again😳

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!!!!! Dis is ur 1 ever wrk????? Unbelievable... 😲 U wrote lyk a professional writer...

Cumng back...

I luvd d OS, concept wise n writing wise both...

I'm in luv wid ARNAV...

Hayeee... Wat a cuteee way 2 propose his lady love... Mar gayi mai... 😆 😉

Luvd ur song selection... 😃

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. in one wrd... 👏 👏 👏

Luv u too swthrt... Muahhh... 🤗

P.S. U shud write more... 😃

Edited by asthagarwal - 12 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

res

unres

AIMMMEEEYYY?

IS THAT YOU???😲

you write??😕

what the hell?😡

mujhe kisine bataya kyun nahi?🥱

yeh kya pagalpanti hai?

hamare beech mein ek writer pal rahi thi aur hame pata hi nahi tha??

BRUNO MARS???😲

and woh bhi one of my fav song by him???🤢

Aimmy, tune toh mera din hi bana diya!!⭐️

Khushi toh hamesha khushi hi rahegi!

khud bolke bhag gayi, arre beta dusro ko bhi baat karne do kabhi kabhi!😳

kabhi kisi aur ki baat sunogi, toh listening skills acche ho jaenge!!😆

awww, arnav and singer??😲

perfect combination!!!👏

kitna cute tha when he went on stage and said "this ones for u jaan"

and i was just left there, wondering where my arnav is lost!!!!😭

ab toh u have to give more of such os's if not an ss!!😉

thank u to ur group who made u write!!!🤗

Absolutely loved it!!!!😃

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 12 years ago

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

res
unres**

OMG!! U started writing😲
awsome piece aimmy..
loved it truely and loved d song😊
aww.. he proposed her in front of d whole world..
that was so romantic and beautiful..
i was sad when she left him but i knew it he will
definetely make up with her..
loved it
brilliantly written yr..
u should strt writing more often now..
wonderful shot..😊
🤗

Edited by flutterlashes - 12 years ago

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LiNdASoUmZ

@LiNdASoUmZ

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG OMG OMG!!!
Yr chutney kya likhti hai tu,it was damn gud OS...
It brought me goosebump,i m actually dreaming..
Rockstar arnav n simple khushi it was damn awesome.. 🤗

Edited by MyluvASR - 12 years ago

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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

R

UNRES

tujhe na ek zor se kheeckar marna chahiye😡😡 kya kaha tune, u dont know to write😡 aur ae kya hien babuji ka thullu😡😡
itna acha likhthi hien aur kehthi hien I cant write😡😡

ok lets come back to the story...😆

kya baath hien...mast hien ...rula diya tune😭😭😭 it was so cute and innocence bhari thi ismein😳

aur kya kahu mein...bas teri tarah cute tha🤗 aise hi likha kar ...😳😳😳😳

Edited by ajoop - 12 years ago