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Posted: 11 years ago
Supercool update πŸ‘
It was good to see my Sam back ☺️☺️☺️☺️
Jaan laga di mere Sam ne ... apna honeymoon chhod ke Arshu ki help kar raha hai bechara πŸ˜‰
And now what is this? ... One particular line caught my attention and my brain has started working overtime again 😎 ... will PM u about this doubt πŸ˜‰
Now the next part ...Believe me ... if this torture scene was actually part of a TV show, Censor board would have slammed them 😳 ... it was gory but well written ...😳
Sick man Shikre 😑😑😑
Vrikar ka wicket gaya 🀣🀣🀣🀣
trying to look at Bhavna Tai Chori chori chupke chupke 🀣🀣🀣
But was caught red-handed 🀣🀣🀣🀣
Ajanta ki statue... sar pe padti hai to lagti bhi hai 🀣🀣🀣🀣
So Bhavna knows that Virkar has a crush on her and she loves poking fun at him 🀣🀣🀣 ... Sleep mode laptop 🀣🀣🀣🀣
Bhavna's back story was emotional... so true ... still there are women who have to suffer for no fault of theirs... but there are very few like her who fight against all the odds πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ ... she not only rebuild her own world but also helped other women like her giving them a hope and courage πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Sad about that girl whose parents sold her... sick people 😑😑😑
I have seen cases in Crime Patrol where parents have sold their daughters or pushed them into flesh trade 😑😑😑 ... just feel that such parents should be publicly stoned to death 🀒🀒🀒 This is exactly what they deserve 😑😑😑
Ahannn... Apparao getting the burns from the fire that he himself ignited πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
He seriously underestimated Arshad πŸ˜‰
And how could he forgot that this is politics... no one is ur permanent friend or enemy ... its all about the circumstance πŸ˜‰
Gutterworm.🀒... hit his wife when he couldn't bear the truth 😑
Aisha-Arshad part was heart wrenching ... Arshad still has no feelings for her and Aisha still has her hopes that he might come back to her life 😭😭😭 ... its complicated 😳😳
Pre-cap part 1: again... it relates to my doubt above that I will be sending u in a PM πŸ˜‰
Pre-cap part 2 : like others ... I too hope that some miracle happens during the iddat period 😳😳
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Supercool update πŸ‘

It was good to see my Sam back ☺️
Jaan laga di mere Sam ne ... apna honeymoon chhod ke Arshu ki help kar raha hai bechara πŸ˜‰

😳 Aww...Thankfully Annu is understanding. Both of us will send him on a long double honeymoon soon!πŸ˜†
And now what is this? ... One particular line caught my attention and my brain has started working overtime again 😎 ... will PM u about this doubt πŸ˜‰
Ahem...Ahem...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Now the next part ...Believe me ... if this torture scene was actually part of a TV show, Censor board would have slammed them 😳 ... it was gory but well written ...😳

I wanted to do that all myself the dirty swine 😑😑
Sick man Shikre 😑😑😑
Vrikar ka wicket gaya 🀣
trying to look at Bhavna Tai Chori chori chupke chupke 🀣🀣🀣
But was caught red-handed 🀣
Ajanta ki statue... sar pe padti hai to lagti bhi hai 🀣

Ha!Ha!Ha! Kya Kare Kya Na Kare Yeh Sun Lo Mere Bhai
Koi To Bataa De Iska Hal O Mere Bhaai
Ke Ek Taraf To Us Se Pyaar Kare Hum
Aur Usko Inhe Kahne Se Dare Hum..
.❀️

Woh Phoolan Devi se pyar ke khaatir pit te rehta hai!πŸ˜›
So Bhavna knows that Virkar has a crush on her and she loves poking fun at him 🀣🀣🀣 ... Sleep mode laptop 🀣

Khaahi Peeli keyboard bang kar raha thaπŸ˜†
Bhavna's back story was emotional... so true ... still there are women who have to suffer for no fault of theirs... but there are very few like her who fight against all the odds πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ ... she not only rebuild her own world but also helped other women like her giving them a hope and courage πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
😑
Sad about that girl whose parents sold her... sick people 😑😑😑
I have seen cases in Crime Patrol where parents have sold their daughters or pushed them into flesh trade 😑😑😑 ... just feel that such parents should be publicly stoned to death 🀒🀒🀒 This is exactly what they deserve 😑😑😑
Wasn't one girl handicapped?🀒 It takes all kinds to make this world. There are some like Bhavna who raise their own kid and also help other people's children make their way in the world. All one needs is love and courage in one's heart.

Ahannn... Apparao getting the burns from the fire that he himself ignited πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
He seriously underestimated Arshad πŸ˜‰
And how could he forgot that this is politics... no one is ur permanent friend or enemy ... its all about the circumstance πŸ˜‰
Gutterworm.🀒... hit his wife when he couldn't bear the truth 😑
Aisha-Arshad part was heart wrenching ... Arshad still has no feelings for her and Aisha still has her hopes that he might come back to her life 😭😭😭 ... its complicated 😳😳

He is hurt badly. One young woman who had been in his care & protection lost her life only because he single mindedly pursued his enemies. He is eons away from finding domestic bliss for himself at this point!
Pre-cap part 1: again... it relates to my doubt above that I will be sending u in a PM πŸ˜‰
Pre-cap part 2 : like others ... I too hope that some miracle happens during the iddat period 😳😳

Some more gharelu drama on the wayπŸ˜†

Thanks for the comments B😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res II

missed this piece n you too much πŸ˜”
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update!
Bhavna Tai ws good...bt i knw a more beautiful Bhavna! *winks* my rukku baby!

after so many serious updates...in this one the entertainment package ws Virkar!

loved the insult nd humiliation of that filthy Apparao...

last bit part of th update also did hurt me...aisha mst b going thru so pain nd hurt na...

continue soon

love
Aisha

PS: off for a few days...so it'll b hard to cmmnt...bt do keep sending me PMs...i'll definately read nd cmmnt whenever i get time.
off for a month!
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Posted: 11 years ago
res..
soon unres..
do let u know..
do u missed me here...
tataz lol..
Piya_Malik thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Badi baghi-2 aayi hu commt. Karne...uff...I m soo busy personality...
Finally 3G Reliance rocks...kya running karta hai...

Ok no more bakwas...
Sorry yaar is baar just a tiny commt...


Hummm RR again...badhiya h...
Wov! Kya treatment kiya h shikhre ka...iske baap-bhai ki aankh!!!
Kameene jab khud pe aati h toh aise hi hota h...
Itna toh h ki apni betiyo ke liye phikar h...
Varna iske jaise apni khud ki betiyo ko b na chode!!
Kal ke epis me dekha na khud pe aai to gaya 12 ke bhav me...lol

Ha ree! Ab yakeen ho gya h ye saale sp vale writer humre posts ke copy karte h...rofl
Last se last me mera dialg bola tha arjun ne ar ab tera vala...lol

Apparav...arye wah! Kursi h bhaiya
Abhi teri...kal meri...lol
Sabko apni phikar h yha...
Virkar...rofl...bhawna tai...amazing chartr
Mrinal kulkarni as a bhawna...nice choice!!
Bechara virkar...door se hi raal tapka ra h...
Himmat ni kya paas jane ki...
Bhawna as a strong women...nice portrait for all women...
Hum aaurto ki zindgi bhi kya cheez banai baghwan ne...
Khud mard hai na...lol
Sare dard hum garibo ko...

Again Arisha...kafi tym baad...hope next updt me full arisha mile...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

awsm update! Thank you!😳
Bhavna Tai ws good...bt i knw a more beautiful Bhavna! *winks* my rukku baby! Of course! Koi shaq!😊

after so many serious updates...in this one the entertainment package ws Virkar! The words flew out of the keyboard! This one was easiest to writeπŸ˜†

loved the insult nd humiliation of that filthy Apparao...

last bit part of th update also did hurt me...aisha mst b going thru so pain nd hurt na...

continue soon

love
Aisha

PS: off for a few days...so it'll b hard to cmmnt...bt do keep sending me PMs...i'll definately read nd cmmnt whenever i get time.
off for a month! Have a lovely time dear! Will wait for you!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

res..
soon unres..
do let u know..
do u missed me here...
tataz lol..



Eagerly awaiting your comments dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Piya_Malik

Badi baghi-2 aayi hu commt. Karne...uff...I m soo busy personality...

Finally 3G Reliance rocks...kya running karta hai... Reliance ki Brand Ambasaador ban gayi kya?πŸ˜†

Ok no more bakwas...
Sorry yaar is baar just a tiny commt...


Hummm RR again...badhiya h...
Wov! Kya treatment kiya h shikhre ka...iske baap-bhai ki aankh!!!
Kameene jab khud pe aati h toh aise hi hota h...
Itna toh h ki apni betiyo ke liye phikar h...
Varna iske jaise apni khud ki betiyo ko b na chode!!
Kal ke epis me dekha na khud pe aai to gaya 12 ke bhav me...lol

Kaassh re! Sach aisa koi hota jo in suaron ko ghasit tha hua terrace pe le jaata aur phenk deta😑

Ha ree! Ab yakeen ho gya h ye saale sp vale writer humre posts ke copy karte h...rofl
Last se last me mera dialg bola tha arjun ne ar ab tera vala...lol

SP waalon kuch chori nai kiya! Yeh toh mere aur Sweetu mein ek anokhi connection ki wajah se hua❀️ Maine kuch socjha aur unhone woh keh diya!😳😳😳
Apparav...arye wah! Kursi h bhaiya
Abhi teri...kal meri...lol
Sabko apni phikar h yha...
Virkar...rofl...bhawna tai...amazing chartr
Mrinal kulkarni as a bhawna...nice choice!!
Bechara virkar...door se hi raal tapka ra h...
Himmat ni kya paas jane ki...
Halki halki mulakate thee dur dur se baate thee
Dhire dhire kya ho gaya hai mai kya kahu
Kyon ladkhadaye dhadkan, kyon thar tharaye tan mann
Kyon hosh meraa kho gaya hai mai kya kahuπŸ˜†
Bhawna as a strong women...nice portrait for all women...
Hum aaurto ki zindgi bhi kya cheez banai baghwan ne...
Khud mard hai na...lol
Sare dard hum garibo ko...
Ab kya bolun? Ek XX & XY combination ke loche ne meri toh vattt laga di hai!πŸ˜•

Again Arisha...kafi tym baad...hope next updt me full arisha mile...

Haan! Poori story hi unki hai!πŸ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago
Done, done London on 78!πŸ˜ƒ

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