Opposites attract16+ (virman ff)part 13 and onwards - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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baapre... update karo jaldiii 👏
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U R GOING TO UPDATE TONIGHT ????
WHERE IS UPDATE SWEETY ????
EGRLY WAITING FOR UPDATE @@!!!@@
UPDATE SOON DEA...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everybody for you wonderful comments and patience ! haye u guys are awsome! haha anyways this is a short update and not much happens but oh well i find it important and i dont want to rush. plz still comment plz? plz? pretty please with sugar on top and choclate fudge and icing and sprinkles and every thing you like on top . haha anyways comment big. and im sorry again for being late but the next update will be all virats pov and it will be just amazing and ill update asap i promise (unless i die ) lol anyways enjoy :I was standing there stunned. Shocked on what just happened a moment ago. I found an old friend but within a second I lost him again. I never thought my destiny had such weird consequences. I blink and I could remember mine and virats childhood in panchgani. I now after virats leaving realize that the person I have fallen in love with is the same person I have had the best time in my life with. I started loving virat before I knew he was laddo but now I just have way more admirance for him. "maam your drinks" I hear a voice say from right behind me. It turnaround from the sudden call and look at the waiter straight in the eyes. I gazed into his eyes noticing my sudden stare freaked him out a little. I couldn't blame him I was so confused and wacked out. I shift my eyes to the tray he was holding, Virats coffee and my milk shake. The French vanilla cappuccinos aroma was swiftly filling the air. I could imagine virats sexy lips taking small sips of that hot coffee. His hot lips would feel so seducing against mine. "To go please" says jeevika walking towards me and I wiggle away from my thoughts and look at her. The waiter gives us both a smile "sure "and walks away.

"You okay champ?" she asks me while holding my left arm in assurance. I look at her with a cry baby face about to open my mouth. "I know, I heard everything". She says and pats my back. "I don't know what went wrong" I stammer with an extremely dry voice. " shhh " she says while wiping the lone tear falling from my eye.

At jeevikas house.

"I don't get one thing he apparently told you most of the story why can't you tell you the main problem?" she says while playing with her paddle ball. "I don't know ugh! This is taking over my life! Since the day I met virat I have been so busy in stressing about him! I'm done man!" I say in frustration but in reality I knew I actually liked him and not just liked him but liked him liked him, as we would say in elementary. "Well virat has broken off all records of running off, I swear he should run a marathon" she says while giggling. I stare at her in anger as I was not in the mood for humor. "sowwlieee " she says cutely and lies down beside me on her queen sized bed. "I'm sorry you are just being funny and I'm being an old auntie who hates shenanigans. Look at me! Remember in high school I used to be the craziest and wildest in class. Look at me now since college started I have become a grumpy troll. Ugh and all this is because of virat." I say hitting the pillow on my face while I'm lied down. "Oh calm down cut the guy some slack after all he is your bachpan ka sathi". A huge smile crept on my face as I remember our childhood days. " oye hoye bachpan mein kya huwa?" jeevika says with a mischievous smile. "era pagal we were just kids. I can't describe how it was it was just beautiful! We lived on the mountains. Those 3 month winter breaks where we would just be playing outside in the snow all day." I say with a huge smile "Wow how was it like?" She smiles with a fascinating look.

"Ho oh oh oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh

Socho ke jheelon ka shaher tha

Lehron pe apna ek ghar tha

Socho ke jheelon ka shaher tha

Hum na jo dekhe sapne pyaare

Sach tha saare, bas aur kya

Socho ke jheelon ka shaher tha

Lehron pe apna ek ghar tha

Hum na jo dekhe sapne pyaare

Sach tha saare, bas aur kya

Ho, ho ho ho ho, ho ho ho ho ho

Farsh tha pyaar ka khushbuon ki deewarein

Hum jahan baithe tha chain se din guzaare

Haan, farsh tha pyaar ka khushbuon ki deewarein thi

Hum jahan beth tha chain se din guzaarte

Palkein uthe palkein jhuke

Dekheti thi use bas yeh nazar

Socho ke jheelon ka shaher tha

Lehron pe apna ek ghar tha

Barf hi barf tha, sardiyon ka tha mausam

Aag ke samne haath sekte tha hum

Barf hi barf tha, sardiyon ka tha mausam

Aag ke samne haath sekte tha hum

Baithi rehti thi aaghosh mein

Rakh ke uske khaande pe sar

Socho ke jheelon ka shaher tha

Lehron pe apna ek ghar tha

Hum na jo dekhe sapne pyaare

Sach tha saare, bas aur kya"

I sing and look at her with a big smile. Jeevika looked at me with fascination and started clapping. I blush a little. "Anyways that was all the past" I say with a sad face. Jeevika looks at me with pity. "Hey you never know maybe your future is with virat. Gosh if that happens you two would never stop and would make dozens of babies' haha "she says while laughing. I look at her in anger giving her a seriously?'. She looks at me with a guilty expression" showlliee" she says cutely. "You better be!" I say in frustration! "Anyways I should get going" I say and start to pack up my things. "No stay here please, you need company" she says holding my bag from one side. "No let me go" I say pulling my bag towards me. "No you are staying" she says snatching my bag. I snatch it back and she tries to grip it, we struggle like that for a few minutes till she lets go on purpose so I would fall and I do. I land straight on my butt and my butt bone hurts like crazy, if there is a thing called butt bone. But along with me my entire bag fligged in the air and dropped on the floor and everything came out. We both right away spotted virats ipad mini. "Did you read all parts of the diary yet?" she ask me while gazing at it. "No" I say. We both look into each other's eyes for a second and then run for it. We run like hungry tigers wanting the juicy dear all to itself. I run and jum landing on my chest just in time to grab the ipad before her. "haha " I laugh.

She snatches the ipad from me and I grip it tighter and we both struggle like two mean muscular football players (rugby) fighting for the last goal. "Let go!" I yell! "You let go" she yells. "Why the *uck should i? It's about me why do you care? You should seriously mind your own business! You meddle so much!" I say and jeevika instantly lets go. I cheer for a second and then realize what I just said. Jeevika just looks at me like I scared her heart for life. I realize what I said was really mean. Like she was just helping me and she was happy and excited for me. "I'm showwllieiie?" I say cutely just like jeevika does. jeevika looks at me with a pissed face. "Go home" she says rudely and picks up my bag and shoves it on my arms. I look at her in shock I never knew she would back out on me like that. " jeevika? Pehla virat now you? What is it walk out on manvi day?" I ask with fake tears rolling down my checks. Jeevika glances at me but turns the other way right away and fold her arms. "My sister from another mister forgive me?" I say and hold my ears and continue with my fake crying. She melted right away and came and hugged me " fine but we are going to read the diary together".

Im done

Hahah I know I know

Im tired

But hey I might write the next update within a few days

Maybe im sorry I knw im a jerk and the next update will be big and only and only virats pov! Okay?

So comment! plz? Please?

Precap: virats pov and virats bachpan memories from his diary

- Wo Bachpan Ki Neend To Ab Ek Khuwab Ho Gai, Kia Umer Thi Ke Raat Hui Aur So Gaye...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hiii dear and nice one

HAPPY DIWALI
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres in pg8😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Amazing Update sweety
liked it alot 😃

and wish a very happy Diwali😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
like jeeman bonding..
waiting for next update
precap seems interesting
continue asap
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh thank u friend ... update was really awesome .. although it was short I like it very much ... please update next part soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the updt... waiting eagerly to read virats pov... Cont asap :) and happy diwali
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice update jeevika and manvi bonding
superb waiting next update

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