Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

You have written it well but I am unable to decide whether Arnav is the killer or not..

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Paridhi

@kparidhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

okay...so a clue about the killer that he limps !!brilliant update

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Fabulous update...interesting...it is getting mysterious day by day...yes, there are too many questions and confusions...but, will wait till you reveal them as don't want to know the suspense...Arnav is following Khushi and wants to be with her...thanks for the PM.😛

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

feel rally bad for arnav he is getting his nightmares i guess its the flash back ,where he found his wife or some other thing...getting mysterious day by day...

and mr khan is suspecting arnav? but arnav is protecting kushi right by following her???

kushi is getting attracted to arnav, she wants to spend and enjoy time with arnav, i liked their moments from the starting theri first kiss to now it soo passionate...

suspense, suspense liked banners a lot, banners also looks soo intense and suspense...😛

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers..

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Livania Govender

@sarunarshi72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Great update. Loved it. Poor khushi, having to choose between her mind and her heart. Im guessing his nightmare was him walking in on his wife and best friend in bed. He is so possessive of khushi yet im not sure if his being genuine. The last part was so passionate. I really hope arnav isnt the serial killer. Continue soon

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BubblySanaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

as you might have expected...there a lot of questions coming up in my mind, while i read this story... that pulls me more towards it... like a moth

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Aftr impenetrable heart..dis is ur best story so far..m lovin it..d mystry d thriller..omggg..its jus amazinnn
Drr chemistry is so hottt...waitin fr next update!!
😊 😳

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namita11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Poor arnav...nightmares. .obviously he can't forget his past. Does khushi has anything to do with it??? I hope not.. itz lke he have a motive behind all this. I just hope he s not a killer

Why have u based tjis story in 1969?? Why not 80's or 90"s???

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

awsum updt..loved it..
wht the!! now wht with these nightmare of arnav?is it abt his wife..??
still der lot of ques ns confusion...
so khushi wanted to hate arnav nd trying to b away from him bt indeed like moth slowly pulling her towards arnav..
is arnav really falling for khushi? or only stalking her...??
da kiss was so passionate nd sensual...
egarly waiting for dis mystery to b unfold..
continue soon:)
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