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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats on the new thread Jen!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It's a well written update...

But I feel the external environments has overshadowed the internal ...

Initially it was meant to be period story.. Where a child bride gets married to a a litle older guy...

We are right now supposed to anticipate the coming together of Khushi and Arnav after a period of say 6 years of marriage,.but we are worried that Arnav is a murder suspect.. May get caught and put in jail or may get hanged also..

I know this period was of pre independence whatever u are writing is absolutely fine... Young educated boys were getting drawn in the freedom struggle... But the reality is a lot of them were jailed they were leading a life away from families... In hiding.,and all of it was not at all pleasant... It emotionally scars a lot f people...

So how do we overlook the the external ... What was supposed to Khushis coming of age... How can we over look Arnav's stress and agony...

Right now I am not bothered how Pranav has grown up to be...

I am more keen how Arnav and Khushi will get out of this murder mess and lead a peaceful life,..

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chenis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Congrats and waiting for the update 😳

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congrats Jen on the new thread... 👏 👏

Eagerly waiting for the update...

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MehreenAli

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Posted: 11 years ago

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That was simply awesome and mind blowing, hats of to ur writing and the selection of words, for me, u r my Jane Austin of this century...

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hope you get a chance to update tonight, the anticipation is killing me!

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pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Congrats on new thread... it's very well deserved! Waiting eagerly for next update...

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Congrats on the new thread...
Please update...

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Congrats for d new thread
waiting for d update

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Congratulations for the new thread. ..will read and comment soon

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