#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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ksen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

very nice update.hope ayaan and humeria find some proof.please continue soon

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Great update. .I knew she didn't faint. .. very good..she made him eat...Please continue soon. ..

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chichi220

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

amazinng zoya good stuff n brillainat stuff dilshad n najma

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

absolutely fabulous. I somewhat had a feeling that Zoe was pretending all this to get Asad to eat. well done, Zoe. you really can make him do anything you want, actually it's Asad's innocence that makes him believe everyone so easily yet he can't trust his love on the biggest issue.

I couldn't stop smiling widely hearing Asad address Zoe as Meri Jaan, he really cannot survive without her.

I knew it, so I did say that in my previous comment as well that I suspect t he Khan ladies, well now it's clear. cool. tit for tat Billi.

Oh Ayaan & Humi & r so cute. I get it, did Humi notice the color of the cloth being different from that of in the video? oh puleaassee let the billi get exposed soon.

Ok now you're off to somewhere or what?

well a hearty thanks for giving a quick update.

lots of love.

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

mast update!!!

zoya frankly scared be..bt she is a smart one here!!!..asad ko khana bhi khila diya!👏

dilshaad..n najma my god! i would never have guessed that they changed the nuts!!! wow!👍🏼

finally ayaan n humi found the evidence...eager to knw wat it is!😃

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Nice update...
Zoya is very cute!She is acting to make him eat his lunch!😛
Both ate from the same plate...and Dilshad-Nazma planned against Tanveer!😃
update soon...😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Sneaky Zoya😆..I likes...it was a lighthearted and fun update..I enjoyed readin it...keep it up gal..😊

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

RES

I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!!

IT WAS ALL AN ACT.

Okay. I really need to calm down. 😆😃

BUT SERIOUSLY! I knew it was an act!!! I DID NOT however expect Dilshad to play along. That was unexpected.

AWWW they way he was immediately taking care of her. I love love love that Zoya still argued with him. About how he can care so much but hate her at the same time. I loved that line. So freaking much. Like you have no idea. Sorry. I get a little passionate with your story. You're just that good with your writing. You seriously are.

And Ayaan and Humeira, CAN THEY GET ANY CUTER!? Ayaan is such a horny little boy 🤣 But it was so cute how he pulled her on to her lap. And YES YES YES THEY FOUND SOMETHING!!!!!!

😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago