#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

don tell me you wont update TODAY :'(

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: jeenia123
Wow. it was great finally something strike in his mind...
and moreover i am sure ayaan humaira will find some clue... just waiting for next part...

I hope they do. I can't stand this coldness from Asad towards Zoya. 😕

Will update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Divi.C
thank u
thank u
thank u
thank u
this update is superb...
finally some sence is knocked down in asad's brain...
n ayam n humera are so good atleast thee believe her...that is what is called friendship...
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He finally did, didn't he? Oh well, when AyRa are there to support Zoe, then have no fear!

I think...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: skavya
Superb update !!!!!
loved Ayaan & humeira...
finally something click in his mind...hope ayaan & humeira will find some clue from that recording...
waiting for the next...plz continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Will update soon and will let you know.

Oh I love those two too!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Divi.C
n thank u so much guys for whishing me...
THANK U SOOO MUCH...

Originally posted by: Divi.C
THANK U SOOO MUCH FRIENDS FOR WISHING ME...

No problem-o sweetie. We're all here for you! Remember that! May you always keep smiling!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: cool_sri
nice update...hope asad starts doubting tanveer now!!
AyRa are the sweetest!!!!!

Ehhh! Lol, hope so too. AyRa are most definitely the sweetest bunch, aren't they? Thank you for letting me know your thoughts!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: elenaa
Wow! wow! What an update! 👏

asad knew tat zoya was going to collapse [:D/]

now I get it...zoya dont u dare to leave asad...he cant live widout youuu 😭 😭

he was shaken to see her lying like a corpse in his arms 😭

I sort of expected tat doc wud say something like tat 😊

im in love wid zoya n humeira's bonding ⭐️ wish we cud see tat in d serial too 😃

and ayaan aka rabart he was caressing zoya's cheek...poor zoya was shocked 🤣

asad humeira ayaan hugg ❤️

ayaan n humeira...proud of youuu...well done 🤗

tanveer 😡 😡 huh trying to scare THE ZOYA FAARUQI 😆

and ended up hurting herself 🤣 serves her rite!

Thank you now the seed of doubt is planted in asad's mind 😳

evil u are...leaving a cliffhanger 😈

im definitely gonna stay tuned for d next chapter 😉

p.s I hope u are recovering? tat too 'ache se'? 😃

Thank you!

He did indeed know she was about to collapse. I felt that we needed a bit of AsYaness so I was like, "why not?"

Lol, told you. He needs her to live. Romeo and Juliet, I suppose 😳.

Doc is a saviour for me. Knocks some sense into Asad's brain at least.

Ikr? They hardly talk in the serial and I want them to interact so badly!

Lmao, Zoe was blown out of her mind.

The trio hug is also my favourite. I really wanted to show the bond that AyRa have with their Bhaijaan as well as Mona.

No one can scare our Zoe, she's too strong. It does indeed serve her right.

Seed of doubt planted and all it needs is a little bit of water and sunshine and I'm so sorry but I haven't put a cliff hanger in for so long. Cliffy was feeling left out 😃

Yes sweetie, I am recovering "ache se". ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
Wow that was AMAZING update..
Love AyRa alot..
Asad doubting Tanveer..
Tanveer will fall in her own trap soon...
AsYa hug was Awesome. ..
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM..

-Mariam-

Thank you!

Love them too and hopefully Asad does end up doubting Tanveer.

Thank you once again and will most definitely continue soon!

No problem!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian
Finally asad realizes something

😃

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Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

First of all, I just love love love your FF!

Everything, from your ideas to their execution is perfect to the T!

And I am a fan of your writing style,

The way you describe the scene so vividly that it brings it to life, but no so much detailed that the mind becomes a labyrinth.

Using simple words instead of annoyingly difficult ones.. I mean, if we really wanted to read the heavy words, we would've used the thesaurus!

Its definitely heavy. Pun intended.

All the best for the next update!

And Thank You! \(^0^)/

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