*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update amazingly good. cudnt be more better. Fantastic. Beautifully written. Loved evry it of it. update sooon

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

amazing update..
finally they both realized!!
😉
beautifully written..anjalis part wen khushi was vomitting was lol 😆 n nks bhussa was also too good 😉

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Awww what a Passionate Update...

Glad that Arnav realizes his love towards Kushi...

Happy Diwali dear.

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hadiqua

@adrastiathena

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

amazing update..so much of passion and emotin and hey! i did not receive the pm this time😆

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

OMG, what an update!

I'm ebbing in the world of ecstasy!

Finally they became one, they made love so passionately! I was having goose bumps while reading your sublime description. everything was so perfect; khushi was wearing red lehenga, with his mom's chunri, on their sexy bed inside Sheesh mahal! And most important is, they both confessed their love to each other.

When khushi was spewing and feeling sick, I thought did they already make love? Are you planning to show something in the FB? when Anjali also taunted her, i got confused. OK, it was just her sickness. But anjali is a sweet sister that told her about Arnav's feelings for her. It sure helped her to take her decision.

But I'm sad that you are planning to end the story. 😭 i will miss this tale so much.

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Woww..!tat was an awesum update...realy rly loved it. Waiting for the last update. Thanks for d PM.

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nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

wonderful update..
finally arnav has confessed his love to khushi...

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

at once even i thought that may she is preg but then i thought when did they do it...lol all the family is crazy...nyc update

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

I liked Anjali's part in making Khushi realize that Arnav has strong feelings for her
Really nice of NK to take this breakup very nicely

Arnav gave Khushi his mother's chunni
That's impressive