*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi

Really really nice n awesome update.

Finally Khushi is safe.


Khushi is safe!😃
Thanks for reading and enjoying the story!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

wow interesting what a climax Khushi what you did to Arnav

NK toh NK hai galat samay galat baate hugging dekha nahi
WiWY you should take up a new job of episode writing


Aww Chalhov! Really! A new job of episode writing!😃 I am jumping with joy!
Thanks!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sony_1234

Wow Amazing Update!!
Its like a movie climax scene.
Superbly penned done. Loved it


Awww! thanks for the complimnets!😃 I am in seventh heaven! ⭐️
Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

wiwy just loved it! i always love when shyam is bashed and banged up since you know how i feel about him. please continue writing my friend!


Thanks a lot. Cyn! I am glad bashing and banging Shyam made you happy!😃
Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

Loved the fall of Shyam
Where did NK come from...after all that he had to ask that question now




Shyam gaya to NK aaya! Sorr y Anita! 😳 😃
Will try to get rid of both. What say?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana1965

Loved the fall of Shyam
Where did NK come from


Wait and see...😉 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

this billu ma ko bechega😡

kamina ,isko toh uske hi villa k garden mai zinda gaar dena chahiye...bloody greedy..

hmm anjaliki dimag ki batti itni late kyu jalti hai??
oh arnav was in full angry young man mood..
seriusly arnav wants to go london..."want to smack his head"
i love how she crashed in his arms..
aaye haye darling...
waah arnav beat snakewa black n blue...ooho..and their family members are so funny.sab apna haath saaf karne aagaye..!!!

n.k😡
aagaye rang main bhang dalne...!!but yeah his single line was enough to tumble down the mighty asr.
and arnav...
"dil k tukdetukde ho gye"😆


wat the ,u want to end ff,no..u will not show the wedding??
anycase make sure they use their suhagraat bed😉


Thankyou so much for your witty comments! I was🤣 while reading them!
Since Arnav likes the suhag raat ritual best,pichhe se hi shuru kartein hai, badshah salamat! 😃 Theek hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asrnkkgsr

Superb update. Thank God!khushi is safe now. The last part where Nk says abt Khushi's decision- tat was realy painful for Arnav. Thnx fr d PM.


thankyou so much!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for reading and commenting always! 😃 I am delighted!
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Posted: 11 years ago

You liked, thanks!😃

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