~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

knock knock

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I know why he is angry!!

I know why he is angry!!!

So coming to the update...

It was beautiful and amazing...

Just loved the way you showed the words exchanged between the to-be-dads...

And then how Neha is coping up with it amazing...

I just loved Kria in here...

She is so caring and beautiful and lovely...

I just loved how you showed the slightly maternal side of Reyansh... ;)

How adorable...

I could so imagine him...

Waiting for next chapter... ^_^

Jaldi jaldi updating

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

res...

Unres...

okay i was going to be first but...🥱

the update was as usual lovely...

Rey is so caring and sweet...

loved how you showed each and every detail so beautifully...

Vickey is finally getting better...

loved the update...

hope to a get another update soon... (:

Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

loved ITT...

eeepzz!! Finally getting to see a whole new shade of Rey!!!

plz do updt d nxt prt soonishh...!!! :D

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Amazing update...

Loved the way u showed kriya Vicky n Rey Vicky bond...

The shopping was cute n Rey's dialogue..All ment arn't him...I loved tht part...

Plzzz update soon!!:):)

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Awesome update
Rey is so caring n sweet... vicky is now recovering.. i am so happy

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

lovely update..
I lykd bonding b/w rey-vicky,
nd kriya-vicky
nd kriyansh part was amazing
jst luvd d update
do update soon
thankx 4 d pm

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Amazing part aww luv kriya and vicky bond

Edited by dollydua - 11 years ago

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

as usual awesome update...vicky is getting better...

par rey ko achanak kya hau???? thanks 4the pm...

5 more chapters???😲

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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Awww!!!
M so sorry mania but all i felt like saying is a big fat awww!!!
I mean.. U expressed the emotions with such a purity/..
The bond btwn neha n rey... Even kriya and vicky...
N the most understAndin one betwn kriya and rey...
The times wen they need each other...
They have the support fr each other...
It was like sooo emotional.. N i luvd it :)

The small small points u include.. I want to appreciate them too..
Like "many men are not me"
Or maybe wen kriya cried in the shop..
Or even the small ponytail talk..
Also keyas responses under vickys hands...
All this ws really magical!!
Perfect username.. Magical mania!! :) :)
Ur stories touch my heart mania.. They really do!! :)
So keep writin n thnx fr pm:)

PS: if u reply to this comment.. Let me knw by scrappin or sumthin coz i wud luv to reply ur reply! Lol! :)