~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Manu jaan ... lovely chapppyyy ... 😃

Love the way kriya comforted him.. & asked him to tell her abt his probs...😊

Never seen rey so gloomy... kiri se zyada toh mujhe tension ho rhi thi... 😳😆

Rofl... family vapas ja rahi hai... aur ye yahan romance karing... see off karne ka riwaaz nhi h inme?? 😆

Vaise toh rey kahin bhi shuru ho jata h.. but iss baar kriya ne initiate kiya tha... 😉

Awww wow... swayam n sharon ke paas ..vapas dehradun me... 😛

Sometimes they just dont see anyone around... lol... but ppl can see them doing romance... well kind of .. ☺️

He was still gloomy n sad? Really?? ...

Yeah .. spicy rey.. me izz waiting for more masala n fun...😃

Loved the dialouges as always... his love sayings for her are itself a paradise..

rey can be a dialouge writer for movies even if he wants to quit acting.. or may be u can.. hehe.. see manu .. u've got so much talent 😎

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Sacchi bolun mereko realise hi nhi huya tha ki tey kahin gayab huya apatt ftom that gilm thing... par that was toh different nah...

Mereko yeh rey bhi apna rey hi laga.. ^_^

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Rey sharing his problem with Kria , bohat acha kiya...

He should have known k Kriya was his BFF before his wife i-e woh uski problems zaroor samjhe gi...

But yeh wala Rey bhi na Possessive hai theek hai But yeh jo tension mein rehta tha , didn't suit his personality 😉...

SwaRon back 😃..

I did miss this always teasing wali Sharon and Understanding wale Swayam Uncle 😆...

Kriya badmaashi karing , soch kar karni chahiye thi...

Bhaagti kese 😆...

Hmm...Kria ne acha tareeka dhoonda 'Old Rey' ko wapis laane ka 😉...

Taunt maro 😉 and a little bit more of assuring ...

Old Rey back , so glad 😃...

Mast story going 👍🏼...

I'm loving it ❤️

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Da story is going perfect

n for baby's name hmm

as boys name is wid R...rivaan n rey so dis time shud wid K

KIARA - Black haired one (Irish)

KHIRAD - Intellect ( love dis name)

Reyna - guess it means queen

Roya - vision or dream

Kripa - mercy,compassion or grace

Update Soon :)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

this chapter was fabulous... finally the old rey is back...
and kriya understand him so well and support... whichever u like keep a good name
there son like to name it to the baby... do continue soon and pm me

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Amazing update as usually...👏👏

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

As always amazing update...
U are one of the creative person and ur writing skils always inpressess me..
Kriya and neha's bonding was superb.
Swayam understood wat d were upto...
Finally old rey is back with hot romance...
Btw merry christmas!!

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

finally i have completed all the chapters...

and Rey has shared his problem...

and they are finally in Deharadoon...

update was real sweet romantic and just lovely...

you know Rey changed or not...

i just love this superstar Reyaansh Singhaniya,..

you just showed them and their characterization is just beautiful...

loved the update... (:

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

By now you should be knowing that you write exceptionally good.

And all I can describe about your write up is that they are beautifully penned,its sheer awesome, a pure bliss to have read it.

And they way you execute emotions with a lot many feelings.. the confusions.. friendship.. Its way to hard to describe it..

I am always left speechless after reading these updates.. Its like what do I say about this now..

I cannot be scribbling the same words again and again.. nor can I simply run away with a awesome commented..

But I love it..

especially wherein she knows she needs a bigger house but not as big as his mansion.. but then he puts up such a dramatic statement of wanting more kids and some more space to breath.. I just couldn't control my laugh..

And of course the end that hints of the Old Rey back.. suggests more fun in the upcoming updates :P

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Without much adieu, I will come to the update..

Coz I will again get lazy.. And then again I will close the tab...

It is an infinite loop...

So first of all... after how long I was able to get first comment...

*Whooppiiieee*

The update was absolutely as always delightful..

The Reyam talk you showed was much needed...

And lets face it... Though Rey claims he would have been there... And he wouldn't give a dime to world... But we all know that regret would have always been there...

The relationship wouldn't be there..

And let me say one thing.. maarna mat.. Rey not finding for 5 years initially.. I found it slightly weird... But your writing outweighed my apprehensions...

So when you brought this thing through Rey's prospective... Just Amazing.. And really well fabricated...

I really like the house thing.. When I read the innuendo.. I was like Rey would do it... but with Kria... ;)

But he reported to the authority... Responsible citizen I say...

But then... our KR toh straight like beloved jalebi.. They won't pass over the opportunity... Now would they? ;)

And I was so glad they didn't...

I really loved Sharon's possessiveness and anger... ^_^

And the little family moment you showed in Singhania household... Blissful...

The house you painted in imagination reminds me of those country houses... Amazingly shown...

All in all a lovely chapter as always..

You rock Lolluuu... :*

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago