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-Mitra thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE = Amaya] "The many dates I had pursued had begun with a different searching - a distraction named Shradha that refused to leave my mind those days. Today she - an unfinished seeking - was a definition of my past and in that way, a part of my present and my future too". --- I didn't understand this part [/QUOTE]

One word to clarify (and see if that helps): ShRadha ;)


PS: Yes, Riti is Rukmani.
TwilightStar_JP thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know la, can I call you that! :)

I feel so under knowledged about all that is there to the epic when I read your story!

Vishwa indeed is the whole runner of the show! He knows how to deploy his moves in just the right amount of movement!

Loved the whole update! Waiting for the other side of the coin!


Cheers
-Mitra thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is it La or Ia? what does it mean? How is it connected with my screen name - Mitra?

Scratch that - I guess you are referring to my old screen name- Lahari...😆 it was a duh! moment.
Edited by -Mitra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra



One word to clarify (and see if that helps): ShRadha ;)


PS: Yes, Riti is Rukmani.


Oh my! yes! forever Krishna's Radha! That was a brilliant stroke Hasini, I cracked my head thinking of all women with whom Krishna was associated but was pretty sure that there was no shradha...Once I read your comment, I sat back with a smile thinking how beautifully you have woven it into the story, one wouldn't easily connect it...but once u discover the surprise, you will be truly amazed and surprised!
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Posted: 12 years ago
she - an unfinished seeking - was a definition of my past and in that way, a part of my present and my future too".Now since i understood who is being described here, I got to tell that there is no other beautiful way to describe Radha-Krishna bond!

https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-frc3/295624_469517783102971_163663674_n.jpg
-(Radhamadhavam)

At sunset, on the river bank, Krishna
Loved her for the last time and left...

That night in her husband's arms, Radha felt
So dead that he asked, What is wrong,
Do you mind my kisses, love? and she said,
No, not at all, but thought, What is
It to the corpse if the maggots nip?

-Maggots by Kamala Das

https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/13893_485433041511445_717260851_n.jpg
Oh Madhava!! Dont take your eyes off me,
Let me live my life in the warmth of your breath.


Sorry the pic are not getting posted, its a painting by my best friend...


Edited by dreamymaya - 12 years ago
dreamymaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nanditha as Radha perfect! There is a melancholy look in Radha and yes this actress fits that bill
Riti and Subha I don't identify the faces..but they look familiar...
Subha - the girl in the pic, i can see she will mold into the character you have created precisely and accurately...there is something in that pic which defines her as Subha...may be that sparkle in eyes...
Riti - no wonder Vishwa is taken with her..she is a beauty! I guess beauty with brains kind!

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Posted: 12 years ago

"Not even that of a dying firecracker," he said shaking his head again with some effort to show resignation.--- Really Arjun? Why are you deflecting? What is that you are hiding??

Any amount of provocation or bribing or point blank questioning is not able to get any solid information from Arjun...so stubborn and resigned...why I wonder...

"And she approves your little scheme to have her meet Aditya?" --- Concerned are we? Or merely inquisitive???

"She doesn't have to know," I said and it was my turn to shrug now. "Like she didn't have to know she was meeting you last night." --- This is manipulation of trust Vishwa!!

"She hugged you at the restaurant in the open." Aha! He is a human who observes...

a biting harshness overemphasized his censure--- meaning?? I didn't get it..

"Anyone could see that she looks to you more than she asks of Dhri. You are more of a friend than anyone will be to her --- true!

"but I doubt she wants you to run her life. I'm beginning to question if she does like to leave you with the illusion that you sure do.""a punch indeed to Vishwa!

The idea was an interesting one to deliberate later----- I don't know the modern shyama much but from what I know-whether does she allow Vishwa that rein over her..of course she looks at him for guidance and trust his judgement more than hers but she is powerful to make her our decisions..she might be influenced by Vishwa but I believe she is the master of her own decision..at vulnerable moments she might go along with Vishwa's guidance... ..just rambling...Vishwa's extent of powers is yet to be revealed...,

"but that instant my tongue burned with the retort I'd wanted to offer all night long.

"Help me understand, Arnav,"--- Arjun's distance from Shyama after that over the board concern ???

"I'm not clear what you seem to have taken more offense to? Is it because I'm that friend she could hug without forethought? Or are you spurned because she tolerates my decisions to find her a groom?" ---- Lol! Vishwa gave back for all he got...and pokes where it hurts...he he...

"I'm afraid there are no right answers to the questions you ask." With a hand braced over his head, along with the hint of surrender in his voice, he sounded as though he'd given up already. ---- Coward! Come on Arjun, you can do better!!

"And what might that be?" he asked after a moment, as I opened the door.--- he he curious!!

Halted at the threshold, I gave him a knowing smile---- oh yes, I can see it!!

ambiguity was an essential construct in every gentleman's agreement with another----interesting thought!

Surely, not that of a firecracker - of this truth, we both knew.--- lol! I liked it...

Now, it was only left to find out what the other thought of the little spark in the depths of their denial.--- hmm...waiting!!

Note: To indulge you all, here are the other women in his life - but, I have no plans to bring them all into the story, except Subha for a little bit. --- Yes, I wait for Subha's role in this story...and can't wait to see Arjun come across the note..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Vishwa is toying with him and he knows it. This is why I don't think he responded the way that Vishwa anticipated. Through all the indifference he is claiming, he still brought the hug into the conversation. Indifferent much? I don't think so. I think he just resents being set up. It will be interesting to hear the other side now. I love the chapter from Vishwa's perspective - he sounds like someone who is very confident but who likes to tease, he likes to be in charge. But with another strong willed person like Arnav, it is hard to do this. Very interesting update of the date .. .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymaya

she - an unfinished seeking - was a definition of my past and in that way, a part of my present and my future too".Now since i understood who is being described here, I got to tell that there is no other beautiful way to describe Radha-Krishna bond!


https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-frc3/295624_469517783102971_163663674_n.jpg
-(Radhamadhavam)

At sunset, on the river bank, Krishna
Loved her for the last time and left...

That night in her husband's arms, Radha felt
So dead that he asked, What is wrong,
Do you mind my kisses, love? and she said,
No, not at all, but thought, What is
It to the corpse if the maggots nip?

-Maggots by Kamala Das

https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/13893_485433041511445_717260851_n.jpg
Oh Madhava!! Dont take your eyes off me,
Let me live my life in the warmth of your breath.


Sorry the pic are not getting posted, its a painting by my best friend...



What an exotic picture ... Love it ... ❤️


Just love the women that you have chosen for the various characters Hasini ...
Wish we could have made a movie out of it ... this is the best star caste ... ⭐️
and just want to tell you that I am obsessed with this thread ... 😳
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymaya

Nanditha as Radha perfect! There is a melancholy look in Radha and yes this actress fits that bill

Riti and Subha I don't identify the faces..but they look familiar...
Subha - the girl in the pic, i can see she will mold into the character you have created precisely and accurately...there is something in that pic which defines her as Subha...may be that sparkle in eyes...
Riti - no wonder Vishwa is taken with her..she is a beauty! I guess beauty with brains kind!


Riti is Yami Gautam from Vicky Donor and the other one I don't know ... 😃

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