ArHi TS: I'll follow you, I promise! Part2 Pg8 (completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
wow..its awesome
loved the first part
what is khushi's illness???
eagerly waiting for part 2
thanks for giving the link
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
wait whats wrong with her
so it seems he will tell her about his feelings
but can she reciprocate those
hmm sounds interesting cant wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
this part was fab!

But my only wish is that this whole TS doesn't comes out to be a sad one! I love Happy endings..

With her illness adding to the plot, i feel scared!

Rest i'll wait for the nxt part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
AWESOME UPDATE LOVED THE START AWESOME CONCEPT SO HE HAS LOVED HER FOR TWO YEARS THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: IPK007



What an intriguing start !!

Khushi is an adopted child who is indebted to her foster family and has some illness..:( I hope it's not anything serious or terminal..

And Arnav is a shrewd, pragmatic businessman who has been attracted to her for two years and has also been keeping an eye on her...He has also had her background checked and everything. Wonder what does he have in mind? And what's stopping him from approaching her?

Very well written chapter, you've built the suspense up very well..:)

Looking forward to the next !!


Sorry for this late unres :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
updated my comment on page 1:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow. this is really interesting.
Can't wait for part two.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
very nice...
waiting for part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awesome ts..
plz add me on ur buddy list and pm me when u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
What is this thing about Khushi being ill? Hope it is not something fatal.
And our Arnav here is sweet and love struck. I hope he goes and tells her how he feels.
Update the next part soon.

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