|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series (link to thread 2 added) - Page 50

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Posted: 11 years ago
finalllyyy i read it... Nd must say as ur others stories... It's more intrsting thn others wid a diff. Concept... I loved all parts... Esp. Kiara's character... She is sweet nd bubbly... Her nature is sumhow mature 1 too... She is indirectly trying to get them together...:D i jst loved it...:) nd one more thing... Sumtyms parents r harsh to us bt only for our benefit bt v'll relise this only later...:D this d fact in this world nd indirectly u portrayed this truth vry well... Sumtyms theirs decisions may wrong bt it's rare...nd w8evr they decide... They always abt our benefit...:D nd i truelly this ... Father dau nd now mommy dau bond too...:D they all 3 r adorable...:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
bt bt bt... Ur last updates frst line broke my heart... :'( 9 nov. ????? :o kaise hoga wait...:( bt u must be busy... So v'll wait...:D bt u also join d heart... By d last kiss in the update... ^_^ ...this is freaking awsummm storyy...:D i sooo much loved it...:) i want to read it more... :p nd u truelly expressed rey nd kriya behaviour eautiful... Full justice u have done to both the characters...:) continue asap...:) nd thanxxx 4 pm nd srry for being a big late lateef reader...:p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Twinkle🤗
missd u so much
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Such an amazing part yaar
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay I did miss three chapters of it.. but I read it now.. Sorry.. I just couldn't manage..

I loved the entire thing.. Seriously she is naive, she thought of Rajeev to be alive. And then her own deeds made her face the trouble.. I don't think what Rey did was any where wrong. She deserved it.

I love the next part, he apologized with a peck on her cheek 😳

PS: I might at times be late to review it, but I will definitely whenever I get the time..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww so rey was worried...

he is impulsive...

but kriya was also wrong...

and he make it up to her with a peck...😳

chalo kuch to progress hai...😃

loved the update mannu...

update soon... (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...
awesome...
loving the way story is proceeding...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kya mast story challing 😃...
KR kareeb kareeb coming , good going...
Rey k kehne par Kriya ne dress bhi change kar li 👍🏼...
Saath saath kafi enjoy 😉...
But then *Slap* ...
Insaan ko inna bhi gusse wala nai hona chahiye 🤔...

They have long way to go abhi , pata nai ek doosre ka kya karein gay 😆...

Phir uss thapar ki 'Marham Pati' bhi ache se ki 😉...

Loving the story ❤️...
N Shu-Kriy for the pms 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Woah thapar toh dia but den heal bhi kar dia...sweet start

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Part 11:



The dawn finally arrived with the sun spreading its revernd beams all around. Kriya stirred in her sleep as the sun rays fell on her. Soon she woke up, adjusting her vision. Her eyes fell on Kaira and Rey. She smiled on seeing the father-daughter duo. Both of them slept in the same manner with their lips slightly parted and looked cute. Pushing her thoughts aside, she got up from the bed carefully not disturbing their sleep. She opened one of her suitcases and took out Rajeev's photo that she had secretly brought against her mothers agitations of not taking it along.

"Good morning Raj." She said and kissed his picture.

Carefully placing it back, she stood up. As she stood up a huge photo hanging on the wall caught her attention. She immediately guessed that it was of Payal.

"She's beautiful." Kriya thought and entered the washroom.

She came out draped in a blue saree with black borders and with a little work on it. She went towards Kaira and Rey. She was confused whether to wake them or let them sleep. After pondering over her thoughts she decided to wake 'em up.

"Rey" She called out twice. But no use he was sleeping peacefully. She shaked him a bit. On sensing some disturbance Rey turned towards the other side unintentionally grabbing her hand along. Due to this she fell upon him and he woke up with a jerk.

"Uh, I was trying to wake you up but...Uh...I'm sorry."

"It's fine."

Kriya tried getting up but due to misbalance she fell back again. Inorder to support her balance he put his hand over her bare waist. At this touch both of them looked at each other. They felt different.

Once they got up, Kriya spoke. "You get ready I'll wake Kaira."

"Cool." Saying this he proceeded towards the washroom.

At the breakfast table, Kriya was feeding Kaira while Preeti and a few other relatives were having their breakfast. Just then Rey entered.

One of Rey's cousins said "Good going bro. Both you and bhabhi in matching attires...nicee..."

Everyone laughed this. It was then Rey and Kriya noticed each other. Both of them were wearing blue. They felt a bit embarrased.

"Kriya and Rey get your bags packed as both of you are leaving for Rome tonight for your honeymoon." Rey's dad informed them.

"Honeymoon!" Both of them exclaimed.

"But dad there's no need for this." Rey tried to reason.

"Yes dad." Kriya agreed with Rey.

"No ifs and buts. You guys are going and that's final. And Kaira baby sorry but yoy will not accompany them."

"But dada ji please.'

"Kaira don't you want you mommy daddy to spend some time with each other?" Preeti asked to which Kaira nodded a yes.

"Okay no problem. But you have to get me lots of gifts."

"Ofcourse they will."

Having no other option Kriya amd Rey had to agree. They wondered what this trip had in store for them.



Like and Review please.

Amazing update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
when yu continuing??
make it bigger next tym plzz :D

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