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Posted: 11 years ago
Wrong post..updating in next page
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Here's the next update. Most of you have complained regarding the length. Guys it's a drabble series and the length of the each part has to be short because that's the reason its called drabbles. Each of my updates comprises of 400-500 words.And please check the note below.


Part 8:



"Oh gosh." Kriya muttered as she sat on the bed completely exhausted after her engagement.


"What's wrong di? You look so tired."


"I am tired and all 'cause of Kaira."


"Kaira? What did she do?"


"She literally keeps trailing around me everywhere. Not even for a second she leaves me alone. I know she's excited to have a mother but that doesn't mean she eats up my personal space too. For lords sake I'm not only her mother. I have my own life too." She let out her frustration.


Both Smriti and her sister Shika heard this conversation. Smriti indicated Shikha to explain Kriya because if she tried to paraphrase her then surely a heated argument would take place. Moreover Kriya and Shikha shared a friendly bond than the aunt-niece bond.


"I know it's quite irritating at first but later you'll love this feeling." Shikha said entering the room. Sharon left the place giving them some privacy.


"Kaira has been deprived of mother's love and now when she's finally getting it, she make sure's not to leave a single second to miss it. Every woman in this world has to become a mother at least once in life time."


"I understand maasi. But every woman learns to be mother right from the time she has the knowledge of her baby developing within her. You can't expect a woman to be a pro mother directly and ask her to be a mother of a five year old kid. It's not that simple."


"Who said it's simple. Nothing's as easy as we think. If everything becomes easy and simple then our life would turn into a monotonous one. Give things sometime. They'll sort out on their own. All you need to do is have patience and adjust."


"You know what maasi, you're the best. I feel so good talking to you."


"And yeah next time when you have any problem discuss it with Preeti or Rey as we might not be there with you every time."


"I'll surely remember this. Anyways, it's getting late now. Night."


"Night beta." Saying this Shikha left the room.


On the other hand in the Singhaniya masion, Rey was running behind Kaira, trying to pacify her to go to sleep. But Kaira was in a completely different mode. She was enjoying troubling her father.


"Kaiara, princess enough. Daddy is tired now. Will you please stop this fun moment of yours and get back to the bed."


"Uff daddy, learn to be active."


"I'll learn that later but for now you have to go to sleep." Saying this, Rey picked her up and proceeded towards her room. He laid her on the bed and covered her with a blanket. Then he started narrating a bed time tale.


"Daddy your stories are so boring. I'll ask mommy to tell me stories at night."


"You can do that when your mommy comes here. As of now adjust with this story and sleep." Rey said a bit sternly tugging her to bed.





Like and review please. Don't forget to check the note below.
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note:

This note is regarding the likes and reviews. I'm highly disappointed with the number of reviews I get. I have no problem with likes though they differ from update to update. When nearly 70+ and 75+ people can like the update then it hardly takes a minute to drop your views regarding it. I know you guys must be busy. But if you can spare a second for liking it then you can surely spare a minute to review it too. You guys free to drop you suggestions and criticisms. One more thing that I've decided is that I'll be updating on alternate days rather than a daily basis.
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update...
it sooo new for kriya but i guess she will love being kaira's mother...
kiara is sooo sweet...
love her bond with rey...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one..
I can understand Kria's situation as she is not one to be grown with kids .
Krira i'm happy the child is enjoying..makes it sound cool

lets see what this marriage turns the bonds into
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am loving it
i really want kria n kiara to share a healthy bond
its super awesome
loved it
i m loving the pace of update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pheww!!! Abhi abhi 8 k 8 parts parhe ...
Superb story hai 😃...
Nice concept , Charcters bhi ache hain - Kiara toh at most 👍🏼...
Me loving the story ❤️...
Abhi tak mujhe woh scene bohat acha laga , where Kiara was defining a 'Step-Mother' ...

Now that i finally get time to comment , U put up this note of updating on alternte days 🤔...
Mujhe jesi bachi k saath Na-Insfi doing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Kiara excited with kriya
Loved the convo b/w Kriya n Shikha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Kriya's POV is also right but she just need to hav paitence...
Kara is a little girl...
I hope kriya ka yeh behaiviour do not create some probs later
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Posted: 11 years ago
Supb updates
read all udates in one go
love it very much
sory fir late comment

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