#2 ArShi FF: Love me, Hate me |Note P151|

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@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

In one word? This FF was F.U.N.⭐️

but me being me won't be able to stop at one word so bear with me.. yeah?

I absolutely loved and enjoyed this ff through and through. It was awesomeee...

You have a fun way of writing and i had this big wide 😃 on my face while reading the ff..I was angry at arnav for hurting khushi but to be honest i never really blamed him for telling her he would never love khushi.. I mean comeon he was a teenage guy only back thn.. Rather i gave a smirk thinking Arnav and khushi humesha sath rahenge so babua just wait and watch😉 And when arnav babua fell in love with khushi.. wht should I say.. I fell in love with him..😳

I loved khushi baas.😃 She grew up through the FF and still one could see her innocence, her love for others just as it was when she was a kid...🤗

One thing I really really liked about the ff that you gave importance to other characters as well as giving ample arshi parts⭐️

I liked D-uncle, kavita aunty, shyam , payash , NK but Rambo didi was awesome blossom..⭐️ too good...😃

and aman was another fun and special character for me.. When he called khushi bachhci at the parking lot after their talk abt la I awwes out loud🤗 *at 4 am in the morning. Probably not a very good thing to do whn ur parents alrdy think u r half mental😆*

and the way he kept an eye on arnav and took his revenge for hurting khushi..the whole update starting from aman's not so subtle actions, his convo with la while shaking arnav saying wakey wakey to arnav's assumption that aman was a sadistic who wanted to kill him..🤣🤣 Just too good.. Actually throughout the ff i had my rofl moments regularly..😆 Really entertaining ff..👏

PS. Thanks to nirmal1992 for giving me the link.. Vibha ILUD🤗

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

awesome FF !!! read it in one go.. loved it.. 😃

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

I started this story long back, but somehow, continue nahi kar payi...today I read it whole again...such a lovely story...ArShi childhood part is really adorable...with all the ups and downs...loved it...and their meeting agai...clearing all the doubts...progression of their relationship...misunderstanding...fight...make up...pani-puri...her confession...his gradual realization...confession...the kiss...and happily ever after...also Akash-Payal, Aman-Lavanya, NK, Anjali-Shyam...loved every characters here...fabulous story...

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

lovely story dear

n beautifully written

can u plzz pm me ur index, the link in ur siggy ain't working i guess

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

What do I say that you already not told ?

You weaved magic in the story . The simple and sweet story had a touch of innocence and had a fragrance of childhood love throughout.

All's well that ends well. Glad that you gave a happy ending to everyone and marked their importance and presence in the story.

The ending was adorable. Khushi in pigtails and salwar suits and the almost same dialogues and the same situation , running behind each other... Full Circle.

After reading the chapter in which Arnav told her that she can call her 'Annav' , it was like in each chapter I was expecting Khushi to call him that. But when it did not happen till the epilogue I was a little sad. But never had I expected that my sadness on that matter would be replaced by a full blown grin at the plan Khushi acted upto ! 😃

'None of us really change over time . We only become more fully what we truly are'

I relate the aforementioned sentence to Arnav . Arnav always had preferred Khushi , loved her company , protected her , supported her, cherished their friendship . He was too caught up in the feelings of infatuation and the first ever relationship which got him into the mess (which he realized was a mess 5 years later). The teenage hormones to be blamed there ! But the feelings and affection towards Khushi never faded in their separation period. Indeed the absence made the heart grow fonder and one thing led to another and the mighty fell too hard in love,,,

Somehow I feel Khushi is the star of the story. She lost her mother ,She lost her father , She underwent heartbreak , She sacrificed , She suffered , She lived in loneliness , She went through emotional turmoil and trust issues and yet She Loved and She spread Happiness to the people around her . Overshadowing her hurt and grief in a bid to avoid worry . And Yet she Loved everyone unconditionally ...

I admire the character portrayal of Kavita and Daven and Shashi. The supporting , understanding and guiding parents who always looked out for their children... My one of the favorite part of the story is when Shashi guides Khushi after the death of her father and makes her understand with the situation of the butterfly. That scene is so well written and heart warming conversation between a father and a daughter.

Loved all the couples' Love Story . Akash-Payal , Aman-Lavanya , Anjali-Shyam , NK-Kalindi , everyone..It was a pleasant fresher in the story

This story has developed a very warm feeling towards itself and made itself very special to me. It was a fabulous journey of 'Love Me , Hate Me'

I wish I was reading this story earlier but..Anyways I am glad I read this story.

Thanks an Infinity for giving such a fabulous story with a dose of everything from romance , drama , cheesiness and humor.

And again , Take A Bow , Dear Author .😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

A BIG HUG to everyone!! 🤗
Thank you!!

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

awesome story
just read in two hours

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

A very sweet and cute story. I loved it very much. Thanks for such a wonderful story. Keep up the nice work.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Also loved this story too!!! You just get me hooked and then I have to read the whole thing in one go!!! It's turning into an addiction I think! Many thanks

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#930

This is the sweet coming of age romance peppered with comic moments that made it different and unique from other FF's here on IF.

The youthfulness of your style of writing was fun yet the significance of friends and family in this tale is such a major part that I could feel the emotions bubbling.

I love the way the story began when they were young ... Your best friend as the love of your life specially appealed to me.

I was devastated for Khushi but I could understand Arnav ... When you are young, you are bound to take time to know what you want. Particularly guys take longer to understand these emotions. But his outburst broke Khushi's heart and for what?...because of some stupid fleeting crush.

But then, it made them both stronger, understand that they need the other to feel complete. Many a times, the separation does help to understand the other person's significance in our lives.

I really enjoyed your style of writing. very sweet, cute, loveable and young.

Great job :)

Cheers

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago